High-resolution structures of kinesin on microtubules provide a basis for nucleotide-gated force-generation

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Reviewer #1:

This work confirms the results of the recent Moores' paper at somewhat higher resolution and goes on to provide some interesting new insights into the nucleotide-dependent interaction of kinesin-1 with MTs. The data are excellent but I think the text can be improved; shorter would surely be better.

1) It is a significant achievement to have obtained 6A resolution in the kinesin subunits, which are notoriously mobile relative to the MT. Thus the crystal structure of ATP-kinesin complexed with a tubulin heterodimer has now been proved to adequately represent kinesin bound to a MT. This suggests that the crystal structure of apo-kinesin complexed with tubulin will be equally relevant and avoid the daunting task of pushing the EM data to even higher resolution.

2) I am not convinced by the claim that kinesin has diverged from the basic G protein mechanism. The loops around the empty active site may well be firmly closed in the frozen state that is being observed but they are probably free to open and close due to thermal fluctuations at working temperatures. Obviously, this freedom is lost when tilting of the domain clamps the surfaces together and the site becomes truly closed. Presumably the domain is free to tilt except when ATP is present, holding the surfaces together or when the neck linker is wedged in position.

3) The clashing of N255 is interesting whatever one's thoughts about the mechanism.

4) The discussion about how the dimer is coordinated is very convincing.

Reviewer #2:

This paper presents results of a cryo-electron microscopy study of kinesin-decorated microtubules in two nucleotide states. It advances our understanding of the mechanics of kinesin by providing improved data on the conformations in these states and insights on the transitions between them. This paper follows the recent publication of a closely related study by Atherton et al. in eLife a few weeks ago. These papers used essentially the same techniques and reach nearly the same resolution, which sets the limit to how much can be interpreted from the EM data. This is an incremental improvement in resolution over previously published results, but in both cases new features and mechanisms can be identified from the resultant density maps and differences among them. The nominal resolution in Atherton et al is reported as 6-7 Å and in the current work 5-6 Å. Although both sets of density maps were filtered to around 6 Å, and the maps are presented at different threshold levels, it does appear that Shang et al do have sufficiently better resolution to justify their confidence in interpreting some important loop conformations. The authors were also able to do a more extensive fitting of atomic models based on their maps. The two papers do come to some of the same conclusions, but differ in significant ways with regard to the loops and the core beta sheet, and these differences have substantial impact of mechanistic models. Shang et al suggests a more complicated domain structure than has been seen before, with identification of a “polymer cleft” in the microtubule interface region. The beta sheet appears to be strained rather than just twisted, which may relate to the mystery of where the energy of ATP hydrolysis goes. Perhaps most importantly, the new maps indicate that movement of the P-loop is more significant than opening or closing of the switch-I/switch-II region for nucleotide binding and release.

Altogether this is a substantive and interesting advance that appears to answer a number of puzzles about kinesin's action. The conclusions are well supported by the experimental results, which include mutation of the critical N255 residue as well as application of molecular dynamics in building the atomic models. The instability of the simulations over long times could be a concern, but does not bother me in the present context. The correspondence with myosin activity in this paper extends ideas presented earlier by Dr. Sindelar and provides further support for the functional models presented here, although further work at higher resolution will be required to validate these proposals. In terms of validation tests suggested recently by Henderson and others, I am comfortable that this work meets standards of acceptance.