NPAS1-ARNT and NPAS3-ARNT crystal structures implicate the bHLH-PAS family as multi-ligand binding transcription factors

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Summary:

This manuscript reports a structural and biochemical characterization of two heterodimeric bHLH-PAS domain proteins, NPAS1-ARNT and NPAS3-ARNT, that probes differences in domain-domain arrangements among different subclasses of PAS proteins and identifies broad conservation of ligand-binding pockets that appear capable of binding a broad array of ligands. The structure of NPAS3-ARNT bound to the hypoxia response element (HRE) recognized by NPAS1 establishes the specificity and provides mechanistic insight into DNA binding by NPAS3. Mutations in NPAS1 and NPAS3 underlie varies psychiatric disordered, making these potential targets of drug discovery. A comparison of these structures with a previous structure of related family members, CLOCK and BMAL1, reveals that the latter may also contain previously unnoticed ligand-binding pockets, thereby suggesting that bHLH-PAS proteins may be considered a new class of ligand-regulated transcription factors. The in vivo relevance of these structures is supported by transcriptional reporter assays and protein co-immunoprecipitation studies, where mutations at domain-domain interfaces identified in the structures disrupt the heterodimeric protein-protein interactions. Furthermore, the differential effects of the mutations in ARNT on its interactions with the additional bHLH-PAS family members SIM1, NPAS4 and AHR provide insight into its function as a common co-receptor.

Essential revisions:

1) Data shown in Figure 3D is based on HRE-luciferase reporters. This data should be replaced with validated NPAS/ARNT consensi from one or more of the promoters/enhancers of bona fide NPAS target genes.

2) Mutations found in ARNT that disrupt SIM1 and NPAS4 dimerization should be introduced into ARNT2, and the IPs repeated. ARNT2 is their physiological partner, and this should be confirmed in the 293T assays, not simply inferred from sequence alignment.

3) While the authors draw a comparison between bHLH-PAS proteins and nuclear receptors as ligand binding transcription factors, the conformational changes induced by ligand binding in PAS domains appear subtle, raising questions on how endogenous and/or pharmacologic ligands targeting these pockets affect transcriptional activity. Some discussion on potential mechanisms would improve the manuscript.