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Not revised: This Reviewed Preprint includes the authors’ original preprint (without revision), an eLife assessment, public reviews, and a provisional response from the authors.
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- Reviewing EditorJean DaunizeauInserm, Paris, France
- Senior EditorChristian BüchelUniversity Medical Center Hamburg-Eppendorf, Hamburg, Germany
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
Summary:
Using sequences of short videos to elicit emotional changes in participants, Malamud & Huys demonstrate how a brief, controlled emotion regulation intervention (distancing) can effectively alter subsequent emotion ratings. The authors employ latent state-space models to capture the trajectories of emotion ratings, leveraging tools from control theory to quantify the intervention's impact on emotion dynamics.
Strengths:
The experiment is well-designed and tailored to the computational modeling approach advanced in the paper. It also relies on a selection of stimuli that were previously validated. Within the constraints of a controlled experiment, the intervention successfully implements a relatively common tool of psychotherapeutic treatment, ensuring its clinical relevance.
The computational modeling is grounded in the well-established framework of dynamical systems and control theory. This foundation offers a conceptually clear formalization along with powerful quantification tools that go beyond previous more data-driven approaches.
Overall, the study presents a coherent approach that bridges concepts from clinical psychology and computational theories, providing a timely stepping stone toward advancing quantified, evidence-based psychological interventions targetting emotion control.
Weaknesses:
A primary limitation of this study, acknowledged by the authors, is its reliance on self-reports of participants' emotional states. Although considerable effort was made to minimize expectation effects, further research is needed to confirm that the observed behavioral changes reflect genuine alterations in emotional states. Additionally, the generalizability of the findings to long-term remediation strategies remains an open question.
Second, the statistical analysis, particularly the computational approach, sometimes lacks sufficient detail and refinement. While I will not elaborate on specific points here, one notable issue is the interpretation of the intrinsic matrix (A). The model-free analysis reveals correlations between emotions at a given time or within an emotional state across time points. However, it does not provide evidence to support lagged interactions across states that would justify non-diagonal elements in A. The other result concerning the dynamics matrix only highlights a trend in the dominant eigenvalue, which is difficult to interpret in isolation. The absence of a statistically significant group x intervention interaction furthermore makes this finding a little compelling. This weakens the study's conclusions about the importance of intrinsic dynamics, as claimed in the title.
Finally, to avoid potential misunderstandings of their work, the authors should be more careful about their use of terms pertaining to the control theory and take the time to properly define them. For example, the "controllability" of emotional states can either denote that those states are more changeable (control theory definition), or, conversely, more tightly regulated (common interpretation, as used in the abstract). This is true for numerous terms (stability, sensitivity, Gramian, etc.) for which no clear definition nor references are provided. Readers unfamiliar with the framework of control theory will likely be at a loss without more guidance.
Reviewer #2 (Public review):
Summary:
In this well-conceived and timely study, the authors assess the controllability of emotions in a quantitative way using the framework of control theory. They use a controlled distancing intervention halfway through an emotion rating task where emotion-inducing short videos from a validated database are shown and find that the intervention enables a better controllability of externally induced emotions in the experimental group.
Strengths:
It is a highly original idea to address the external controllability of emotions using the formal framework of control theory. It is also a very propitious approach to take what could be called a 'micro-therapeutic' perspective which looks at the immediate effect of an intervention instead of the 'macro-therapeutic' mid- or long-term effect of a whole course of therapy.
Weaknesses:
Acquiring data online inevitably gives rise to selection and self-selection effects. This needs to be acknowledged clearly. Exacerbating this, participant remuneration seems low at an amount below the minimum or living wage in Western countries (do the authors know where their participants came from?).
Another concern is that the intervention does not simply take place before the second block begins but is ongoing during the whole of the second block in that it is integrated into the phrasing of the task on each trial. It is therefore somewhat misleading to speak of a period 'after the intervention', and it would have been interesting to assess the effect of this by including a third group where the phrasing does not change, but the floating leaves intervention takes place.
As mentioned in the Limitations section, observation noise was assumed and not estimated. While this is understandable in this case, the effect of this assumption could have been assessed by simulation with varying levels of observation (and process) noise.
Relatedly, the reliance on formal model comparison is unfortunate since the outcome of such comparisons is easily influenced by slight changes to assumptions such as noise levels. An alternative approach would have been to develop a favoured model based on its suitability to address the research question and its ability, established by simulation, to distill relevant changes of behaviour into reliable parameter estimates.
