Epigenetic regulation of hematopoiesis by DNA methylation

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There were no major concerns with the paper but the following need to be addressed in a revised version.1) In Figure 1, the authors suggest that dnmt3bb.1 is regulated by runx and notch and is reduced in HSPCs lacking runx or notch. However, this conclusion is not well supported because HSPCs themselves are largely absent in these mutants. While the authors want to place dnmt3bb.1 in a genetic hierarchy, these conclusions are not a major focus of the paper and should be minimized. The authors should at least clarify that loss of dnmt3bb.1 expression in runx1 MO, runx mutants, and mib mutants is likely because the HSPCs themselves are gone.

We thank the reviewers for these insightful comments and for the opportunity to clarify our results. We have modified our text as suggested by the reviewers to note that loss of dnmt3b.1 expression in runx1 MO, runx mutants, and mib mutants likely reflects at least in part the loss of HSPC cells:

We have changed “HSPC-specific expression of Dnmt3bb.1 is regulated by notch1 and runx1” to “Dnmt3bb.1 is expressed in HSPC downstream from notch1 and runx1”. (Abstract)

We have changed “These results show that dnmt3bb.1 is expressed by developing HSPCs and that its expression is dependent on the established Notch-Runx1 pathway for HSPC specification” to “These results show that dnmt3bb.1 is expressed by developing HSPCs downstream from the established Notch-Runx1 pathway for HSPC specification, and that its expression is lost when HSPC are not properly specified”. (Results)

We have added: “Since runx1 and mind bomb mutant embryos have strongly reduced numbers of HSPCs, reduced dnmt3bb.1 expression may reflect reduced HSPC numbers rather than loss of direct gene regulation”. (Discussion)

2) In Figure 6l, are the transplanted cells in this experiment gfp-sorted for bulk blastula cells from injected embryos?

For the experiments in Figure 6 we transplanted approximately 20-25 dissociated but unsorted cells from 5 hpf heat-shocked donor embryos into each 48 hpf host embryo by intravenous injection. We did attempt to perform cell sorting of GFP positive blastula cells or enrichment of these cells by manual dissection before transplanting them into host embryos, but we were able to retrieve very few healthy cells for transplantation after these procedures and nearly all cells that we were able to transplant disappeared from the host embryos within 24 hrs, presumably due to cell death (the large blastula cells appear to be very fragile and easily damaged by manipulation).

The rationale for this experiment is unclear because the authors claim it is an assay of HSPC differentiation. However, the early embryonic cells that were transplanted could not have developed into mature HSPCs.

We agree with the reviewers that this is not really an assay of HSPC differentiation, but merely examining whether dnmt3bb.1 overexpression in blastula cells promotes one specific functional property of HSPC, their ability to home to the thymus. We have reworded our text and discussion accordingly.

We changed “To further investigate the ability of dnmt3bb.1 to drive HSPC differentiation in naive blastula cells…” to “To further investigate the ability of dnmt3bb.1 to promote functional properties of HSPC in naive blastula cells…” (Results).

We changed “Transplanted cells from dnmt3bb.1-overexpressing blastulae similarly preferentially ‘home’ to the thymus and kidney (data not shown), suggesting that dnmt3bb.1-overexpressing cells are behaving analogously to the previously reported CD41+ HSPCs” to “Transplanted cells from dnmt3bb.1-overexpressing blastulae also preferentially ‘home’ to the thymus and to the kidney (data not shown), suggesting that these dnmt3bb.1-overexpressing cells are recapitulating at least one functional property of HSPCs”. (Discussion)

The number of homing cells is very low and only just reaches significance compared to controls.

Since we were not able to specifically FACS sort or dissect out healthy GFP-positive blastula cells for transplantation (see above), to increase the significance of our results we performed several additional rounds of transplantation using our whole embryo cell dissociation protocol, counting the number of cells localizing to host thymus. We present the new combined data in Figure 6q with revised numbers and a new lower p value (p < 0.001). The requested details regarding the replicates of experiments performed, numbers of embryos analyzed, etc. have been added to the Methods section.

We should also note that the counts of cells homing to the thymus carried out in Figure 6q do not take into account the hosts in the gfp control or dnmt3bb.1-gfp transplants that did not have cells in the thymus. In fact there were nearly twice as many host animals that received cells in the thymus in the dnmt3bb.1-gfp transplants (57%) compared to the gfp control transplants (29%). If this is taken into account, the significance of our results is even higher, but we decided not to include the “zero” class in our counts in Figure 6q in order to be conservative in our interpretation of these experiments.

How many replicates were quantified? If the transplanted cells are differentiated HSPCs then you would also expect to find them in the CHT and kidney at 5 dpf. Does the appearance in the thymus suggest a lymphoid bias?

We examined both thymus and kidney and were able to observe contribution of transplanted cells to both organs, however we chose to perform quantitative measurement of cell contribution only to the thymus because of technical difficulties that made it extremely challenging to accurately measure and/or image cell contribution to the kidney – in particular very high autofluorescence in the adjacent tissues and yolk cell that made observation of individual cells difficult in the kidney. We did not want to provide quantitative data that we did not feel 100% confident about. At this point we do not believe that there is a lymphoid bias to the contribution of these cells, although a rigorous quantitative exploration of this would be needed to draw any more definitive conclusions.