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- Reviewing EditorTihana JovanicNeuro-PSI, UMR-9197, CNRS, UPSaclay, Saclay, France
- Senior EditorAlbert CardonaUniversity of Cambridge, Cambridge, United Kingdom
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
Summary:
Syed et al. investigate the circuit underpinnings for leg grooming in the fruit fly. They identify two populations of local interneurons in the right front leg neuromere of ventral nerve cord, i.e. 62 13A neurons and 64 13B neurons. Hierarchical clustering analysis identifies each 10 morphological classes for both populations. Connectome analysis reveals their circuit interactions: these GABAergic interneurons provide synaptic inhibition either between the two subpopulations, i.e. 13B onto 13A, or among each other, i.e. 13As onto other 13As, and/or onto leg motoneurons, i.e. 13As and 13Bs onto leg motoneurons. Interestingly, 13A interneurons fall into two categories with one providing inhibition onto a broad group of motoneurons, being called "generalists", while others project to few motoneurons only, being called "specialists". Optogenetic activation and silencing of both subsets strongly effects leg grooming. As well activating or silencing subpopulations, i.e. 3 to 6 elements of the 13A and 13B groups has marked effects on leg grooming, including frequency and joint positions and even interrupting leg grooming. The authors present a computational model with the four circuit motifs found, i.e. feed-forward inhibition, disinhibition, reciprocal inhibition and redundant inhibition. This model can reproduce relevant aspects of the grooming behavior.
Strengths:
The authors succeeded in providing evidence for neural circuits interacting by means of synaptic inhibition to play an important role in the generation of a fast rhythmic insect motor behavior, i.e. grooming. Two populations of local interneurons in the fruit fly VNC comprise four inhibitory circuit motifs of neural action and interaction: feed-forward inhibition, disinhibition, reciprocal inhibition and redundant inhibition. Connectome analysis identifies the similarities and differences between individual members of the two interneuron populations. Modulating the activity of small subsets of these interneuron populations markedly affects generation of the motor behavior thereby exemplifying their important role for generating grooming. The authors carefully discuss strengths and limitations of their approaches and place their findings into the broader context of motor control.
Weaknesses:
Effects of modulating activity in the interneuron populations by means of optogenetics were conducted in the so-called closed-loop condition. This does not allow to differentiate between direct and secondary effects of the experimental modification in neural activity, as feedforward and feedback effects cannot be disentangled. To do so open loop experiments, e.g. in deafferented conditions, would be important. Given that many members of the two populations of interneurons do not show one, but two or more circuit motifs, it remains to be disentangled which role the individual circuit motif plays in the generation of the motor behavior in intact animals.
Comments on revisions:
The careful revision of the manuscript improved the clarity of presentation substantially.
Reviewer #2 (Public review):
Summary:
This manuscript by Syed et al. presents a detailed investigation of inhibitory interneurons, specifically from the 13A and 13B hemilineages, which contribute to the generation of rhythmic leg movements underlying grooming behavior in Drosophila. After performing a detailed connectomic analysis, which offers novel insights into the organization of premotor inhibitory circuits, the authors build on this anatomical framework by performing optogenetic perturbation experiments to functionally test predictions derived from the connectome. Finally, they integrate these findings into a computational model that links anatomical connectivity with behavior, offering a systems-level view of how inhibitory circuits may contribute to grooming pattern generation.
Strengths:
(1) Performing an extensive and detailed connectomic analysis, which offers novel insights into the organization of premotor inhibitory circuits.
(2) Making sense of the largely uncharacterized 13A/13B nerve cord circuitry by combining connectomics and optogenetics is very impressive and will lay the foundation for future experiments in this field.
(3) Testing the predictions from experiments using a simplified and elegant model.
Weaknesses:
(1) In Figure 4-figure supplement 1, the inclusion of walking assays in dusted flies is problematic, as these flies are already strongly biased toward grooming behavior and rarely walk. To assess how 13A neuron activation influences walking, such experiments should be conducted in undusted flies under baseline locomotor conditions.
(2) Regarding Fig 5: The 70ms on/off stimulation with a slow opsin seems problematic. CsChrimson off kinetics are slow and unlikely to cause actual activity changes in the desired neurons with the temporal precision the authors are suggesting they get. Regardless, it is amazing the authors get the behavior! It would still be important for authors to mention the optogentics caveat, and potentially supplement the data with stimulation at different frequencies, or using faster opsins like ChrimsonR.
Overall, I think the strengths outweigh the weaknesses, and I consider this a timely and comprehensive addition to the field.
Reviewer #3 (Public review):
Summary:
The authors set out to determine how GABAergic inhibitory premotor circuits contribute to the rhythmic alternation of leg flexion and extension during Drosophila grooming. To do this, they first mapped the ~120 13A and 13B hemilineage inhibitory neurons in the prothoracic segment of the VNC and clustered them by morphology and synaptic partners. They then tested the contribution of these cells to flexion and extension using optogenetic activation and inhibition and kinematic analyses of limb joints. Finally, they produced a computational model representing an abstract version of the circuit to determine how the connectivity identified in EM might relate to functional output. The study makes important contributions to the literature.
The authors have identified an interesting question and use a strong set of complementary tools to address it:
They analysed serial‐section TEM data to obtain reconstructions of every 13A and 13B neuron in the prothoracic segment. They manually proofread over 60 13A neurons and 64 13B neurons, then used automated synapse detection to build detailed connectivity maps and cluster neurons into functional motifs.
They used optogenetic tools with a range of genetic driver lines in freely behaving flies to test the contribution of subsets of 13A and 13B neurons.
They used a connectome-constrained computational model to determine how the mapped connectivity relates to the rhythmic output of the behavior.
Author response:
The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
Summary:
Syed et al. investigate the circuit underpinnings for leg grooming in the fruit fly. They identify two populations of local interneurons in the right front leg neuromere of ventral nerve cord, i.e. 62 13A neurons and 64 13B neurons. Hierarchical clustering analysis identifies 10 morphological classes for both populations. Connectome analysis reveals their circuit interactions: these GABAergic interneurons provide synaptic inhibition either between the two subpopulations, i.e., 13B onto 13A, or among each other, i.e., 13As onto other 13As, and/or onto leg motoneurons, i.e., 13As and 13Bs onto leg motoneurons. Interestingly, 13A interneurons fall into two categories, with one providing inhibition onto a broad group of motoneurons, being called "generalists", while others project to a few motoneurons only, being called "specialists". Optogenetic activation and silencing of both subsets strongly affect leg grooming. As well aas ctivating or silencing subpopulations, i.e., 3 to 6 elements of the 13A and 13B groups, has marked effects on leg grooming, including frequency and joint positions, and even interrupting leg grooming. The authors present a computational model with the four circuit motifs found, i.e., feed-forward inhibition, disinhibition, reciprocal inhibition, and redundant inhibition. This model can reproduce relevant aspects of the grooming behavior.
Strengths:
The authors succeeded in providing evidence for neural circuits interacting by means of synaptic inhibition to play an important role in the generation of a fast rhythmic insect motor behavior, i.e., grooming. Two populations of local interneurons in the fruit fly VNC comprise four inhibitory circuit motifs of neural action and interaction: feed-forward inhibition, disinhibition, reciprocal inhibition, and redundant inhibition. Connectome analysis identifies the similarities and differences between individual members of the two interneuron populations. Modulating the activity of small subsets of these interneuron populations markedly affects the generation of the motor behavior, thereby exemplifying their important role in generating grooming.