The statistical analyses clearly show the limitations of classical statistical testing with highly complex models of the kind the authors (commendably) use. Hunting for statistically significant interactions in a multivariate repeated-measures design relying on inputs from time series-derived point estimates is a difficult proposition. While the authors make the best of the bad situation they create by using null-hypothesis significance testing, a more promising approach would have been to estimate parameters using a sampler like Stan or PyMC and then draw conclusions based on posterior predictive simulations.
Reviewer #3 (Public review):
Summary:
The manuscript takes a dynamical systems perspective on emotion regulation, meaning that rather than a simplistic model conceptualising regulation as applying to a single emotion (e.g. regulation of sadness), emotion regulation could cause a shift in the dynamics of a whole system of emotions (which are linked mathematically to one another). This builds on the idea that there are 'attractor states' of emotions between which people transition, governed by both the system's intrinsic characteristics (e.g. temporal autocorrelation of a particular emotion/person) and external driving forces (having a stressful week). Conceptually this is a very useful advance because it is very unlikely that emotions are elicited (or reduced) singly, without affecting other emotions. This paper is a timely implementation of these ideas in the context of psychotherapeutic intervention, distancing, which participants were trained (randomised) to perform while watching emotion-inducing videos.
The authors' main conclusion is that distancing both stabilises specific emotional patterns and reduces the impact of external video clips. I would consider these results strong and believable, and to have the potential to impact models of emotion regulation as well as the field's broader views on the mechanisms of psychological therapies.
Strengths:
This paper has very many strengths: I would especially note the authors' very-well-matched active control condition and the robustness of their model comparison approach. One feature of the authors' approach is that they explicitly add noise - not what you typically see in an emotion time-series analysis - which allows participants to make errors in their own subjective ratings (a reasonable thing to assume); this noise can then be smoothed during filtering. In their model comparison approach, they explicitly test whether a true dynamical system explains emotion change/emotion regulation effect on emotions - demonstrating that both intrinsic dynamics and external inputs were needed to explain subjective emotion. Powerfully, they also used this approach to test the differential effects of the treatment groups (see below).
The main result seems quite robust statistically. Verifying the effects of the distancing intervention on emotion, the authors found an interaction between time (pre- to post-intervention) and intervention group (distancing vs. relaxation) suggesting that distancing (but not relaxation) reduced ratings of almost all emotions. Participants allocated to the distancing intervention also showed decreased variability of emotion ratings compared to those in the relaxation intervention (though note this interaction was not significant).
Using a model comparison approach, the authors then demonstrated that whilst the control group was best explained by a model that did not change its dynamics of emotions, the active intervention (distancing) group was best explained by a model that captured both changing emotion dynamics and a changing input weights (influence of the videos) - results confirmed in follow-up analyses. This is convincing evidence that emotion regulation strategies may specifically affect the dynamics of emotions - both their relationships to one another and their susceptibility to changes evoked by external influences.
The authors also perform analyses that suggest their result is not attributable to a demand effect (finding that participants were quicker during the control intervention, which one would expect if they had already decided how to respond in advance of the emotion question). I personally also think a demand effect is unlikely given the robustness of their control intervention (which participants would be just as likely to interpret as mental health-enhancing training as distancing), and I am convinced by the notion that demand effects would be unlikely to elicit their more specific effects on the dynamic quality of emotions.
Weaknesses:
An interesting but perhaps at present slightly confusing aspect of their described results relates to the 'controllability' of emotions, which they define as their susceptibility to external inputs. Readers should note this definition is (as I understand it) quite distinct from, and sometimes even orthogonal to, concepts of emotional control in the emotion literature, which refer to intentional control of emotions (by emotion regulation strategies such as distancing). The authors also use this second meaning in the discussion. Because of the centrality of control/controllability (in both meanings) to this paper, at present it is key for readers to bear these dual meanings in mind for juxtaposed results that distancing "reduces controllability" while causing "enhanced emotional control".
As above the authors use an active control - a relaxation intervention - which is extremely closely matched with their active intervention (and a major strength). However, there was an additional difference between the groups (as I currently understand it): "in the group allocated to the distancing intervention, the phrasing of the question about their feelings in the second video block reminded participants about the intervention, stating: "You observed your emotions and let them pass like the leaves floating by on the stream." I do wonder if the effects of distancing also have been partially driven by some degree of reappraisal (considered a separate emotion regulation strategy) since this reminder might have evoked retrospective changes in ratings.
Not necessarily a weakness, but an unanswered question is exactly how distancing is producing these effects. As the authors point out, there is a possibility that eye-movement avoidance of the more emotionally salient aspects of scenes could be changing participants' exposure to the emotions somewhat. Not discussed by the authors, but possibly relevant, is the literature on differences between emotion types on oculomotor avoidance, which could have contributed to differential effects on different emotions.