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- Reviewing EditorMegan CareyChampalimaud Foundation, Lisbon, Portugal
- Senior EditorJoshua GoldUniversity of Pennsylvania, Philadelphia, United States of America
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
In this manuscript, Hinojosa and colleagues analysed the changes in V1 visual responses induced by locomotion in head-fixed mice using two-photon calcium imaging. The authors observe that locomotion strongly increases the visual responses of V1 excitatory neurons that exhibit sensitizing responses to visual stimuli. Also, there is an increased response in VIP interneurons, and to a lesser extent, PV interneurons and SST interneurons (non-significant). The authors used a model fitted with data presented in the manuscript, as well as previous knowledge on cortical connectivity among different neuron types. The model suggests that the major component of the increased responses during locomotion is an increase in excitatory drive from external inputs (feedforward, feedback and modulatory), most importantly onto VIP interneurons and excitatory neurons. However, the excitatory drive of local excitatory neurons onto other surrounding excitatory and inhibitory cells is reduced.
The manuscript is well presented and represents a valuable analysis of how locomotion modulates the activity of different subtypes of cortical neurons. However, major issues should be addressed to strengthen the results.
Major issues:
(1) Speed and mismatch between locomotion and visual stimulation.
The authors do not clearly describe the definition of locomotion versus the resting state. The speed should, by itself, have an impact on neuronal responses, especially at the onset of locomotion. Several published studies show that the mismatch between a visual stimulus and the speed of the animal induces specific responses in V1, both in excitatory and subtypes of inhibitory neurons. The authors should address these points upfront in the manuscript, since it is likely a major variable explaining their results
(2) Use of deconvolution with MLSpike.
Some results (Figure 2) exclusively depend on the deconvolution of calcium signals into spikes (since the initial peak is not seen in calcium transients). The authors should validate this result either with electrophysiological recordings or with the use of another deconvolution method (e.g. CASCADE), emphasising the limitations of this approach and the limitations of the time resolution of calcium imaging.
(3) The manuscript is centred around a specific increase in visual responses in sensitizing neurons during locomotion, both in the fraction of responsive neurons and response magnitudes.
It is hard to tell whether this difference is due to a greater scaling effect of locomotion, a difference in responses during the resting state, or both. The manuscript should further explore and discuss the differences in responses between sensitizing and depressing neurons, both during the resting state and locomotion. Adding metrics and direct comparisons of the magnitudes of fast responses, slow responses, and time integrals between sensitizing and depressing neurons in resting and locomotion states would help to clarify this. Same for fractions of responsive neurons of each type in each condition. E.g., the slow phase is harder to judge from the plots, but the DeltaF/F integral shown in Figure 1G seems to suggest the difference in response magnitude between sensitizing and depressing neurons is largest in locomotion state, rather than resting state. How do these integrals look for inferred firing rates shown in Figure 2?
(4) There is something counterintuitive about how the changes in inhibition onto sensitizing and depressing neurons during locomotion explain the reported activity changes.
Sensitizers receive reduced SST input and increased PV input during locomotion. If SSTs depress and PVs sensitize (and this is the main reason why sensitizers, which receive dominant input from SSTs sensitize, and vice-versa), how is it possible that this switch does not alter the sensitizing or depressing nature of these neurons' responses in locomotion? Are these changes insufficient to flip the dominant SST-PV drive? Figure 6D-E seems to show there is a flip, at least for sensitizers. How do authors explain this? Do authors think this is related to the narrowing of the adaptive index distribution shown in Figure 1C?
(5) Presentation of the experimental data and the model.
The manuscript introduces the results of interneuron recordings during the description of the model. Similarly, the results of optogenetic manipulations are presented inside the model's description. It would be clearer to present all experimental data first and introduce the model later, fitting it to all experimental evidence previously presented.
Reviewer #2 (Public review):
This is an interesting paper with important results. The authors, working in V1, have previously, in a 2022 paper, defined sensitizing and depressing excitatory (E) cells as those whose response increases or decreases, respectively, across the 10 seconds of showing a drifting grating stimulus. They showed that sensitizing E cells are dominantly inhibited by SST inhibitory cells, which are dominantly depressing, and that depressing E cells are dominantly inhibited by PV inhibitory cells, which are very largely sensitizing. It's been well established that locomotion greatly increases E-cell firing rates in V1 compared to rest, but much remains to be worked out as to the mechanism. Here, they find that locomotion increases the responses of the sensitizing E cells much more than depressing cells. They develop a model of changes in synaptic weights between rest and locomotion to account for the changes. One reason that sensitizers are increased more by locomotion than depressors is that PV cells, which more strongly inhibit depressors, have increased firing for locomotion, whereas SST cells, which more strongly inhibit sensitizers, don't change their firing rates with locomotion. However, in the mode,l a complex array of postulated changes in connection strengths is also involved.