We thank the reviewer for their thoughtful and constructive evaluation of our work.
Weaknesses:
Effects of modulating activity in the interneuron populations by means of optogenetics were conducted in the so-called closed-loop condition. This does not allow for differentiation between direct and secondary effects of the experimental modification in neural activity, as feedforward and feedback effects cannot be disentangled. To do so, open loop experiments, e.g., in deafferented conditions, would be important. Given that many members of the two populations of interneurons do not show one, but two or more circuit motifs, it remains to be disentangled which role the individual circuit motif plays in the generation of the motor behavior in intact animals.
Our optogenetic experiments show a role for 13A/B neurons in grooming leg movements – in an intact sensorimotor system - but we cannot yet differentiate between central and reafferent contributions. Activation of 13As or 13Bs disinhibits motor neurons and that is sufficient to induce walking/grooming. Therefore, we can show a role for the disinhibition motif.
Proprioceptive feedback from leg movements could certainly affect the function of these reciprocal inhibition circuits. Given the synapses we observe between leg proprioceptors and 13A neurons, we think this is likely.
Our previous work (Ravbar et al 2021) showed that grooming rhythms in dusted flies persist when sensory feedback is reduced, indicating that central control is possible. In those experiments, we used dust to stimulate grooming and optogenetic manipulation to broadly silence sensory feedback. We cannot do the same here because we do not yet have reagents to separately activate sparse subsets of inhibitory neurons while silencing specific proprioceptive neurons. More importantly, globally silencing proprioceptors would produce pleiotropic effects and severely impair baseline coordination, making it difficult to distinguish whether observed changes reflect disrupted rhythm generation or secondary consequences of impaired sensory input. Therefore, the reviewer is correct – we do not know whether the effects we observe are feedforward (central), feedback sensory, or both. We have included this in the revised results and discussion section to describe these possibilities and the limits of our current findings.
Additionally, we have used a computational model to test the role of each motif separately and we show that in the results.
Reviewer #2 (Public review):
Summary:
This manuscript by Syed et al. presents a detailed investigation of inhibitory interneurons, specifically from the 13A and 13B hemilineages, which contribute to the generation of rhythmic leg movements underlying grooming behavior in Drosophila. After performing a detailed connectomic analysis, which offers novel insights into the organization of premotor inhibitory circuits, the authors build on this anatomical framework by performing optogenetic perturbation experiments to functionally test predictions derived from the connectome. Finally, they integrate these findings into a computational model that links anatomical connectivity with behavior, offering a systems-level view of how inhibitory circuits may contribute to grooming pattern generation.
Strengths:
(1) Performing an extensive and detailed connectomic analysis, which offers novel insights into the organization of premotor inhibitory circuits.
(2) Making sense of the largely uncharacterized 13A/13B nerve cord circuitry by combining connectomics and optogenetics is very impressive and will lay the foundation for future experiments in this field.
(3) Testing the predictions from experiments using a simplified and elegant model.
We thank the reviewer for their thoughtful and encouraging evaluation of our work.
Weaknesses:
(1) In Figure 4, while the authors report statistically significant shifts in both proximal inter-leg distance and movement frequency across conditions, the distributions largely overlap, and only in Panel K (13B silencing) is there a noticeable deviation from the expected 7-8 Hz grooming frequency. Could the authors clarify whether these changes truly reflect disruption of the grooming rhythm?
We reanalyzed the dataset with Linear Mixed Models. We find significant differences in mean frequencies upon silencing these neurons but not upon activation. The experimental groups are also significantly more variable. We revised these panels with updated analysis. We think these data do support our interpretation that the grooming rhythms are disrupted.
More importantly, all this data would make the most sense if it were performed in undusted flies (with controls) as is done in the next figure.
In our assay conditions, undusted flies groom infrequently. We used undusted flies for some optogenetic activation experiments, where the neuron activation triggers behavior initiation, but we chose to analyze the effect of silencing inhibitory neurons in dusted flies because dust reliably activates mechanosensory neurons and elicits robust grooming behavior enabling us to assess how manipulation of 13A/B neurons alters grooming rhythmicity and leg coordination.
(2) In Figure 4-Figure Supplement 1, the inclusion of walking assays in dusted flies is problematic, as these flies are already strongly biased toward grooming behavior and rarely walk. To assess how 13A neuron activation influences walking, such experiments should be conducted in undusted flies under baseline locomotor conditions.
We agree that there are better ways to assay potential contributions of 13A/13B neurons to walking. We intended to focus on how normal activity in these inhibitory neurons affects coordination during grooming, and we included walking because we observed it in our optogenetic experiments and because it also involves rhythmic leg movements. The walking data is reported in a supplementary figure because we think this merits further study with assays designed to quantify walking specifically. We will make these goals clearer in the revised manuscript and we are happy to share our reagents with other research groups more equipped to analyze walking differences.
(3) For broader lines targeting six or more 13A neurons, the authors provide specific predictions about expected behavioral effects-e.g., that activation should bias the limb toward flexion and silencing should bias toward extension based on connectivity to motor neurons. Yet, when using the more restricted line labeling only two 13A neurons (Figure 4 - Figure Supplement 2), no such prediction is made. The authors report disrupted grooming but do not specify whether the disruption is expected to bias the movement toward flexion or extension, nor do they discuss the muscle target. This is a missed opportunity to apply the same level of mechanistic reasoning that was used for broader manipulations.
Because we cannot unambiguously identify one of the neurons from our sparsest 13A splitGAL4 lines in FANC, we cannot say with certainty which motor neurons they target. That limits the accuracy of any functional predictions.
(4) Regarding Figure 5: The 70ms on/off stimulation with a slow opsin seems problematic. CsChrimson off kinetics are slow and unlikely to cause actual activity changes in the desired neurons with the temporal precision the authors are suggesting they get. Regardless, it is amazing that the authors get the behavior! It would still be important for the authors to mention the optogenetics caveat, and potentially supplement the data with stimulation at different frequencies, or using faster opsins like ChrimsonR.
We were also intrigued by the behavioral consequences of activating these inhibitory neurons with CsChrimson. We appreciate the reviewer’s point that CsChrimson’s slow off-kinetics limit precise temporal control. To address this, we repeated our frequency analysis using a range of pulse durations (10/10, 50/50, 70/70, 110/110, and 120/120 ms on/off) and compared the mean frequency of proximal joint extension/flexion cycles across conditions. We found no significant difference in frequency (LLMS, p > 0.05), suggesting that the observed grooming rhythm is not dictated by pulse period but instead reflects an intrinsic property of the premotor circuit once activated. We now include these results in ‘Figure 5—figure supplement 1’ and clarify in the text that we interpret pulsed activation as triggering, rather than precisely pacing, the endogenous grooming rhythm. We continue to note in the manuscript that CsChrimson’s slow off-kinetics may limit temporal precision. We will try ChrimsonR in future experiments.
Overall, I think the strengths outweigh the weaknesses, and I consider this a timely and comprehensive addition to the field.
