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- Reviewing EditorBernhard SchmidUniversity of Zurich, Zurich, Switzerland
- Senior EditorSergio RasmannUniversity of Neuchâtel, Neuchâtel, Switzerland
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
Summary:
As a general phenomenon, adaptation of populations to their respective local conditions is well-documented, though not universally. In particular, local adaptation has been amply demonstrated in Arabidopsis thaliana, the focal species of this research, which is naturally highly selfing. Here, the authors report assays designed to evaluate the spatial scale of fitness variation among source populations and sites, as well as temporal variability in fitness expression. Further, they endeavor to identify traits and genomic regions that contribute to the demonstrated variation in fitness.
Strengths:
With many (200) inbred accessions drawn from throughout Sweden, the study offers an unusually fine sampling of genetic variation within this much-studied species, and through assays in multiple sites and years, it amply demonstrates the context-dependence of fitness expression. It supports the general phenomenon of local adaptation, with multiple nuances. Other examples exist, but it is of value to have further cases illustrating not only the context-dependence of fitness expression but also the sometimes idiosyncratic nature of fitness variation. I commend the authors on their cautionary language in relation to inferences about the roles of particular genomic regions (e.g.l.140-144; l.227)
Weaknesses:
To my mind, the manuscript is written primarily for the Arabidopsis community. This community is certainly large, but there are many evolutionary biologists who could appreciate this work but are not invited to do so. The authors could address the broader evolution community by acknowledging more of the relevant work of others (I've noted a few references in my comments to the authors). At least as important, the authors could make clearer the fact that A. thaliana is (almost) strictly selfing and how this feature of its biology both enables such a study and also limits inferences from it. Further, it seems to me that though I could be wrong, readers would appreciate a more direct, less discursive style of writing, and one that makes the broader import of the focal questions clearer.
As a reader, I would value seeing estimates of the overall fitness of the accessions in the different conditions, i.e., by combining the survival and fecundity results of the common garden experiments.
Reviewer #2 (Public review):
Summary:
The goal of this study was to find evidence for local adaptation in survival and fecundity of the model plant Arabidopsis thaliana. The authors grew a large set of Swedish Arabidopsis accessions at four common garden sites in northern and southern Sweden. Accessions were grown from seed in trays, which were laid on the ground at each site in late summer, screened for survival in fall and the following spring, and fecundity was determined from rosette size and seed production in spring. Experiments were complemented by 'selection experiments', in which seeds of the same accessions were sown in plots, and after two years of growth, plants were sampled to determine fitness from genotype frequencies, providing a more comprehensive evaluation of lifetime fitness than can be gleaned from fecundity alone.
As the main result, southern accessions had higher mortality in northern sites in one of two years, but also suffered more slug damage in southern sites in one year, indicating a potential link between frost tolerance and herbivore resistance. Fecundity of accession was highest when growing close to the 'home' environment, but while accessions from one sand dune population in southern Sweden had among the lowest fecundities overall, they consistently had the highest fitness in the selection experiment. Accessions from this population had large seed size and rapid root growth, which might be related to establishment success when arriving in a new, partially occupied habitat. However, neither trait could fully explain the very high fitness of this population, suggesting the presence of other, unmeasured traits.
Overall, the authors could provide clear evidence of local adaptation in different traits for some of their experiments, but they also highlight high temporal and spatial variability that makes prediction of microevolutionary change so challenging.
Strengths:
A major strength of this study is the highly comprehensive evaluation of different fitness-related traits of Arabidopsis under natural conditions. The evaluation of survival and fecundity in common garden experiments across four sites and two years provides an estimate of variability and consistency of results. The addition of the 'selection experiment' provides an extended view on plant fitness that is both original and interesting, in particular highlighting potential limitations of 'fitness-proxies' such as seed production that don't take into account seedling establishment and competitive exclusion.
Throughout the study, the authors have gone to impressive depths in exploring their data, and particularly the discovery of 'native volunteers' in selection experiment plots and their statistical treatment is very elegant and has resulted in compelling conclusions. Also, while the authors are careful in the interpretation of their GWAS results, they nonetheless highlight a few interesting gene candidates that may be underlying the observed plant adaptations, and which likely will stimulate further research.