I have, though, a number of concerns: with the model, with the lack of proper discussion of connection to some previous works, and with an overall unclear and confusing presentation and certain controls that should be done.
In the model, they postulate that synapses within the 6-cell-type network - sensitizing, intermediate, and depressing E cells, and PV, SST, and VIP I cells - and from three sources of external input to each of the six types all change between rest and locomotion (except that connections between the E cells don't depend on their types). There are a lot of degrees of freedom, and this makes interpretation of the results difficult. I would have liked to have seen more efforts to constrain the degrees of freedom. For example, there seems to be very little difference between the three E cell types in any of the three types of external input received. Why not constrain them all to get the same external input and see if it significantly affects model fit? Or what if synapses from the three types of external input are left unchanged, and only change their strengths between rest and locomotion? How well could this do? During optimization, why not constrain the changes between rest and locomotion, for example, by putting an L1 penalty on the changes or the relative changes, trying to force them to be sparse, and see whether there are roughly equally good fits? And then, if the main changes are in a small set of synapses, can the authors isolate changes to that small set and do roughly equally well? What about looking at the principal components of the weight changes across models, to isolate patterns of change that are most important?
In terms of comparing to previous works, when optogenetic manipulations of SST and PV are done to test various hypotheses, I would like to see some discussion of what is already known from the authors' 2022 paper and what they are adding or testing that wasn't known or tested from that paper. And Dipoppa et al (2018) also found weight changes to account for the difference between rest and locomotion. They were looking at a fixed point of responses of neurons across retinotopic space to stimuli of various sizes with only one E-cell type, whereas they are accounting for trajectories across time considering 3 E-cell subtypes but without variation in stimuli or retinotopic position of neurons, so the efforts are somewhat different, but still, it would be good to see a bit more discussion of what is in agreement or in contradiction in the conclusions.
In terms of presentation and controls, I have many concerns, which include:
(1) The main result is that sensitizers increase their responses with locomotion ~2X (for dF/F) or about 3.5X (for spikes) more than depressors. But there are other differences between sensitizers and depressors, for example sensitizers have smaller initial stimulus responses at rest, and depressors have larger. What if cells were divided into tertiles by initial stimulus response at rest? Would the authors see the same differences in the effects of locomotion? If so, can they establish whether the difference is really attached to the adaptation properties rather than to, for example, the initial responses, for example, by comparing the regression of response increase against AI vs the regression of response increase against initial resting response? And there might be other controls to be done for other features in which sensitizers and depressors differ.
(2) Lines 103 and following: the authors refer to a "second notable change" which is the narrower distribution of adaptive effects, but I think this is trivial. The adaptive index is AI=(R1-R2)/(R1+R2), where R1 is response 0.5-2.5s after stimulus onset and R2 over 8-10s. But if the change is additive, as suggested by the dF/F figures (and I believe the distributions of AI here are based on dF/F measurements) -- adding the same constant to R1 and R2 will shrink |AI| without changing the sign of AI. So this would seem to just be a signature of a change that is primarily additive rather than multiplicative.
Also, if the authors do decide that they are going to focus on spikes after showing the raw dF/F, then this analysis should be repeated for spikes.
(3) Figure 2, F is supposed to be D minus E, but it doesn't look like it. For example, the initial response under locomotion is very similar in sensitizers and depressors, so the initial difference in F should be small, but it's not; and at rest, depressors initially have larger responses than sensitizers, whereas later depressors have smaller responses than sensitizers, yet the difference at rest is positive at all times. Something seems wrong here.
Reviewer #3 (Public review):
This study aimed to understand the depressing and sensitizing effects of adaptation in mice visual cortex during different behavioral states: locomotion and stationary. There is an impressive characterisation of the responses in different cortical cell types and with different optogenetic manipulations to the inhibitory populations. These form a very interesting dataset to understand the effects of the state on the circuits and gain insight into the mechanisms. This data is then used to constrain a model of the responses. Unfortunately, the model appears to be too flexible, and it was difficult to interpret the insights gained from the different model fits.