Reviewer #3 (Public review):
Summary:
The authors set out to determine how GABAergic inhibitory premotor circuits contribute to the rhythmic alternation of leg flexion and extension during Drosophila grooming. To do this, they first mapped the ~120 13A and 13B hemilineage inhibitory neurons in the prothoracic segment of the VNC and clustered them by morphology and synaptic partners. They then tested the contribution of these cells to flexion and extension using optogenetic activation and inhibition and kinematic analyses of limb joints. Finally, they produced a computational model representing an abstract version of the circuit to determine how the connectivity identified in EM might relate to functional output. The study, in its current form, makes an important but overclaimed contribution to the literature due to a mismatch between the claims in the paper and the data presented.
Strengths:
The authors have identified an interesting question and use a strong set of complementary tools to address it:
(1) They analysed serial‐section TEM data to obtain reconstructions of every 13A and 13B neuron in the prothoracic segment. They manually proofread over 60 13A neurons and 64 13B neurons, then used automated synapse detection to build detailed connectivity maps and cluster neurons into functional motifs.
(2) They used optogenetic tools with a range of genetic driver lines in freely behaving flies to test the contribution of subsets of 13A and 13B neurons.
(3) They used a connectome-constrained computational model to determine how the mapped connectivity relates to the rhythmic output of the behavior.
Weaknesses:
The manuscript aims to reveal an instructive, rhythm-generating role for premotor inhibition in coordinating the multi-joint leg synergies underlying grooming. It makes a valuable contribution, but currently, the main claims in the paper are not well-supported by the presented evidence.
Major points
(1) Starting with the title of this manuscript, "Inhibitory circuits generate rhythms for leg movements during Drosophila grooming", the authors raise the expectation that they will show that the 13A and 13B hemilineages produce rhythmic output that underlies grooming. This manuscript does not show that. For instance, to test how they drive the rhythmic leg movements that underlie grooming requires the authors to test whether these neurons produce the rhythmic output underlying behavior in the absence of rhythmic input. Because the optogenetic pulses used for stimulation were rhythmic, the authors cannot make this point, and the modelling uses a "black box" excitatory network, the output of which might be rhythmic (this is not shown). Therefore, the evidence (behavioral entrainment; perturbation effects; computational model) is all indirect, meaning that the paper's claim that "inhibitory circuits generate rhythms" rests on inferred sufficiency. A direct recording (e.g., calcium imaging or patch-clamp) from 13A/13B during grooming - outside the scope of the study - would be needed to show intrinsic rhythmogenesis. The conclusions drawn from the data should therefore be tempered. Moreover, the "black box" needs to be opened. What output does it produce? How exactly is it connected to the 13A-13B circuit?
We modified the title to better reflect our strongest conclusions: “Inhibitory circuits control leg movements during Drosophila grooming”
Our optogenetic activation was delivered in a patterned (70 ms on/off) fashion that entrains rhythmic movements, but this does not rule out the possibility that the rhythm is imposed externally. In the manuscript, we state that we used pulsed light to mimic a flexion-extension cycle and note that this approach tests whether inhibition is sufficient to drive rhythmic leg movements when temporally patterned. While this does not prove that 13A/13B neurons are intrinsic rhythm generators, it does demonstrate that activating subsets of inhibitory neurons is sufficient to elicit alternating leg movements resembling natural grooming and walking.
Our goal with the model was to demonstrate that it is possible to produce rhythmic outputs with this 13A/B circuit, based on the connectome. The “black box” is a small recurrent neural network (RNN) consisting of 40 neurons in its hidden layer. The inputs are the “dust” levels from the environment (the green pixels in Figure 6I), the “proprioceptive” inputs (“efference copy” from motor neurons), and the amount of dust accumulated on both legs. The outputs (all positive) connect to the 13A neurons, the 13B neurons, and to the motor neurons. We refer to it as the “black box” because we make no claims about the actual excitatory inputs to these circuits. Its function is to provide input, needed to run the network, that reflects the distribution of “dust” in the environment as well as the information about the position of the legs.
The output of the “black box” component of the model might be rhythmic. In fact, in most instances of the model implementation this is indeed the case. However, as mentioned in the current version of the manuscript: “But the 13A circuitry can still produce rhythmic behavior even without those external inputs (or when set to a constant value), although the legs become less coordinated.” Indeed, when we refine the model (with the evolutionary training) without the “black box” (using a constant input of 0.1) the behavior is still rhythmic and sustained. Therefore, the rhythmic activity and behavior can emerge from the premotor circuitry itself without a rhythmic input.
The context in which the 13A and 13B hemilineages sit also needs to be explained. What do we know about the other inputs to the motorneurons studied? What excitatory circuits are there?
We agree that there are many more excitatory and inhibitory, direct and indirect, connections to motor neurons that will also affect leg movements for grooming and walking. 13A neurons provide a substantial fraction of premotor input. For example, 13As account for ~17.1% of upstream synapses for one tibia extensor (femur seti) motor neuron and ~14.6% for another tibia extensor (femur feti) motor neuron. Our goal was to demonstrate what is possible from a constrained circuit of inhibitory neurons that we mapped in detail, and we hope to add additional components to better replicate the biological circuit as behavioral and biomechanical data is obtained by us and others.
Furthermore, the introduction ignores many decades of work in other species on the role of inhibitory cell types in motor systems. There is some mention of this in the discussion, but even previous work in Drosophila larvae is not mentioned, nor crustacean STG, nor any other cell types previously studied. This manuscript makes a valuable contribution, but it is not the first to study inhibition in motor systems, and this should be made clear to the reader.
We thank the reviewer for this important reminder. Previous work on the contribution of inhibitory neurons to invertebrate motor control certainly influenced our research. We have expanded coverage of the relevant history and context in our revised discussion.
(2) The experimental evidence is not always presented convincingly, at times lacking data, quantification, explanation, appropriate rationales, or sufficient interpretation.
We are committed to improving the clarity, rationale, and completeness of our experimental descriptions. We have revisited the statistical tests applied throughout the manuscript and expanded the Methods.
(3) The statistics used are unlike any I remember having seen, essentially one big t-test followed by correction for multiple comparisons. I wonder whether this approach is optimal for these nested, high‐dimensional behavioral data. For instance, the authors do not report any formal test of normality. This might be an issue given the often skewed distributions of kinematic variables that are reported. Moreover, each fly contributes many video segments, and each segment results in multiple measurements. By treating every segment as an independent observation, the non‐independence of measurements within the same animal is ignored. I think a linear mixed‐effects model (LMM) or generalized linear mixed model (GLMM) might be more appropriate.
We thank the reviewer for raising this important point regarding the statistical treatment of our segmented behavioral data. Our initial analysis used independent t-tests with Bonferroni correction across behavioral classes and features, which allowed us to identify broad effects. However, we acknowledge that this approach does not account for the nested structure of the data. To address this, we re-analyzed key comparisons using linear mixed-effects models (LMMs) as suggested by the reviewer. This approach allowed us to more appropriately model within-fly variability and test the robustness of our conclusions. We have updated the manuscript based on the outcomes of these analyses.
(4) The manuscript mentions that legs are used for walking as well as grooming. While this is welcome, the authors then do not discuss the implications of this in sufficient detail. For instance, how should we interpret that pulsed stimulation of a subset of 13A neurons produces grooming and walking behaviours? How does neural control of grooming interact with that of walking?
