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- Reviewing EditorFrederik GrawFriedrich-Alexander-University Erlangen-Nürnberg, Erlangen, Germany
- Senior EditorJohn SchogginsThe University of Texas Southwestern Medical Center, Dallas, United States of America
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
Summary:
In this paper, the authors conduct both experiments and modeling of human cytomegalovirus (HCMV) infection in vitro to study how the infectivity of the virus (measured by cell infection) scales with the viral concentration in the inoculum. A naïve thought would be that this is linear in the sense that doubling the virus concentration (and thus the total virus) in the inoculum would lead to doubling the fraction of infected cells. However, the authors show convincingly that this is not the case for HCMV, using multiple strains, two different target cells, and repeated experiments. In fact, they find that for some regimens (inoculum concentration), infected cells increase faster than the concentration of the inoculum, which they term "apparent cooperativity". The authors then provided possible explanations for this phenomenon and constructed mathematical models and simulations to implement these explanations. They show that these ideas do help explain the cooperativity, but they can't be conclusive as to what the correct explanation is. In any case, this advances our knowledge of the system, and it is very important when quantitative experiments involving MOI are performed.
Strengths:
Careful experiments using state-of-the-art methodologies and advancing multiple competing models to explain the data.
Weaknesses:
There are minor weaknesses in explaining the implementation of the model. However, some specific assumptions, which to this reviewer were unclear, could have a substantial impact on the results. For example, whether cell infection is independent or not. This is expanded below.
Suggestions to clarify the study:
(1) Mathematically, it is clear what "increase linearly" or "increase faster than linearly" (e.g., line 94) means. However, it may be confusing for some readers to then look at plots such as in Figure 2, which appear linear (but on the log-log scale) and about which the authors also say (line 326) "data best matching the linear relationship on a log-log scale".
(2) One of the main issues that is unclear to me is whether the authors assume that cell infection is independent of other cells. This could be a very important issue affecting their results, both when analyzing the experimental data and running the simulations. One possible outcome of infection could be the generation of innate mediators that could protect (alter the resistance) of nearby cells. I can imagine two opposite results of this: i) one possibility is that resistance would lead to lower infection frequencies and this would result in apparent sub-linear infection (contrary to the observations); or ii) inoculums with more virus lead to faster infection, which doesn't allow enough time for the "resistance" (innate effect) to spread (potentially leading to results similar to the observations, supra-linear infection).
(3) Another unclear aspect of cell infection is whether each cell only has one chance to be infected or multiple chances, i.e., do the authors run the simulation once over all the cells or more times?
(4) On the other hand, the authors address the complementary issue of the virus acting independently or not, with their clumping model (which includes nice experimental measurements). However, it was unclear to me what the assumption of the simulation is in this case. In the case of infection by a clump of virus or "viral compensation", when infection is successful (the cell becomes infected), how many viruses "disappear" and what happens to the rest? For example, one of the viruses of the clump is removed by infection, but the others are free to participate in another clump, or they also disappear. The only thing I found about this is the caption of Figure S10, and it seems to indicate that only the infected virus is removed. However, a typical assumption, I think, is that viruses aggregate to improve infection, but then the whole aggregate participates in infection of a single cell, and those viruses in the clump can't participate in other infections. Viral cooperativity with higher inocula in this case would be, perhaps, the result of larger numbers of clumps for higher inocula. This seems in agreement with Figure S8, but was a little unclear in the interpretation provided.
(5) In algorithm 1, how does P_i, as defined, relate to equation 1?
(6) In line 228, and several other places (e.g., caption of Table S2), the authors refer to the probability of a single genome infecting a cell p(1)=exp(-lambda), but shouldn't it be p(1)=1-exp(-lambda) according to equation 1?
(7) In line 304, the accrued damage hypothesis is defined, but it is stated as a triggering of an antiviral response; one would assume that exposure to a virion should increase the resistance to infection. Otherwise, the authors are saying that evolution has come up with intracellular viral resistance mechanisms that are detrimental to the cell. As I mentioned above, this could also be a mechanism for non-independent cell infection. For example, infected cells signal to neighboring cells to "become resistance" to infection. This would also provide a mechanism for saturation at high levels.
(8) In Figure 3, and likely other places, t-tests are used for comparisons, but with only an n=5 (experiments). Many would prefer a non-parametric test.
Reviewer #2 (Public review):
In their article, Peterson et al. wanted to show to what extent the classical "single hit" model of virion infection, where one virion is required to infect a cell, does not match empirical observations based on human cytomegalovirus in vitro infection model, and how this would have practical impacts in experimental protocols.