Strengths:
The data is impressive. There is a characterisation of responses of PCs and VIP, SST and PV interneurons. Additionally, there is the characterisation of some responses to specific optogenetic manipulations, VIP inactivation, SST or PV activation or inactivation. These data will help develop a good insight into the system. The principle of using the optigenetic manipulations to constrain model parameters is very interesting.
Weaknesses:
Many of the analyses have some concerns in the methodology used, which we list in detail below. Further, the model used to gain insight into the mechanism appears overly complicated and seems hard to gain clear insights from.
Major concerns:
(1) Key concern is the usage of dF/F signals for all analyses, especially when comparing responses.
1a) Figure 1G: Comparison of sensitisers and depressors. It is important to consider what the baseline rates are when making these comparisons, especially when comparing the degree of effects between different cell types. For example, if baseline rates for sensitizers were overall higher, it would mean the difference in gain of response would be lower, and could affect the results in the opposite direction of what is claimed. One option to account for this would be to z-score the overall responses, using the same normalization for locomotion and rest. We also suggest plotting differences in sensitisers, intermediates, and depressors as a function of firing rate. Matching for firing rate across each PC categorization and calculating delta AI for each matched firing rate bin.
1b) Figure 2A-F: The above is an even more significant issue when it comes to estimating spiking rates. The methods do not state how dF/F is calculated. If these are based on using the pre-stim as the reference, the algorithms for spike rate used might not be appropriate if this were used. Using pre-stimulus referencing could result in the estimate going into the wrong range in the calculation of the spike rate.
1c) In both cases above, it could be a problem if baseline firing rates are different between cell types, or states (locomotion/stationary). The latter is established to have effects on many cell types measured, and so needs to be accounted for very carefully.
1d) It would be informative to see per-neuron comparison for adaptive indices during rest and locomotion states. This could be visualized using a scatter plot with AI-rest vs. AI-locomotion for Figures 1D- 1F and 2J- 2L.
1e) Are neurons more strongly modulated between locomotion and rest, also more likely to experience a shift in AI indices (i.e. delta AI). Is there a correlation between the change in firing rate between behavioral states and Delta AI (Loco-Rest)? If so, is this present for all neuron subtypes (e.g. VIP, SST, and PV)?
1f) Optogenetic inhibition of VIP neurons on average abolished the slow depressive effects of adaptation in SST (Figure 3). The strength and prevalence of this effect are unclear. Perhaps one can perform a bootstrap control and opto AI indices and calculate whether AI was significantly reduced following optogenetics inhibition, and if so, on average, how likely was this to occur for the recorded SST neurons? This is important in knowing that the average effects (Figure 3D) aren't driven by a portion of SST neurons, especially as this is later used to confirm the region of parameter space and affects the subsequent results in Figure 4.
(2) Statistics for the effects. There is a mention of Liner mixed models, but no information is given on the actual models being used and tested. This is particularly for the case of Figure 1G, where there is a composition of effect sizes between different populations. What precise significance test is being used? Are the stats on paired cells when considering locomotion and rest?
(3) Model parameters: It is acknowledged that there is a large range of parameters that can model the responses effectively, up to 11% of initial conditions. At 9000 initial conditions, this is around 1000. The parameter estimates are then considered as the mean of each parameter. This seems like a strange choice for a few different reasons:
3a) A mean solution might not be one of the solutions. Let's say the parameters range over a large dimensional space. They could occupy non-overlapping / discontinuous subspaces. In that case, the mean parameters do not necessarily fall within the solution subspaces. Therefore, this reduction to means might not be valid.
3b) Compare distributions rather than means. There are multiple distributions of parameters between conditions. All stats should be on the comparison of distributions rather than just the means.
(4) Visualizing weight matrices: It is very challenging to interpret the weight matrices. Furthermore, it appears that the stationary and locomotion conditions fit independently, and given the large parameter spaces, it is even harder to interpret. Can the fitting instead be done by fitting on one and using those at the initial conditions for the other state? Figure 7 shows an initiative cartoon, but it is not clear how the matrices in Figures 5 and 6 lead to the summary shown in Figure 7. It is also not clear why the connections between inhibitory neurons are not shown in Figure 7. One option is to perhaps run some kind of dimensionality deduction on the parameter space to better interpret the data. When showing deltaWeights, was the model initialised with 'Rest' weights and allowed to change? It is not obvious what the difference is between 'relative change in connection weights' and 'relative change in synaptic weights'.This needs to be clarified.
4a) Model parameters were reduced differently for locomotion and rest (Figure 4). We suggest evaluating the results for locomotion and rest using the same chi-square value of 3 for both behavioral states (at least in controls).