We do not know how the inhibitory neurons we investigated will affect walking or how circuits for control of grooming and walking might compete. We speculate that overlapping pre-motor circuits may participate because both have similar extension flexion cycles at similar frequencies, but we do not have hard experimental data to support. This would be an interesting area for future research. Here, we focused on the consequences of activating specific 13A/B neurons during grooming because they were identified through a behavioral screen for grooming disruptions, and we had developed high-resolution assays and familiarity with the normal movements in this behavior.
(5) The manuscript needs to be proofread and edited as there are inconsistencies in labelling in figures, phrasing errors, missing citations of figures in the text, or citations that are not in the correct order, and referencing errors (examples: 81 and 83 are identical; 94 is missing in text).
We have proofread the manuscript to fix figure labeling, citation order, and referencing errors.
Reviewing Editor Comments:
In addition to the recommendations listed below, a common suggestion, given the lack of evidence to support that 13A and 13B are rhythm-generating, is to tone down the title to something like, for example, "Inhibitory circuits control leg movements during grooming in Drosophila" (or similar).
We changed the title to Inhibitory circuits control leg movements during Drosophila grooming
Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):
(1) Naming of movements of leg segments:
The authors refer to movements of leg segments across the leg, i.e., of all joints, as "flexion" and "extension". For example, in Figure 4A and at many other places. This naming is functionally misleading for two reasons: (i) the anatomical organization of an insect leg differs in principle from the organization of the mammalian leg, which the manuscript often refers to. While the organization of a mammalian limb is planar the organization of the insect limb shows a different plane as compared to the body length axis (for detailed accounts see Ritzmann et al. 2004; Büschges & Ache, 2024); (ii) the reader cannot differentiate between places in the text, where "flexion" and "extension" refer to movements of the tibia of the femur-tibia joint, e.g. in the graphical abstract, in Figure 3 and its supplements, and other places, e.g. Figure 4 and its supplements, where these two words refer to movements of leg segments of other joints, e.g. thorax-coxa, coxa-trochanter and tarsal joints. The reviewer strongly suggests naming the movements of the leg segments according to the individual joint and its muscles.
We accept this helpful suggestion. We now include a description of the leg segments and joints in the revised Introduction and refer to which leg segments we mean
“The adult Drosophila leg consists of serially arranged joints—bodywall/thoraco-coxal (Th-C), coxa–trochanter (C-Tr), trochanter–femur (Tr-F), femur–tibia (F-Ti), tibia–tarsus (Ti-Ta)—each powered by opposing flexor and extensor muscles that transmit force through tendons (Soler et al., 2004). The proximal joints, Th-C and C-Tr, mediate leg protraction–retraction and elevation–depression, respectively (Ritzmann et al., 2004; Büschges & Ache, 2025). The medial joint, F-Ti, acts as the principal flexion–extension hinge and is controlled by large tibia extensor motor neurons and flexor motor neurons (Soler et al., 2004; Baek and Mann 2009; Brierley et al., 2012; Azevedo et al., 2024; Lesser et al., 2024). By contrast, distal joints such as Ti-Ta and the tarsomeres contribute to fine adjustments, grasping, and substrate attachment (Azevedo et al., 2024).”
We also clarified femur-tibia joints in the graphical abstract, modified Figure 3 legend and added joints at relevant places.
(2) Figures 3, 4, and 5 with supplements:
The authors optogenetically silence and activate (sub)populations of 13A and 13B interneurons. Changes in frequency of movements and distance between legs or leg movements are interpreted as the effect of these experimental paradigms. No physiological recordings from leg motoneurons or leg muscles are shown. While I understand the notion of the authors to interpret a movement as the outcome of activity in a muscle, it needs to be remembered that it is well known that fast cyclic leg movements, including those for grooming, cannot be used to conclude on the underlying neural activity. Zakotnik et al. (2006) and others provided evidence that such fast cyclic movements can result from the interaction of the rhythmic activity of one leg muscle only, together with the resting tension of its silent antagonist. Given that no physiological recordings are presented, this needs to be mentioned in the discussion, e.g., in the section "Inhibitory Innervation Imbalance.......".
Added studies from Heitler, 1974; Bennet-Clark, 1975; Zakotnik et al., 2006; Page et al., 2008 in discussion.
(3) Introduction and Discussion:
The authors refer extensively to work on the mammalian spinal cord and compare their own work with circuit elements found in the spinal cord. From the perspective of the reviewer this notion is in conflict with acknowledging prior research work on the role of inhibitory network interactions for other invertebrates and lower vertebrates: such are locust flight system (for feedforward inhibition, disinhibition), crustacean stomatogastric nervous system (reciprocal inhibition), clione swimming system (reciprocal inhibition, feedforward inhibition, disinhibition), leech swimming system (reciprocal inhibition, disinhibition, feedforward inhibition), xenopus swimming system (reciprocal inhibition). The next paragraph illustrates this criticism/suggestion for stick insect neural circuits for leg stepping.
(4) Discussion:
"Feedforward inhibition" and "Disinhibition": it is already been described that rhythmic activity of antagonistic insect leg motoneuron pools arises from alternating synaptic inhibition and disinhibition of the motoneurons from premotor central pattern generating networks, e.g., Büschges (1998); Büschges et al. (2004); Ruthe et al. (2024).
We have added these references to the revised Discussion.
(5) Circuit motifs of the simulation, i.e., mutual inhibition between interneurons and onto motoneurons and sensory feedback influences and pathways share similarities to those formerly used by studies simulating rhythmic insect leg movements, for example, Schilling & Cruse 2020, 2023 or Toth et al. 2012. For the reader, it appears relevant that the progress of the new simulation is explained in the light of similarities and differences to these former approaches with respect to the common circuit motifs used.
We now put our work in the context of other models in the Discussion section: “Similar circuit motifs, namely reciprocal inhibitions between pre-motor neurons and the sensory feedback have been modeled before, in particular neuroWalknet, and such simple motifs do not require a separate CPG component to generate rhythmic behavior in these models (Schilling & Cruse 2020, 2023). However, our model is much simpler than the neuroWalknet - it controls a 2D agent operating on an abstract environment (the dust distribution), without physics. In real animals or complex mechanical models such as NeuroMechFly (Lobato-Rios et al), a more explicit central rhythm generation may be advantageous for the coordination across many more degrees of freedom.”
Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):
I might have missed this, but I couldn't find any mention of how the grooming command pathways, described by previous work from the authors' lab, recruit these predicted grooming pattern-generating neurons. This should be mentioned in the connectome analysis and also discussed later in the discussion.
13A neurons are direct downstream targets of previously described grooming command neurons. Specifically, the antennal grooming command neuron aDN (Hampel et al., 2015) synapses onto two primary 13As (γ and α; 13As-i) that connect to proximal extensor and medial flexor motor neurons, as well as four other 13As (9a, 9c, 9i, 6e) projecting to body wall extensor motor neurons. The 13As-i also form reciprocal connections with 13As-ii, providing a potential substrate for oscillatory leg movements. aDN connects to homologous 13As on both sides, consistent with the bilateral coordination needed for antennal sweeping.
The head grooming/leg rubbing command neuron DNg12 (Guo et al., 2022) synapses directly onto ~50 13As, predominantly those connected to proximal motor neurons.
While sometimes the structural connectivity suggests pathways for generating rhythmic movements, the extensive interconnections among command neurons and premotor circuits indicate that multiple motifs could contribute to the observed behaviors. Further work will be needed to determine how these inputs are dynamically engaged during normal grooming sequences. We have now added it to the discussion.
