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Revised: This Reviewed Preprint has been revised by the authors in response to the previous round of peer review; the eLife assessment and the public reviews have been updated where necessary by the editors and peer reviewers.
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- Reviewing EditorAlicia IzquierdoUniversity of California, Los Angeles, Los Angeles, United States of America
- Senior EditorJoshua GoldUniversity of Pennsylvania, Philadelphia, United States of America
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
Huang et al. examined ACC response during a novel discrimination-avoid task. The authors concluded that ACC neurons primarily encode post-action variables over extended periods, reflecting the animal's preceding actions rather than the outcomes or values of those actions. The authors have made considerable revision to address the raised the concerns. However, it appears that some important issues remain unresolved.
To what extent ACC neurons encode post action content remain as a major concern. This may be at least partially attributed by the analysis methods. If I understand it correctly, the authors compared pre- vs post-event neural activity and looked for significant changed. By default, this is to look for post-event changes, rather than pre-event. As a result, it would lead to the conclusion 'Our study also reveals that ACC neurons play a limited role in encoding pre-action variables associated with decision-making or planning, as evidenced by their minimal responses to auditory cues and the modest activity changes prior to shuttle initiation'.
To determine whether ACC encode pre-action variables or planning, different time windows should be used in the analysis.
Reviewer #2 (Public review):
Summary:
Huang et al recorded anterior cingulate cortex activity in mice while they performed a shuttle escape task. The task utilized two auditory cues, each of which informed the mice to stay or escape depending on which side they were on, and incorrect responses were punished by shock administration. Analyses focused on ACC neurons that fired when mice crossed the shuttle box in either direction (A-->B or B-->A), coined "action state", or when mice crossed in one direction but not the other, coined "action content". The authors characterized these populations, and ACC firing changes mostly occurred around the time of shuttle crossing. This work will likely be of broad interest to those who are interested in neocortical neurophysiology broadly, anterior cingulate cortex specifically, and their contributions to learning about actions. The task is well-designed and provides a nice background for neurophysiological recordings. The authors leveraged these strengths in characterizing the neural populations that fire to shuttle crossings in both directions vs one direction.
Strengths:
The factorial design nicely controls for sensory coding and value coding, since the same stimulus can signal different actions and values.
The figures are well presented, labeled, and easy to read.
Additional analyses, such as the 2.5/7.5s windows and place-field analysis, are nice to see and indicate that the authors were careful in their neural analyses.
The n-trial + 1 analysis where ACC activity was higher on trials that preceded correct responses is a nice addition, since it shows that ACC activity predicts future behavior, well before it happens.
The authors identified ACC neurons that fire to shuttle crossings in one direction or to crossings in both directions. This is very clear in the spike rasters and population scaled color images. While other factors such as place fields, sensory input, and their integration can account for this activity, the authors discuss this and provide additional supplemental analyses.
Reviewer #3 (Public review):
Summary:
The authors record from the ACC during a task in which animals must switch contexts to avoid shock as instructed by a cue. As expected, they find neurons that encode context, with some encoding of actions prior to the context, and encoding of neurons post-action. The primary novelty is dynamic encoding of action-outcome in a discrimination-avoidance domain, while this is traditionally done using operant methods.
Comments on revised version:
I appreciate subsequent responses to my comments and other reviewers. My comments are addressed, and at this point, I think readers can judge the work appropriately in context.