SEC24A deficiency lowers plasma cholesterol through reduced PCSK9 secretion

1) Although evidence is provided that PCSK9 is packaged in COPII vesicles using an in vitro COPII vesicle budding assay, the authors need to show a direct mechanistic link between SEC24A deficiency and PCSK9 secretion. This could be shown by knocking down SEC24A in the cells used in the COPII vesicle budding assay to determine if there is a selective reduction in PCSK9 trafficking. A more direct test would be to perform budding assay using mouse liver cytosol from WT versus Sec24a^-/- mice.

As suggested by the reviewers, we performed a new series of in vitro COPII reconstitution assays using cytosol prepared from rat hepatoma McA-RH777 cells in which SEC24A, SEC24B, or both were depleted by siRNA treatment. The deficient cytosols exhibited decreased activity in the generation of PCSK9-containing COPII vesicles, most marked in the SEC24A/B double knockdown experiments. These data have now been added as Figure 8d–f in the revised manuscript. A similar reduction in the efficiency of packaging of SEC22B (a SNARE protein) was observed (Figure 8e), however, LMAN1 packaging was not affected. PCSK9 and SEC22B may share a requirement for SEC24A/B whereas LMAN1 was shown as a non-selective COPII cargo. The LMAN1 result also demonstrates that the other COPII proteins were not depleted from the SEC24A/ B knockdown cytosol.

As suggested by the reviewers, we also attempted similar in vitro budding assays using mouse liver cytosol prepared from control and knockout mice. Unfortunately, both mouse liver cytosols failed to exhibit any activity in the COPII vesicle budding assay, even for the classic COPII cargos LMAN1 and SEC22. A similar lack-of-activity was observed using cytosols prepared from mouse brain. We hypothesize that these results reflect the loss of one or more key components during cytosol preparation from mouse tissues, or the presence in these preparations of an inhibitor to the budding reaction. Our anti-SEC24A antibody also failed to exhibit blocking activity in the budding assay. These data are included below:

Other mechanisms affecting LDLR levels should be ruled out. For example, are levels of the LDLR E3 ligase Idol altered in Sec24A knockout mice?

Based on the reviewers' suggestion, we examined IDOL protein levels by immunoblotting using 2 different anti-IDOL antibodies. No differences in IDOL were observed between liver samples prepared from SEC24A-deficient mouse or their wild type littermates. These data have been added to Figure 6c in the revised manuscript.

2) The quality of the PCSK9 blots on liver tissue do not permit assessment of the relative amounts of the full length versus cleaved PCSK9 (for example, see S Rashid et al. PNAS 2005). Even in the 293 cells stably expressing PCSK9, the mature form of the protein is not visible on immunoblotting due to the presence of a cross-reactive band. This problem could be avoided by using another anti-PCSK9 Ab.

As suggested by the reviewers, we obtained the PCSK9 antibody referenced above (courtesy of JD Horton, UT Southwestern Medical Center). Immunoblotting using this reagent demonstrated that both mature PCSK9 and pro-PCSK9 are increased in liver lysates from SEC24A-deficient mice compared to their wild-type littermate controls. These data have been added to Figure 7a in the revised manuscript.

3) The therapeutic potential of inactivating SEC24A should be de-emphasized. The suggestion that SEC24A may be a target for LDL lowering is premature, especially given the fact that there are phenotypic effects of inactivating Sec24A that are not due to a deficiency of PCSK9, including mild increases in RBC MCV and MCHC, and a >50% reduction in SCD1 mRNA. There are likely to be others.

This point is well taken. In the revised manuscript, we have substantially de-emphasized the potential of SEC24A as a therapeutic target. However, it is interesting to note that in the original report of the PCSK9 knockout mouse (S Rashid et al PNAS 2005), a >50% reduction in SCD1 mRNA was also observed, similar to what we observe in SEC24A-deficient mice.