I encourage the authors to be explicit about caveats wherever possible: e.g., ectopic expression in genetic tools, potential for other unexplored neurons as rhythm generators (rather than 13A/B), given that the authors never get complete silencing phenotypes, CsChrimson kinetics, neurotransmitter predictions, etc.
We now explain these caveats as follows: Ectopic expression is noted in Figure 1—figure supplement 1, and we added the following to the Discussion: “While our experiments with multiple genetic lines labeling 13A/B neurons consistently implicate these cells in leg coordination, ectopic expression in some lines raises the possibility that other neurons may also contribute to this phenotype. In addition, other excitatory and inhibitory neural circuits, not yet identified, may also contribute to the generation of rhythmic leg movements. Future studies should identify such neurons that regulate rhythmic timing and their interactions with inhibitory circuits.”
We also added a caveat regarding CsChrimson kinetics in the Results. Finally, our identification of these neurons as inhibitory is based on genetic access to the GABAergic population (we use GAD-spGAL4 as part of the intersection which targets them), rather than on predictions of neurotransmitter identity.
Reviewer #3 (Recommendations for the authors):
Detailed list of figure alterations:
(1) Figure 1:
(a) Figure 1B and Figure 1 - Figure Supplement 1 lack information on individual cells - how can we tell that the cells targeted are indeed 13A and 13B, and which ones they are? Since off-target expression in neighboring hemilineages isn't ruled out, the interpretation of results is not straightforward.
The neurons labeled by R35G04-DBD and GAD1-AD are identified as 13A and 13B based on their stereotyped cell body positions and characteristic neurite projections into the neuropil, which match those of 13A and 13B neurons reconstructed in the FANC and MANC connectome. While we have not generated flip-out clones in this genotype, we do isolate 13A neurons more specifically later in the manuscript using R35G04-DBD intersected with Dbx-AD, and show single-cell morphology consistent with identified 13A neurons. The purpose of including this early figure was to motivate the study by showing that silencing this population, which includes 13A/13B neurons, strongly reduces grooming in dusted flies.
Regarding Figure 1—Figure Supplement 1:
This figure showed the expression patterns of all lines used throughout the manuscript. Panels C and D illustrated lines with minimal to no ectopic expression. Panels A and B show neurons with posterior cell bodies that may correspond to 13A neurons not reconstructed in our dataset but described in Soffers et al., 2025 and Marin et al., 2025 and we have provided detailed information about all VNC expressions in the figure legend.
(b) Figure 1D lacks explanation of boxplots, asterisks, genotypes/experimental design.
Added.
(c) Figures 1E-F and video 1 lack quantification, scale bars.
Added quantification.
(2) Figure 2:
(a) Figure 2A, Figure 2 - Supplement 3: What are the details of the hierarchical clustering? What metric was used to decide on the number of clusters?
We have used FANC packages to perform NBLAST clustering (Azevedo et al., 2024, Nature). We now include the full protocol in Methods. The details are as follows:
We performed hierarchical clustering on pairwise NBLAST similarity scores computed using navis.nblast_allbyall(). The resulting similarity matrix was symmetrized by averaging it with its transpose, and converted into a distance matrix using the transformation:
distance=(1−similarity)\text{distance} = (1 - \text{similarity})distance=(1−similarity)
This ensures that a perfect NBLAST match (similarity = 1) corresponds to a distance of 0.
Clustering was performed using Ward’s linkage method (method='ward' in scipy.cluster.hierarchy.linkage), which minimizes the total within-cluster variance and is well-suited for identifying compact, morphologically coherent clusters.
We did not predefine the number of clusters. Instead, clusters were visualized using a dendrogram, where branch coloring is based on the default behavior of scipy.cluster.hierarchy.dendrogram(). By default, this function applies a visual color threshold at 70% of the maximum linkage distance to highlight groups of similar elements. In our dataset, this corresponded to a linkage distance of approximately 1–1.5, which visually separated morphologically distinct neuron types (Figures 2A and Figure 2—figure supplement 3A). This threshold was used only as a visual aid and not as a hard cutoff for quantitative grouping.
The Methods section says that the classification "included left-right comparisons". What does that mean? What are the implications of the authors only having proofread a subset of neurons in T1L (see below)?
All adult leg motor neurons and 13A neurons (except one, 13A-ε) have neurite arbors restricted to the local, ipsilateral neuropil associated with the nearest leg. Although 13B neurons have contralateral cell bodies, their projections are also entirely ipsilateral. The Tuthill Lab, with contributions from our group, focused proofreading efforts on the left front neuropil (T1L) in FANC. This is also where the motor neuron to muscle mapping has been most extensively done. We reconstructed/proofread the 13A and 13B neurons from the right side as well (T1R). We see similar clustering based on morphology and connectivity here as well.
Reconstructions lack scale bars and information on orientation (also in other figures), and the figures for the 13B analysis are not consistent with the main figure (e.g., labelling of clusters in panel B along x,y axes).
Added.
(b) Figure 2B: Since the cosine similarity matrix's values should go from -1 to 1, why was a color map used ranging from 0 to 1?
While cosine similarity values can theoretically range from -1 to 1, in our case, all vector entries (i.e., synaptic weights) are non-negative, as they reflect the number of synapses from each 13A neuron to its downstream targets. This means all pairwise cosine similarities fall within the 0 to 1 range.
Why are some neurons not included in this figure, like 1g, 2b, 3c-f (also in Supplement 3)?
The few 13A neurons that don’t connect to motor neurons are not shown in the figure.
(c) Figures 2C and D: the overlaid neurites are difficult to distinguish from one another. If the point here is to show that each 13A neuron class innervates specific motor neurons, then this is not the clearest way of doing that. For instance, the legend indicates that extensors are labelled in red, and that MNs with the highest number of synapses are highlighted in red - does that work? I could not figure out what was going on. On a more general point: if two cells are connected, does that not automatically mean that they should overlap in their projection patterns?
We intended these panels to illustrate that 13A neurons synapse onto overlapping regions of motor neurons, thereby creating a spatial representation of muscle targets. However, we agree that overlapping multiple neurons in a single flat projection makes the figure difficult to interpret. We have therefore removed Figures 2C and 2D.
While neurons must overlap at least somewhere if they form a synaptic connection, the amount of their neurites that overlap can vary, and more extensive overlap suggests more possible connections. Because the synapses are computationally predicted, examining the overlap helps to confirm that these predictions are consistent.
While connected neurons must overlap locally at their synaptic sites, they do not necessarily show extensive or spatially structured overlap of their projections. For example, descending neurons or 13B interneurons may form synapses onto motor neurons without exhibiting a topographically organized projection pattern. In contrast, 13A→MN connectivity is organized in a structured manner: specialist 13A neurons align with the myotopic map of MN dendrites, whereas generalist 13As project more broadly and target MN groups across multiple leg segments, reflecting premotor synergies. This spatial organization—combining both joint-specific and multi-joint representations—was a key finding we wished to highlight, and we have revised the Results text to make this clearer.
(d) Figure 2 - Figure Supplement 1: Why are these results presented in a way that goes against the morphological clustering results, but without explanation? Clusters 1-3 seem to overlap in their connectivity, and are presented in a mixed order. Why is this ignored? Are there similar data for 13B?
