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Not revised: This Reviewed Preprint includes the authors’ original preprint (without revision), an eLife assessment, public reviews, and a provisional response from the authors.
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- Reviewing EditorTihana JovanicNeuro-PSI, UMR-9197, CNRS, UPSaclay, Saclay, France
- Senior EditorSonia SenTata Institute for Genetics and Society, Bangalore, India
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
Summary:
Charonitakis and co-authors characterize dishabituation in adult flies, where they use olfactory habituation to octanol, then dishabituate the flies with disruptions of electric shock or yeast odors. They systematically investigate the neurotransmitters and neural circuits involved in dishabituation and figure out a lot about how this process works in the brain, as an independent circuit. I like the paper, and I like the very structured approach to figuring out the problem.
Strengths:
The introduction nicely sets the stage for the work presented, bringing in knowledge from other organisms and motivating the study.
The results section lays out a logical set of experiments, using a common set of behavioral assays in many flies exposed to thermogenetic or optogenetic manipulation. The paper systematically figures out the necessity and/or sufficiency of specific brain regions and neurotransmitters, culminating in a new understanding of how the important process of dishabituation works.
I like the bar graph representation for the data throughout, with the helpful icons - if a paper figures are going to be 90% bar graphs, it helps when they are super clear like this! And I like how all the parts build up to the conclusion in the last figure, nicely summarizing the thorough characterization of dishabituation.
Weaknesses:
There are no major concerns, but some material could be added for clarity and to make the work more accessible to a more general scientific audience. A figure clearly showing the habituation protocol and the use of the dishabituators would be a good addition, even if the procedure has been done before and is cited. There can always be readers who are seeing this for the first time.
It would also be nice to comment on other ways dishabituation can happen (for example, when the stimulus is removed for a short time and returns) and what their time scales are.
And more generally, the paper could perhaps improve by making a stronger case for why the results are important not just for flies but for neuroscience in general.
Reviewer #2 (Public review):
This is an interesting study in Drosophila comparing potentially differential requirements for subsets of Kenyon Cells (KCs) and Dopaminergic neurons (DANS) in olfactory dishabituation driven by either a novel odor ("homosensory") or footshock ("heterosensory). The authors measure olfactory aversion to Octanol (OCT) in a T-maze, induce olfactory habituation with a 4-minute prior exposure to OCT, and use either brief yeast odor (YO) or footshock (FS) to achieve dishabituation. The major observation that YO-mediated dishabituation is mediated by reward-activated DANs (PAM cluster), while FS-mediated dishabituation is mediated by punishment-activated PPL-DANs is generally solid and convincing. Also convincing are experiments showing the involvement of KCs in the pathway for YO and FS-induced dishabituation, and the argument that KCs drive DAN activation that causes dishabituation, though not experimentally shown, is more than reasonable. The work is significant because, as the authors take pains to point out, circuits and pathways for dishabituation have been very lightly studied, and clear identification of dopaminergic neuron subsets in dishabituation achieved by different means represents unique and interesting progress.
However, the claim that this represents a fundamental difference between homosensory and heterosensory pathways for dishabituation is overstated. The introductory section does not adequately present current broad models for habituation and dishabituation. There are many different time scales, even for Drosophila olfactory habituation. These, as well as potential underlying mechanistic differences, need to be acknowledged; any claim should be specifically qualified for the time scales being studied here. Additionally, there are several unclear, vague, and inaccurate sections and statements. A more careful, precise, and considered presentation of current views, as well as more measured claims of the impact of the findings, would substantially enhance my enthusiasm.
Reviewer #3 (Public review):
Summary:
In this manuscript, Charonitakis, Pasadaki et al. investigated the neural circuits underlying homosensory/within-modal and heterosensory/cross-modal dishabituation of the olfactory avoidance response in Drosophila. Taking advantage of the accessible and sophisticated gene expression manipulation tools in the flies, this study traced neural pathways underlying response facilitation caused by different types of sensory stimuli and revealed both distinct and convergent neural components underlying these different forms of behavioral plasticity. The study first demonstrated that olfactory habituation of the octanol avoidance response can be facilitated by either a different odor (homosensory stimulus) or a foot shock (heterosensory stimulus). Then, the flies' nervous system was manipulated with gene expression tools to identify key neural components involved in mediating the behavioral facilitation caused by different types of sensory stimuli. It was found that different sensory stimuli are input into different parts of the nervous system, and signals converge in the mushroom bodies to generate response facilitation. It was also found that these facilitatory pathways are different from the olfactory habituation pathway in the lateral horns.
Strengths:
The authors took full advantage of the advanced genetic tools in flies and performed a series of experiments to pinpoint neural components in each pathway.
Weaknesses:
The key issue is that the main concepts of this manuscript appear to be based on a misunderstanding/misinterpretation of the literature. As the authors set out to settle the debate "whether the novel dishabituating stimulus elicits sensitization of the habituated circuits, or it engages distinct neuronal routes to bypass habituation reinstating the naïve response", it seems that the authors based their investigation on the premise that "sensitization" is mediated by a facilitatory process within the S-R pathway, and "dishabituation" by a facilitatory process outside the S-R pathway. This is not the status quo in the field, particularly with the prevailing theory like the Dual-Process Theory.
The original version of Dual-Process Theory (Groves and Thompson 1970, but also see Thompson 2008, Neurobiol Learn Mem) already hypothesized that habituation happens within the specific S-R pathway, and sensitization occurs separately in an "organism-wide" state system that modulates the output of all S-R pathways. Dishabituation is recognized by the Dual-Process Theory as sensitization (organism-wide facilitation) manifested on top of existing habituation (depressed S-R pathway). This notion has been supported by a wide range of studies, including cat spinal cord reflex (e.g. Spencer et al. 1966) and work in Aplysia on heterosynaptic facilitation for both sensitization and dishabituation. Therefore, simply showing that the newly identified facilitatory pathways are outside the S-R habituation pathway is insufficient to demonstrate dishabituation.
As behavioral facilitation of a habituated response can be achieved by dishabituating (specific recovery of the S-R pathway) and/or superimposed sensitizing (organism-wide) processes, dishabituation and sensitization of this olfactory response must be first dissociated; however, the study provided no evidence for the dissociation. Without this piece of evidence, the claim of this paper that the newly identified pathways mediate dishabituation is not fully supported.
The literature review of this manuscript has some discrepancies. In the introduction, the authors wrote "initial studies in Aplysia were consistent with the "dual-process theory" (Groves and Thompson 1979), where response recovery due to dishabituation appeared to result from sensitization superimposed on habituation, thus driving reversal of the attenuated response (Carew, Castellucci et al. 1971, Hochner, Klein et al. 1986, Marcus, Nolen et al. 1988, Ghirardi, Braha et al. 1992, Cohen, Kaplan et al. 1997, Antonov, Kandel et al. 1999, Hawkins, Cohen et al. 2006)." Hochner 1986 and Marcus 1988 in fact indicated otherwise. Hochner 1986 suggests that dishabituation and sensitization involve different molecular processes, while Marcus 1988 showed that dishabituation and sensitization have different behavioral characteristics. Therefore, the authors' statement is not supported by the cited literature.