Peer review process
Not revised: This Reviewed Preprint includes the authors’ original preprint (without revision), an eLife assessment, public reviews, and a provisional response from the authors.
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- Reviewing EditorAmmie KalanUniversity of Victoria, Victoria, Canada
- Senior EditorSergio RasmannUniversity of Neuchâtel, Neuchâtel, Switzerland
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
Summary:
The authors test specific but related hypotheses regarding anti-predator responses of wild marmoset groups to predator and human playback sounds triggered to play via a motion sensor on camera-trap devices. The differential responses they observe to human noises and natural predator sounds are interesting, but greater inferences are limited due to a lack of clarity in the methods and analyses.
Strengths:
The authors create an excellent experimental design using a customised ABR system for testing the behavioural responses of wild, social-living, tiny, arboreal primates: pygmy marmosets. Much of the work is described with great transparency, and figures and tables are helpful in facilitating this.
Weaknesses:
The current study requires improvement in three areas, in my opinion, to permit readers to better evaluate the validity and importance of these results.
(1) Improve the framing of the paper:
The current title and justification for this study appear to point to a lack of previous studies testing specific hypotheses (line 51/52: "ABRs have not been applied to hypothesis testing". I find this a rather strange argument to make, given that a quick read through of other ABR papers, cited by the authors (e.g., Kasper et al., 2025, Epperly et al., 2021), are testing predictions set by ecological theory in the cascading effects of predator-prey dynamics. To me, even if these are not explicitly stating "X hypothesis" in their paper, they still appear to be studies guided by implicit hypotheses. To say that previous work with ABR did not test hypotheses is presumptuous, in my opinion. The entire paper would be much better appreciated if the authors could reframe the study for its importance to arboreal mammal/ tropical ecology, anthropogenic effects, and so on. Similarly, the authors should avoid use of phrasing such as "this study is the first direct test of .... " (lines 59/60) and should emphasize the true significance of their work, beyond it being the 'first' of something.
Similarly, on line 87, "demonstrating that the ABR system can be used to generate data for hypothesis testing" should be removed, as firstly sufficient sample size for any study depends on a number of study-specific parameters, and the authors do not actually demonstrate this in my opinion, given that many of their models end up suffering from singular fit. This is due to a lack of sample size, and also because they do not actually do any type of power analysis or something similar to demonstrate that they actually assessed sample size. So again, my suggestion is to reframe the paper to focus on the behavioural ecology and conservation-related impacts rather than this emphasis on methodology.
(2) Methods:
The authors generally do a great job providing sufficient detail on the ABR system and how each experiment was designed. Still, there is room for improvement, as I was confused a number of times. I also would recommend that the authors include a limitations section somewhere which considers the drawbacks of their study, in particular the lack of individual identity for behavioural responses of marmosets (especially given that they used focals, it seems), the groups being in close vicinity of one another/potentially related (?), the specific stimuli used, etc.
Points of confusion for me included what the control was for Experiment 1. Line 93 - 70 videos without playbacks are used (Table 1), but it is not clear how these videos were selected, and it is not a suitable control comparison for assessing the difference in behaviour associated with playbacks (playbacks with control sounds are). At most, these videos will give basal rates of behaviour (like vocalizations, etc.), but then it is not clear why these '70 videos' and how they were chosen to avoid bias. So, for example, in line 105 the authors write that focals were more likely to flee when hearing playback stimuli than in these "control" videos, but this is not convincing. If there was no fleeing after playback of control sounds (cicadas, macaws) - i.e., the true control in this experiment - then this should be the comparison that is emphasized.
Can the authors also clarify how they considered/assessed the sound playback level (normally done in Decibels) and if they did not normalize the sound level across the playback stimuli, why not, and what potential effect this could have on the results (i.e., something else to consider for the limitations section)?
Something else not discussed is the rate of exposure to predator and human noise for these wild monkeys. Are these rates within normal range/expectation for these monkeys? Thinking here of the number of videos captured for each group presumably means exposure to a playback unless 'control' videos were videos where no playback sound was emitted (see question above re: control videos). There were a lot more unsuccessful videos than successful ones that the authors could use, so trying to understand the potential impacts of this (see question re: trial/video # below as well).
(3) Analysis:
A few things are unclear and need more explanation in the way the authors conducted their analyses, although they do well to detail all steps of their statistical methods, which was great.
For assessing model fit, it is not clear what exactly was assessed with the 'performance package' line 467, as the authors do not go on to provide us with any results of the performance/fit. Instead, they tell us that the models did not fit well, with no parameter provided (e.g. lines 481-488). I'm familiar with overdispersion as a parameter that is reported for Poisson models (that does not seem to be provided here). Or by looking at changes in model estimates if one datapoint (and/or one group) is removed after another (with replacement, so keeps sample size static). On line 468/469, it says that model fit was assessed via conditional R2; could the authors provide a citation for this practice, and then provide the R2 parameter for the other models that were used/included in the end?
Also, please standardize how the GLMM results are presented. There should be the estimate, SE, Z or t, then p value. (line 99, 137).
Given the high rates of exposure to playbacks, I think the authors should test trial # (or video #) for a potential habituation effect, with earlier captures more likely to draw stronger responses than later video captures for each group.
Reviewer #2 (Public review):
Summary:
The article describes an interesting methodology to test hypotheses about the impact of anthropogenic noise on a small arboreal primate, the pygmy marmoset. The authors used a motion-triggered combination of camera traps and speakers to play back control sounds, avian predator calls, and anthropogenic noise to test the risk-disturbance hypothesis and the distracted prey hypothesis. In addition, the authors implemented a technique that is usually used for larger mammals and has not been used before for smaller arboreal animals. The authors are careful in their interpretation of the results and do not favor one hypothesis over the other. The authors also elaborate extensively in their discussion on how to improve this kind of data collection in the future.
Strengths:
This study provides a method for rapid data collection while minimizing observer impact. The sample size is comparatively large for a wild animal in a reserve, given the overall observation time. The article also benefits from a solid analysis of the data.
Weaknesses:
Though the authors tested two contrasting hypotheses, the discussion would benefit from more detail on the ecological relevance of the observed behaviors.