The morphological clusters 1–3 do exhibit overlapping connectivity, but this is consistent with both their anatomical similarity and premotor connectivity. Specifically, Cluster 1 neurons connect to SE and TrE motor neurons, Cluster 2 connects only to TrE motor neurons, and Cluster 3 targets multiple motor pools, including SE and TrE (Figure 2—Figure Supplement 1B). This overlap is also reflected in the high pairwise cosine similarity among Clusters 1–3 shown in Figure 2B. Thus, their similar connectivity profiles align with their proximity in the NBLAST dendrogram.
Regarding 13B neurons: there is no clear correlation between morphological clusters and downstream motor targets, as shown in the cosine similarity matrix (Figure 2—figure supplement 3). Moreover, even premotor 13B neurons that fall within the same morphological cluster do not connect to the same set of motor neurons (Figure 3—figure supplement 1F). For example, 13B-2a connects to LTrM and tergo-trochanteral MNs, 13B-2b connects to TiF MNs, and 13B-2g connects to Tr-F, TiE, and tergo-T MNs. Together, these results demonstrate that 13A neurons are spatially organized in a manner that correlates with their motor neuron targets, whereas 13B neurons lack such spatially structured organization, suggesting distinct principles of connectivity for these two inhibitory premotor populations.
(e) Figure 2 - Figure Supplement 2: A comparison is made here between T1R (proofread) and T1L (largely not proofread). A general point is made here that there are "similar numbers of neurons and cluster divisions". First, no quantitative comparison is provided, making it difficult to judge whether this point is accurate. Second, glancing at the connectivity diagram, I can identify a large number of discrepancies. How should we interpret those? Can T1L be proofread? If this is too much of a burden, results should be presented with that as a clear caveat.
The 13A and 13B neurons in the T1L hemisegment are fully proofread (Lesser et al, 2024, current publication); the T1R has been extensively analyzed as well. To compare the clustering and match identities of 13A and 13B neurons on the left and the right, We mirrored the 13A neurons from the left side and used NBLAST to match them with their counterparts on the right.
While individual synaptic counts differ between sides in the FANC dataset (T1L generally showing higher counts), the number of 13A neurons, their clustering, and the overall patterns of connectivity are largely conserved between T1L and T1R.
Importantly, each 13A cluster targets the same subset of motor neurons on both sides, preserving the overall pattern of connectivity. The largest divergence is seen in cluster 9, which shows more variable connectivity.
(f) Figure 2 - Figure Supplements 4 & 5: Why did the authors choose to present the particular cell type in Supplement 4? Why are the cell types in Supplement 5 presented differently? Labels in Supplement 5 are illegible, but I imagine this is due to the format of the file presented to reviewers. Why are there no data for 13B?
We chose to present the particular cell type in Supplement 4 because it corresponds to cell types targeted in the genetic lines used in our behavioral experiments. The 13A neuron shown is also one of the primary neurons in this lineage. This example illustrates its broader connectivity beyond the inhibitory and motor connections emphasized in the main figures.
In Supplement 5, we initially aimed to highlight that the major downstream targets of 13A neurons are motor neurons. We have now removed this figure and instead state in the text that the major downstream targets are MNs.
We did not present 13B neurons in the same format because their major downstream targets are not motor neurons. Instead, we emphasize their role in disinhibition and their connections to 13A neurons, as shown in a specific example in Figure 3—figure supplement 2. This 13B neuron also corresponds to a cell type targeted in the genetic line used in our behavioral experiments.
(3) Figure 3:
(a) Figure 3A: the collection of diagrams is not clear. I'd suggest one diagram with all connections included repeated for each subpanel, with each subpanel highlighting relevant connections and greying out irrelevant ones to the type of connection discussed. The nomenclature should be consistent between the figure and the legend (e.g., feedforward inhibition vs direct MN inhibition in A1.
The intent of Figure 3A is to highlight individual circuit motifs by isolating them in separate panels. Including all connections in every sub panel would likely reduce clarity and make it harder to follow each motif. For completeness, we show the full set of connections together in Panel D. We updated the nomenclature as suggested.
(b) Figure 3B: Why was the medial joint discussed in detail? Do the thicknesses of the lines represent the number of synapses? There should be a legend, in that case. Why are the green edges all the same thickness? Are they indeed all connected with a similarly low number of synapses?
We focused on the medial joint (femur-tibia joint) because it produces alternating flexion and extension of the tibia during both head sweeps and leg rubbing, which are the main grooming actions we analyzed. During head grooming, the tarsus is typically suspended in the air, so the cleaning action is primarily driven by tibial movements generated at the medial joint.
The thickness of the edges represents the number of synapses, and we have now clarified this in the legend. The green edges represent connections from 13B neurons, which were manually added to the graph, as described in the Methods section. 13B neurons are smaller than 13A neurons and form significantly fewer total downstream synapses. For example, the 13B neuron shown in Figure 3—figure supplement 2 makes a total of 155 synapses to all downstream neurons, with only 22 synapses to its most strongly connected partner, a 13A neuron. The relatively sparse connectivity of 13B neurons is shown in thinner or uniform edge weights in this graph.
(C) Figure 3C: This is a potentially important panel, but the connections are difficult to interpret. Moreover, the text says, "This organizational motif applies to multiple joints within a leg as reciprocal connections between generalist 13A neurons suggest a role in coordinating multi-joint movements in synergy". To what extent is this a representative result? The figure also has an error in the legend (it is not labelled as 3C).
This statement is true and based on the connectivity of these neurons. We now added
“Data for 13A-MN connections shown in Figure 2—figure supplement 1 I9, I6, I7, H9, H4, and H5; 13A-13A connections shown in Figure 3—figure supplement 1C.” to the figure legend.
Thanks, we fixed the labelling error.
(d) Figure 3 - Figure Supplement 1: Panel A is very difficult to interpret. Could a hierarchical diagram be used, or some other representation that is easier to digest?
Panel A provides a consolidated view of all upstream and downstream interconnections among individual 13A and 13B neurons, allowing readers to quickly assess which neurons connect to which others without having to examine all subpanels. For a hierarchical representation, we have provided individual neuron-level diagrams in Panels C–F.
(e) Figure 3 - Figure Supplement 2: Why was this cell type selected?
We selected this 13B because it is involved in the disinhibition of 13A neurons and is also present in the genetic line used for our behavioral experiments.
(f) Figure 3 - Figure Supplement 3: The diagram is confusing, with text aligned randomly, and colors lacking some explanations. Legend has odd formatting.
The diagram layout and text alignment are designed to reflect the logical grouping of proprioceptors, 13A neurons, and motor neurons. To improve clarity, we have added node colors, included a written explanation for edge colors, and corrected the formatting of the figure legend.
(4) Figure 4:
(a) Figure 4A: This has no quantification, poor labelling, and odd units (centiseconds?). The colours between the left and right panels also don't align.
We have fixed these issues.
(b) Figure 4D-K: The ranges on the different axes are not the same (e.g., y axis on box plots, x axis on histograms). This obscures the fact that the differences between experimental and control, which in many cases are not big, are not consistent between the various controls. Moreover, the data that are plotted are, as far as I can tell (which is also to say: this should be explained), one value per frame. With imaging at 100Hz, this means that an enormous number of values are used in each analysis. Very small differences can therefore be significant in a statistical sense. However, how different something is between conditions is important (effect size), and this is not taken int account in this manuscript. For instance, in 4D-J, the differences in the mean seem to be minimal. Should that not be taken into consideration? A point in case is panel D in Figure 4 - Figure Supplement 1: even with near identical distributions, a statistically significant difference is detected. The same applies to Figure 4 - Figure Supplements 1-3. Also, what do the boxes and whiskers in the box plots show, exactly?