They first used a very simple experimental assay, where they infected cells with serially diluted virions and measured the proportion of infected cells with flow cytometry. From this, they could elegantly show how the proportion of infected cells differed from a "single hit" model, which they simulated using a simple mathematical model ("powerlaw model"), and better fit a model where virions need to cooperate to infect cells. They then explore which mechanism could explain this apparent cooperation:
(1) Stochasticity alone cannot explain the results, although I am unsure how generalizable the results are, because the mathematical model chosen cannot, by design, explain such observations only by stochasticity.
(2) Virion clumping seemed not to be enough either to generally explain such a pattern. For that, they first use a mathematical model showing that the apparent cooperation would be small. However, I am unsure how extreme the scenario of simulated virion clumping is. They then used dynamic light scattering to measure the distribution of the sizes of clumps. From these estimates, they show that virion clumps cannot reproduce the observed virion cooperation in serial dilution assays. However, the authors remain unprecise on how the uncertainty of these clumps' size distribution would impact the results, as most clumps have a size smaller than a single virion, leaving therefore a limited number of clumps truly containing virions.
The two models remain unidentifiable from each other but could explain the apparent virion cooperativity: either due to an increase in susceptibility of the cell each time a virion tries to infect it, or due to viral compensation, where lesser fit viruses are able to infect cells in co-infection with a better fit virion. Unfortunately, the authors here do not attempt to fit their mathematical model to the experimental data but only show that theoretical models and experimental data generate similar patterns regarding virion apparent cooperation.
Finally, the authors show that this virions cooperation could make the relationship between the estimated multiplicity of infection and viruses/cell deviate from the 1:1 relationship. Consequently, the dilution of a virion stock would lead to an even stronger decrease in infectivity, as more diluted virions can cooperate less for infection.
Overall, this work is very valuable as it raises the general question of how the estimate of infectivity can be biased if extrapolated from a single virus titer assay. The observation that HCMV virions often cooperate and that this cooperation varies between contexts seems robust. The putative biological explanations would require further exploration.
This topic is very well known in the case of segmented viruses and the semi-infectious particles, leading to the idea of studying "sociovirology", but to my knowledge, this is the first time that it was explored for a nonsegmented virus, and in the context of MOI estimation.
Reviewer #3 (Public review):
Summary:
The authors dilute fluorescent HCMV stocks in small steps (df ≈ 1.3-1.5) across 23 points, quantify infections by flow cytometry at 3 dpi, and fit a power-law model to estimate a cooperativity parameter n (n > 1 indicates apparent cooperativity). They compare fibroblasts vs epithelial cells and multiple strains/reporters, and explore alternative mechanisms (clumping, accrued damage, viral compensation) via analytical modeling and stochastic simulations. They discuss implications for titer/MOI estimation and suggest a method for detecting "apparent cooperativity," noting that for viruses showing this behavior, MOI estimation may be biased.
Strengths:
(1) High-resolution titration & rigor: The small-step dilution design (23 serial dilutions; tailored df) improves dose-response resolution beyond conventional 10× series.
(2) Clear quantitative signal: Multiple strain-cell pairs show n > 1, with appropriate model fitting and visualization of the linear regime on log-log axes.
(3) Mechanistic exploration: Side-by-side modeling of clumping vs accrued damage vs compensation frames testable hypotheses for cooperativity.
Weaknesses:
(1) Secondary infection control: The authors argue that 3 dpi largely avoids progeny-mediated secondary infection; this claim should be strengthened (e.g., entry inhibitors/control infections) or add sensitivity checks showing results are robust to a small secondary-infection contribution.
(2) Discriminating mechanisms: At present, simulations cannot distinguish between accrued damage and viral compensation. The authors should propose or add a decisive experiment (e.g., dual-color coinfection to quantify true coinfection rates versus "priming" without coinfection; timed sequential inocula) and outline expected signatures for each mechanism.
(3) Decline at high genomes/cell: Several datasets show a downturn at high input. Hypotheses should be provided (cytotoxicity, receptor depletion, and measurement ceiling) and any supportive controls.
(4) Include experimental data: In Figure 6, please include the experimentally measured titers (IU/mL), if available.
(5) MOI guidance: The practical guidance is important; please add a short "best-practice box" (how to determine titer at multiple genomes/cell and cell densities; when single-hit assumptions fail) for end-users.