Overall, the authors provide a rich new resource that is relevant and interesting both in the context of general evolutionary theory as well as more specifically for molecular biology.
Weaknesses:
While the repetition of the common garden experiments over two years is certainly better than no repetition (hence its mention also under 'strengths'), the very high variability found between the two years highlights the need for more extensive temporal replication. In this context, two temporal replicates are the bare minimum, and more repeats in time would be necessary to draw any kind of conclusion about the role of 'high mortality' and 'low mortality' years for the microevolution of Arabidopsis. It also seems that the authors missed an opportunity to explore potentially causal variation among years, as they did not attempt to relate winter mortality to actual climatic variables, even though they discuss winter harshness as a potential predictor.
The low temporal variation also makes the accidental slug herbivory appear somewhat random. Potted plants are notoriously susceptible to slug herbivory, and while it is certainly nice that slug damage predominantly affected one group of accessions, it nonetheless raises the question whether this reflects a 'real' selection pressure that plants commonly face in their respective local environments.
The addition of the 'selection experiment' is certainly original and provides valuable additional insights, but again, it seems a bit questionable which natural process really has affected this outcome. While the genetic and statistical analysis of this experiment seems to be state-of-the-art, the experimental design is rather rudimentary compared to more standard selection experiments. Specifically, the authors added seeds from greenhouse-grown mothers to experimental plots and only sampled plants two years later. This means that, potentially,y the first very big bottleneck was germination under natural conditions, which may have already excluded many of the accessions before they had a chance to grow. While this certainly is one type of selection, it is not exactly the type of selection that a 2-year selection experiment is set up to measure. Either initially establishing the selection experiment from plants instead of seeds, or genotyping the population over several generations, would have substantially strengthened the conclusions that could be drawn from this experiment. Also, the complete lack of information on population density is a bit problematic. It is not clear if there were other (non-Arabidopsis) plants present in the plots, how many Arabidopsis plants were established, if numbers changed over the year, etc. Given all of these limitations, calling this a 'selection experiment' is in fact somewhat misleading.
Despite these weaknesses, the authors could achieve their main goals, and despite the somewhat minimal temporal replication, they were lucky to sample two fairly distinct years that provided them with interesting variation, which they could partially explain using the variation among their accessions. Overall, this study will likely make an important contribution to the field of evolutionary biology, and it is another very strong example of how the extensive molecular tools in Arabidopsis can be leveraged to address fundamental questions in evolution and ecology, to an extent that is not (yet) possible in other plant systems.
Reviewer #3 (Public review):
Summary:
The manuscript presents a large common garden experiment across Sweden using solely local germplasm. Additionally, there is a collection of selection experiments that begin investigating the factors shaping fecundity in these populations. This provides an impressive amount of data and analysis investigating the underlying factors involved. Together, this helps support the data showing that fluctuations and interactions are key components determining Arabidopsis fitness and are more broadly applicable across plant and non-plant species.
Strengths:
The field trials are well conducted with extensive effort and sampling. Similarly while the genetic analysis is complex it is well conducted and reflects the complexity of dealing with population structure that may be intricately linked to adaptive structure. This has no real solution and the option of presenting results with and without correction is likely the only appropriate option.
Weaknesses:
A significant finding from this study was that fecundity is shaped more by yearly fluctuations and their interaction with genotype than it is by the main effect of location or genotype. Another significant finding is that the strength of selection can be quite strong, with nearly 5x ranges across accessions. It should be noted that there are a number of other studies using Arabidopsis in the wild with multiple years and locations that found similar observations beyond the Oakley citation. In general, the context of how these findings relate to existing knowledge in Arabidopsis is a bit underdeveloped.
The effects of the populations across the locations seem to rely on individual tests and PC analysis. It would seem to be possible to incorporate these tests more directly in the linear modeling analysis, and it isn't quite clear why this wasn't conducted.
I'm a bit puzzled by the discussion on how to find causative loci. This seems to focus solely on GWAS as the solution, with a goal to sequence vast individuals. But the loci that the manuscript discussed were found by a combination of structured mapping populations followed by molecular validation that then informed the GWAS. As such, I'm unsure if the proposed future approach of more sequencing is the best when a more balanced approach integrating diverse methods and population types will be more useful.