We have re-plotted all summary panels using linear mixed-effects models (LMMs) as suggested. In the updated plots, each dot represents the mean value for a single animal, and bar height represents the group mean. Whiskers indicate the 95% confidence interval around the group mean. This approach avoids inflating sample size by using per-frame values and provides a more accurate view of both variability and effect size.
(e) Figure 4 - Figure Supplement 1: There are 6 cells labelled in the split line; only 4 are shown in A3. Is cluster 6 a convincing match between EM and MCFO?
We indeed report four neurons targeted by the split-GAL4 line in flip out clones. Generating these clones was technically challenging. In our sample (n=23), we may not have labeled all of the neurons. Alternatively, two neurons may share very similar morphology and connectivity, making it difficult to tell them apart. We have added this clarification to the revised figure legend.
It is interesting to see data on walking in panel K, but why were these analyses not done on any of the other manipulations? What defect produced the reduction in velocity, exactly? How should this be interpreted?
Our primary focus was on grooming, but we did observe changes in walking, so we report illustrative examples. We initially included a panel showing increased walking velocity upon 13A activation, but this effect did not survive FDR correction and was removed in the revised version. We instead included data for 13A silencing which did not affect the frequency of joint movements during walking. However, spatial aspects of walking were affected: the distance between front leg tips during stance was reduced, indicating that although flies continued to walk rhythmically, the positioning of the legs was altered. This suggests that these specific 13A neurons may influence coordination and limb placement during walking without disrupting basic rhythmicity. As reviewer #2 also noted, dust may itself affect walking, so we have chosen not to further pursue this aspect in the current study.
(f) Figure 4 - Figure Supplement 2: panel A is identical to Figure 1 - Figure Supplement 1C. This figure needs particular attention, both in content and style. Why present data on silencing these neurons in C-D, but not in E-F?
We removed the panel Figure 1 - Figure Supplement 1C and kept it in Figure 4 - Figure Supplement 2 A. E-F also shows data on silencing, as C’.
(g) Figure 4 - Figure Supplement 3: In panel B, the authors should more clearly demonstrate the identity of 4b and 4a. Why present such a limited number of parameters in F and G?
The cells shown in panel B represent the best matches we could identify between the light-level expression pattern and EM reconstructions. In panels F and G, we focused on bout duration, as leg position/inter-leg distance and frequency were already presented (in Figure 4). Together, these parameters demonstrate the role of 13B neurons in coordinating leg movements. Maximum angular velocity of proximal joints was not significantly affected and is therefore not included.
(5) Figure 5:
(a) Figure 5B: Lacks a quantification of the periodic nature of the behavior, which is required to compare to experimental conditions, e.g., in panel C.
Added
(b) Figure 5C: Requires a quantification; stimulus dynamics need to be incorporated.
Added
(c) Figure 5D: More information is needed. Does "Front leg" mean "leg rub", and "Head" "head sweep"? How do the dynamics in these behaviors compare to normal grooming behavior?
Yes, head grooming is head sweeps and Front leg grooming is leg rub. Comparison added, shown in 5E-F
(d) Figure 5E: How should we interpret these plots? Do these look like normal grooming/walking?
We have now included the comparison.
(e) Figure 5F: Needs stats to compare it to 5B'.
Done
(6) Figure 6:
(a) Figure 6A: I think the circuit used for the model is lacking the claw/hook extension - 13Bs connection. Any other changes? What is the rationale?
13Bs upstream of these particular 13As do not receive significant connections from claw/hook neurons (there’s only one ~5 synapses connection from one hook extension to one 13B neurons, which we neglected for the modeling purpose).
(b) Figure 6B and C: Needs labels, legend; where is 13B?
In the figure legend we now added: “The 13B neurons in this model do not connect to each other, receive excitatory input from the black box, and only project to the 13As (inhibitory). Their weight matrix, with only two values, is not shown.” We added the colorbar and corrected the color scheme.
(c) Figure 6D-H: plots are very difficult to interpret. Units are also missing (is "Time" correct?).
The units are indeed Time in frames (of simulation). We added this to the figure and the legend. We clarified the units of all variables in these panels. Corrected the color scheme and added their meaning to the legend text.
(d) Figure 6I: I think the authors should consider presenting this in a different format.
(e) Figure 6 J and K (also Figure Supplement): lacks labels.
We added labels for the three joints, increased the size of fonts for clarity, and added panel titles on the top.
More specific suggestions:
(1) It would be helpful if the titles of all figures reflected the take-away message, like in Figure 2.
(2) "Their dendrites occupy a limited region of VNC, suggesting common pre-synaptic inputs" - all dendrites do, so I'd suggest rephrasing to be more precise.
(3) "We propose that the broadly projecting primary neurons are generalists, likely born earlier, while specialists are mostly later-born secondary neurons" - this needs to be explained.
We added the explanation.
We propose that the broadly projecting primary neurons are generalists, likely born earlier, while specialists are mostly later-born secondary neurons. This is consistent with the known developmental sequence of hemilineages, where early-born primary neurons typically acquire larger arbors and integrate across broader premotor and motor targets, whereas later-born secondary neurons often have more spatially restricted projections and specialized roles[18,19,81,82,85]. Our morphological clustering supports this idea: generalist 13As have extensive axonal arbors spanning multiple leg segments, whereas specialist neurons are more narrowly tuned, connecting to a few MN targets within a segment. Thus, both their morphology and connectivity patterns align with the expectation from birth-order–dependent diversification within hemilineages.
(4) "We did not find any correlation between the morphology of premotor 13B and motor connections" - this needs to be explained, as morphology constrains connectivity.
We agree that morphology often constrains connectivity. However, in contrast to 13A neurons—where morphological clusters strongly predict MN connectivity—we did not observe such a correlation for 13B neurons. As we noted in our response to comment 2d, 13B neurons can form synapses onto MNs without exhibiting extensive or spatially structured overlap of their axonal projections with MN dendrites. This suggests that 13B→MN connectivity may be governed by more local, synapse-specific rules rather than by large-scale morphological positioning, in contrast to the spatially organized premotor map we observe for 13As.
(5) "Based on their connectivity, we hypothesized that continuously activating them might reduce extension and increase flexion. Conversely, silencing them might increase extension and reduce flexion." - these clear predictions are then not directly addressed in the results that follow.
We have now expanded this section.
(6) "Thus, 13A neurons regulate both spatial and temporal aspects of leg coordination" "Together, 13A and 13B neurons contribute to both spatial and temporal coordination during grooming" - are these not intrinsically linked? This needs to be explained/justified.
The spatial (leg positioning, joint angles) and temporal (frequency, rhythm) aspects are often linked, but they can be at least partially dissociated. This has been shown in other systems: for example, Argentine ants reduce walking speed on uneven terrain primarily by decreasing stride frequency while maintaining stride length (Clifton et al., 2020), and Drosophila larvae adjust crawling speed mainly by modulating cycle period rather than the amplitude of segmental contractions (Heckscher et al., 2012). Consistent with these findings, we observe that 13A neuron manipulation in dusted flies significantly alters leg positioning without changing the frequency of walking cycles. Thus, leg positioning can be perturbed while the number of extension–flexion cycles per second remains constant, supporting the view that spatial and temporal features are at least partially dissociable.
