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- Reviewing EditorBianca MarlinHoward Hughes Medical Institute, Chevy Chase, United States of America
- Senior EditorKate WassumUniversity of California, Los Angeles, Los Angeles, United States of America
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
Summary:
The manuscript by Tsukamoto et al. describes a compelling approach to understanding whether inter-species differences in social behavior might emerge from differential expression patterns of the oxytocin receptor (Oxtr) in the brain. To this end, they genetically engineer BAC transgenic mouse lines with insertions of a large construct incorporating prairie vole Oxtr gene and surrounding regulatory elements. They name these lines Koi lines. They first evaluate if prairie vole-like Oxtr expression is reproduced in the Koi mouse lines, and they find heterogenous patterns across different lines that do not depend on the number of insertions. While they found that Koi mice can reproduce vole-like expression in PFC, NAc, and BLA, the reproduction was never complete: one Koi line had NAc and mPFC expression, another had BLA expression, etc. They confirmed major expression patterns across 3 methods: crossing with LacZ reporter line, in situ hybridization, and ligand binding (autoradiography). To determine the expression pattern of the BAC insert but not endogenous Oxtr, the authors generated new mouse lines by crossing Koi lines with Oxtr -/- line. Importantly, they found that Oxtr expression pattern in the mammary gland was similar across all lines, and wild-type mice.
The authors used Koi:Oxtr-/- lines to test social behavior, specifically partner preference ( a behavior specific to prairie voles) and maternal behavior. They find that different Koi lines showed different changes in these behaviors compared to wild-type mice. Moreover, while some lines showed changes in partner preference, others seemed to show changes in maternal behavior. For one of the lines (Koi4), the partner preference and the maternal behavior were incongruent.
The manuscript then hypothesizes that the Oxtr gene is positioned in different 3D chromatin structures across species and across tissues, leading to more rigid expression in the mammary glands, but more flexible expression patterns in the brain.
Strengths:
This study has major implications in the field of oxytocin research, and more broadly in the field of neuromodulation. It is novel, bold, and rigorous.
Weaknesses:
(1) The expression in the brain and mammary gland (Figure 2) was not quantified, preventing a more objective conclusion that the brain has flexible expression and mammary gland expression is rigid.
(2) In Figure 7, a similar heatmap for the mammary gland is missing.
(3) Partner preference in males was not tested.
(4) It is unclear if in the behavioral testing the stimulus animals were the same genotype as the focal female or were wild-types. This could have an impact on the behavioral outcome.
Reviewer #2 (Public review):
Summary:
This is a bold and important study and addresses an important question in the field: how species-specific variation in brain oxytocin receptor expression relates to differences in social behavior.
Tsukamoto et al. generated eight independent transgenic mouse lines (Koi lines) carrying a bacterial artificial chromosome (BAC) encompassing the prairie vole Oxtr locus along with flanking intergenic regions, with the goal of probing the behavioral consequences of species-specific variation in brain Oxtr expression. Across these "volized" lines, the authors claim conserved Oxtr expression in the mammary gland but strikingly divergent patterns of brain expression, none of which fully recapitulate endogenous prairie vole Oxtr distribution, and instead exhibit expression patterns that diverge from both mouse and prairie vole brain Oxtr distribution. Nevertheless, some lines exhibit partial overlap with vole Oxtr expression pattern reported in the literature within specific brain regions, and one line displays partner preference behavior reminiscent of prairie voles. The authors further report line-dependent differences in maternal pup retrieval and crouching behaviors, which they interpret as evidence that variation in brain Oxtr expression can drive variation in social behaviors. Together with analyses of topologically associating domain (TAD) architecture, the authors conclude that brain, but not peripheral- Oxtr expression, is shaped by distal regulatory elements beyond the BAC insert, and propose that such regulatory flexibility underlies evolutionary diversification of social behavior.
Strengths:
A particular strength of the study is the generation of multiple independent transgenic lines, which provides a valuable resource for probing regulatory influences on Oxtr expression.
Weaknesses:
While the study addresses an important question, I have several methodological and conceptual concerns regarding the study in its current form. Some aspects of the study fall outside my primary area of expertise, and I am therefore not in a position to fully evaluate the technical difficulty or rigor of those components, or to judge whether my suggestions would be feasible to implement. I defer to reviewers with relevant expertise for a more detailed assessment of these aspects.
(1) Each independent Koi line exhibits a distinct brain expression pattern that differs from both wild-type mouse and prairie vole Oxtr expression, complicating the interpretation of the results. The manuscript does not include a direct comparison of brain Oxtr expression patterns in these transgenic lines with those of prairie voles. Instead, expression similarity is inferred primarily from regional localization and compared indirectly with prior literature (Figures 2-5). For those lines that show partial resemblance to prairie vole Oxtr expression patterns, the authors do not assess whether Oxtr-expressing neurons share comparable anatomical projections or transcriptomic identity with prairie vole Oxtr-expressing neurons. Quantification of expression remains largely descriptive, illustrating expression patterns (Figure 2), OXTR protein distribution (Figure 3; images are difficult to evaluate due to low contrast), or Oxtr mRNA levels across selected brain regions in Koi lines, wild-type mice, and mOxtr-/- mice (Figures 4-5), without directly testing similarity to prairie vole expression. In addition, whole-brain expression data are lacking, with analyses restricted to selected sections. While such analyses may be beyond the scope of the present study, these limitations nonetheless complicate interpretation of the central question - namely, whether the observed behavioral phenotypes arise from vole-like Oxtr circuits rather than from distinct, line-specific expression configurations.
(2) The authors state that Oxtr expression in the mammary gland is similar across all Koi lines and the mOxtr-IRES-Cre knock-in line. However, the images presented in Figure 2 appear to show differences in anatomical detail across lines, and no quantitative analysis is provided to support the claim of equivalence.
(3) The conclusion that integration site rather than copy number determines the observed BAC transgene expression patterns (Lines 202-203) is not fully supported by the data. First, the authors did not compare multiple copy numbers at the same genomic insertion site, making it impossible to disentangle copy-number effects from position effects. Second, BAC copy number does not necessarily scale linearly with expression; higher copy numbers can have a repressive effect on gene expression (Garrick et al, Nat Genet, 1998).
(4) While I am not an expert in TAD analysis, the observed differences in 3D architecture around Oxtr are consistent with a role for long-range regulatory interactions. However, these analyses appear largely descriptive and correlative, and establishing a causal contribution of 3D chromatin organization to Oxtr regulation by distal elements would likely require direct perturbation of TAD boundaries or looping interactions. I recognize that such experiments may be beyond the scope of the present study, but clarifying this limitation in the interpretation would be helpful.