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Revised: This Reviewed Preprint has been revised by the authors in response to the previous round of peer review; the eLife assessment and the public reviews have been updated where necessary by the editors and peer reviewers.
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- Reviewing EditorEsteban BeckwithInstituto de Investigación en Biomedicina de Buenos Aires (IBioBA) - CONICET, Buenos Aires, Argentina
- Senior EditorK VijayRaghavanNational Centre for Biological Sciences, Tata Institute of Fundamental Research, Bangalore, India
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
[Editors' note: this version has been assessed by the Reviewing Editor without further input from the original reviewers. The authors have considered and discussed the comments raised in the previous round of review.]
Summary:
The authors aim to use state-of-the art behaviour, imaging and connectome techniques to identify the neural interaction between sleep and long-term memory consolidation in the PAM-DPM circuits, a well-known dopaminergic pathway within Drosophila Mushroom Body.
Strengths:
The investigation follows a logical strategy to collect huge dataset of sleep, appetitive memory and live imaging. The authors identified and showed that activation of a PAM subset: alpha-1 reduces sleep quality and memory consolidation in a starvation dependant manner. The author also convincingly demonstrated the corresponding neuronal responses of DPM neurons following PAM alpha-1 activation, and the positive role of DPM neural activity in sleep and memory consolidation. Moreover, the new data provide TRIC-LUC provided better temporal resolution of neural activity correlates for PAMalpha1-DPM inhibition. Importantly, the author demonstrated that memory loss derived from PAM alpha 1 activation can be partly restored by ectopic sleep enhancement via feeding THIP at the memory consolidation period after training.
Weaknesses:
Although the revised version carries arguments to satisfy the reviewers' concern, the writing is now less cohesive. Crucially an explanation however remains required for the following experimental contradiction: the central observation of the study indicates that PAM alpha1 activation cause DPM inhibition which disrupt sleep and memory consolidation. Therefore, one would expect a reduced PAMalpha1 and increased DPM activities after memory training, but the authors found the opposite is true from now enhanced TRIC-LUC dataset. The authors indicate this data reinforce the inhibitory nature of PAM-alph1-DPM, but it does not explain why such a reduced DPM activity is observed after training.
Reviewer #2 (Public review):
Summary:
Sleep plays a critical role in memory consolidation, but the neural mechanisms underlying this relationship remain incompletely understood. The authors examined a specific subset of PAM dopaminergic neurons, PAM-α1, and DPM neurons in Drosophila. These neurons have previously been implicated in memory, and DPM neurons have also been linked to sleep. The study explores whether this circuit provides a mechanistic link between sleep and memory consolidation.
Strengths:
The authors report several novel findings. Brief activation or inhibition of PAM-α1 neurons, or brief inhibition of DPM neurons during the first few hours after training, impairs 24-hour LTM. Notably, these brief manipulations disrupt sleep for many hours afterward, particularly during the night. The authors further show that perturbation of PAM-α1 and DPM neurons impairs sleep and appetitive memory consolidation under starvation conditions, and that pharmacological sleep induction during the night rescues the LTM defects. Together, these findings suggest that PAM-α1 and DPM neurons are involved in sleep regulation and LTM consolidation under starvation. These are important observations that advance our understanding of the circuits regulating sleep and memory consolidation.
Weaknesses:
Some claims require additional evidence or clarification.
(1) Previous studies linking impaired memory to reduced sleep have primarily examined conditions involving severe sleep deprivation. In contrast, this manuscript argues that relatively modest decreases in total sleep, accompanied by sleep fragmentation, are sufficient to impair memory consolidation. It remains unclear whether sleep fragmentation of this magnitude is itself critical for LTM consolidation. An independent method for inducing comparably mild sleep loss and fragmentation would be needed to directly test this interpretation.
(2) It is unclear why both activation and inactivation of PAM-α1 neurons produce similar effects on sleep and memory. In addition, MB299B-labeled neurons exert stronger effects on memory than MB043B-labeled neurons, whereas MB043B-labeled neurons have stronger effects on sleep. If sleep disruption is the primary driver of impaired memory consolidation, a stronger correspondence between the sleep and memory phenotypes might be expected. The authors speculate that MB043B may affect sleep through non-PAM neurons, but without identifying the relevant neurons, this remains speculative.
(3) The complex schematic model (Fig. 12), with parallel circuits and unidentified neuronal groups, underscores the difficulty of interpreting the current data. In the "less activity" arm of the model, distinct circuits are proposed to regulate sleep and LTM, respectively, and DPM neurons are not included. This makes it difficult to reconcile the model with the central claim that the PAM-α1-to-DPM microcircuit links sleep and LTM consolidation.
(4) The TRIC-LUC reporter system is not ideal for resolving dynamic changes in neuronal activity. Activity-dependent Ca²⁺ signaling must first reconstitute the TRIC transcriptional system, which then drives luciferase transcription, translation, and accumulation. The original characterization of TRIC indicates that TRIC signals accumulate and decay over several hours. Thus, the kinetics of the TRIC-LUC reporter should be interpreted cautiously, particularly when inferring transient or precisely timed changes in neuronal activity.
(5) Including data from training under fed conditions would provide a more complete understanding of state-dependent neural activity and would help distinguish starvation-specific effects from more general circuit mechanisms.
Reviewer #3 (Public review):
Summary:
Understanding the neural circuits that link sleep and memory remains a fundamental challenge in neuroscience. In this study, Lin Yan and colleagues investigate how dopamine signaling in Drosophila regulates long-term memory (LTM) formation in the context of sleep. They identify a specific microcircuit between protocerebral anterior medial dopamine neurons (PAM-DANs) and dorsal paired medial (GABAergic DPM) neurons that modulates memory consolidation. Their findings suggest that disrupting the basal activity of PAM-α1 neurons during early consolidation impairs LTM, with particularly pronounced effects under starvation conditions. Notably, sleep fragmentation caused by this disruption can be pharmacologically rescued, restoring LTM. These results provide compelling evidence how dopamine signaling plays a crucial role in linking sleep and memory, offering new insights into the underlying mechanisms.
Strength:
This study presents a well-executed investigation into sleep-memory interactions, utilizing a combination of connectomics, behavioral assays, functional imaging, and pharmacological manipulations. The authors convincingly demonstrate that the PAM-α1 and DPM circuit interact, highlighting a potential mechanism by which sleep influences memory consolidation. The anatomical and functional dissection of this circuit is of high interest to the field, and the study's integration of sleep and memory processes contributes significantly to our understanding of the role of dopamine in cognitive functions. Additional experiments investigating the contribution of MBON-α1 to the circuit, connectomic analysis together with a dissection of dopamine receptor function further strengthen the proposed circuit motif and its biological relevance.
Weaknesses:
While the study is well designed, presents compelling findings and has been further strengthened by additional experiments, some aspects remain unclear. The role of DPM neurons in memory consolidation seems not yet fully resolved, as different genetic approaches yield variable results. Furthermore, some manipulations impair memory without affecting sleep fragmentation - or vice versa, suggesting that the observed memory deficits cannot be explained solely by impaired sleep-dependent consolidation. It would also have been interesting to discuss potential mechanisms by which dopamine receptor-mediated cAMP signaling could lead to a reduction in Ca²⁺ signals. I am confident that these questions can be addressed in future studies.
Conclusion:
Overall, this study provides valuable new insights into how sleep and dopaminergic circuits interact to regulate memory consolidation in Drosophila and may reveal general principles underlying the neural regulation of memory.