(7) "Connectome data revealed that 13B neurons disinhibit motor pools (...) One of these 13B neurons is premotor, inhibiting both proximal and tibia extensor MN" - these are not possible at the same time.
We show that the 13B population contains neurons with distinct connectivity motifs:
some inhibit premotor 13A neurons (leading to disinhibition of motor pools), while others directly inhibit motor neurons. The split-GAL4 line we use labels three 13B neurons—two that inhibit the primary 13A neuron 13A-9d-γ (which targets proximal extensor and medial flexor MNs) and one that is premotor, directly inhibiting both proximal and tibia extensor MNs. Although these functions may appear mutually exclusive, their combined action could converge to a similar outcome: disinhibition of proximal extensor and medial flexor MNs while simultaneously inhibiting medial extensor MNs. This suggests that the labeled 13B neurons act in concert to bias the network toward a specific motor state rather than producing contradictory effects.
(8) "we often observed that one leg became locked in flexion while the other leg remained extended, (indicating contribution from additional unmapped left right coordination circuits)." - Are these results not informative? I'd suggest the authors explain the implications of this more, rather than mentioning it within brackets like this.
We agree with the reviewer that these results are highly informative. The observation that one leg can remain locked in flexion while the other stays extended suggests that additional left–right coordination circuits are engaged during grooming. This cross-talk is likely mediated by commissural interneurons downstream of inhibitory premotor neurons, which have not yet been systematically studied. Dissecting these circuits will require a dedicated project combining bilateral connectomic reconstruction, studying downstream targets of these commissural neurons, and functional interrogation, which is beyond the scope of the current study.
(9) "Indeed, we observe that optogenetic activation of specific 13A and 13B neurons triggers grooming movements. We also discover that" - this phrasing suggests that this has already been shown.external
We replaced ‘indeed’ with “Consistent with this connectivity,”
(10) "But the 13A circuitry can still produce rhythmic behavior even without those sensory inputs (or when set to a constant value), although the legs become less coordinated." - what does this mean?
We can train (fine-tune) the model without the descending inputs from the “black box” and the behavior will still be rhythmic, meaning that our modeled 13A circuit alone can produce rhythmic behavior, i.e. the rhythm is not generated externally (by the “black box”). We added Figure 7 to the MS and re-wrote this paragraph. In the revised manuscript we now state: “But the 13A circuitry can still produce rhythmic behavior even without those excitatory inputs from the “black box” (or when set to a constant value), although the legs become less coordinated (because they are “unaware” of each other’s position at any time). Indeed, when we refine the model (with the evolutionary training) without the “black box” (using instead a constant input of 0.1) the behavior is still rhythmic although somewhat less sustained (Figure 7). This confirms that the rhythmic activity and behavior can emerge from the modeled pre-motor circuitry itself, without a rhythmic input.”
(11) "However, to explore the possibility of de novo emergent periodic behavior (without the direct periodic descending input) we instead varied the model's parameters around their empirically obtained values." - why do the authors not show how the model performs without tuning it first? What are the changes exactly that are happening as a result of the tuning? Are there specific connections that are lost? Do I interpret Figure 6B and C correctly when I think that some connections are lost (e.g., an SN-MN connection)? How does that compare to the text, which states that "their magnitudes must be at least 80% of the empirical weights"?
Without the fine-tuning we do not get any behavior (the activation levels saturate). So, we tolerate 20% divergence from the empirically established weights and we keep the signs the same. However, in the previous version we allowed the weights to decrease below 20% of the empirical weight (as long as the sign didn’t change) but not above (the signs were maintained and synapses were not added or removed). We thank the reviewer for observing this important discrepancy. In the current version we ensured that the model’s weights are bounded in both directions (the tolerance = 0.2), but we also partially relaxed the constraint on adjacency matrix re-scaling (see Methods, the “The fine-tuning of the synaptic weights” section, where we now clarify more precisely how the evolving model is fitted to the connectome constraints). We then re-ran the fine-tuning process. The Figure 6B and C is now corrected with the properly constrained model, as well as other panels in the figure. We also applied a better color scheme (now, blue is inhibitory and red is excitatory) for Fig. 6B and C.
(12) "Interestingly, removing 13As-ii-MN connections to the three MNs (second row of the 13A → MN matrices in Figures 6B and C) does not have much effect on the leg movement (data not shown). It seems sufficient for this model to contract only one of the two antagonistic muscles per joint, while keeping the other at a steady state." - this is not clear.
We repeated this test with the newly fine-tuned model and re-wrote the result as follows: “...when we remove just the 13A-i-MN connections (which control the flexors of the right leg) we likewise get a complete paralysis of the leg. However, removing the 13A-ii-MN (which control the extensors of the right leg) has only a modest effect on the leg movement. So, we need the 13A-i neurons to inhibit the flexors (via motor neurons), but not extensors, in order to obtain rhythmic movements.”
(13) The Discussion needs to reference the specific Results in all relevant sections.
We have revised the discussion to explicitly reference the specific results.
(14) "Flexors and extensors should alternate" - there are circumstances in which flexors and extensors should co-contract. For instance, co-contraction modulates joint stiffness for postural stability and helps generate forces required for fast movements.
Thanks for pointing this out. We added “However, flexor–extensor co-contraction can also be functionally relevant, such as for modulating joint stiffness during postural stabilization or for generating large forces required for fast movements (Zakotnik et al., 2006; Günzel et al., 2022; Ogawa and Yamawaki 2025). Some generalist 13A neurons could facilitate co-contraction across different leg segments, but none target antagonistic motor neurons controlling the same joint. Therefore, co-contraction within a single joint would require the simultaneous activation of multiple 13A neurons.”
(15) "While legs alternate between extension and flexion, they remain elevated during grooming. To maintain this posture, some MNs must be continuously activated while their antagonists are inactivated." - this is not necessarily correct. Small limbs, like those of Drosophila, can assume gravity-independent rest angles (10.1523/JNEUROSCI.5510-08.2009).
We added it to discussion
(16) The discussion "Spatial Mapping of premotor neurons in the nerve cord" seems to me to be making obvious points, and does not need to be included.
We have now revised this section to highlight the significance of 13A spatial organization, emphasizing premotor topographic mapping, multi-joint movement modules, and parallels to myotopic, proprioceptive, and vertebrate spinal maps.
(17) Key point, albeit a small one: "Normal activity of these inhibitory neurons is critical for grooming" - the use of the word critical is problematic, and perhaps typical of the tone of the manuscript. These animals still groom when many of these neurons are manipulated, so what does "critical" really mean?
In this instance, we now changed “critical” to “important”. We observed that silencing or activating a large number (>8) 13A neurons or few 13A and B neurons together completely abolishes grooming in dusted flies as flies get paralyzed or the limbs get locked in extreme poses. Therefore we think we have a justification for the statement that these neurons are critical for grooming. These neurons may contribute to additional behaviors, and there may be partially redundant circuits that can also support grooming. We have revised the manuscript with the intention of clarifying both what we have observed and the limits.