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- Reviewing EditorKunlin WeiPeking University, Beijing, China
- Senior EditorAndrew KingUniversity of Oxford, Oxford, United Kingdom
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
Summary:
Sullivan and colleagues examined the modulation of reflexive visuomotor responses during collaboration between pairs of participants performing a joint reaching movement to a target. In their experiments, the players jointly controlled a cursor that they had to move towards narrow or wide targets. In each experimental block, each participant had a different type of target they had to move the joint cursor to. During the experiment, the authors used lateral perturbation of the cursor to test participants' fast feedback responses to the different target types. The authors suggest participants integrate the target type and related cost of their partner into their own movements, which suggests that visuomotor gains are affected by the partner's task.
Strengths:
The topic of the manuscript is very interesting, and the authors are using well-established methodology to test their hypothesis. They combine experimental studies with optimal control models to further support their work. Overall, the manuscript is very timely and shows important findings - that the feedback responses reflect both our and our partner's tasks.
Weaknesses:
However, in the current version of the manuscript, I believe the results could also be interpreted differently, which suggests that the authors should provide further support for their hypothesis and conclusions.
Major Comments:
(1) Results of the relevant conditions:
In addition to the authors' explanation regarding the results, it is also possible that the results represent a simple modulation of the reflexive response to a scaled version of cursor movement. That is, when the cursor is partially controlled by a partner, which also contributes to reducing movement error, it can also be interpreted by the sensorimotor system as a scaling of hand-to-cursor movement. In this case, the reflexes are modulated according to a scaling factor (how much do I need to move to bring the cursor to the target). I believe that a single-agent simulation of an OFC model with a scaling factor in the lateral direction can generate the same predictions as those presented by the authors in this study. In other words, maybe the controller has learned about the nature of the perturbation in each specific context, that in some conditions I need to control strongly, whereas in others I do not (without having any model of the partner). I suggest that the authors demonstrate how they can distinguish their interpretation of the results from other explanations.
(2) The effect of the partner target:
The authors presented both self and partner targets together. While the effect of each target type, presented separately, is known, it is unclear how presenting both simultaneously affects individual response. That is, does a small target with a background of the wide target affect the reflexive response in the case of a single participant moving? The results of Experiment 2, comparing the case of partner- and self-relevant targets versus partner-irrelevant and self-relevant targets, may suggest that the system acted based on the relevant target, regardless of the presence and instructions regarding the self-target.
(3) Experiment instructions:
It is unclear what the general instructions were for the participants and whether the instructions provided set the proposed weighted cost, which could be altered with different instructions.
(4) Some work has shown that the gain of visuomotor feedback responses reflects the time to target and that this is updated online after a perturbation (Cesonis & Franklin, 2020, eNeuro; Cesonis and Franklin, 2021, NBDT; also related to Crevecoeur et al., 2013, J Neurophysiol). These models would predict different feedback gains depending on the distance remaining to the target for the participant and the time to correct for the jump, which is directly affected by the small or large targets. Could this time be used to target instead of explaining the results? I don't believe that this is the case, but the authors should try to rule out other interpretations. This is maybe a minor point, but perhaps more important is the location (& time remaining) for each participant at the time of the jump. It appears from the figures that this might be affected by the condition (given the change in movement lengths - see Figure 3 B & C). If this is the case, then could some of the feedback gain be related to these parameters and not the model of the partner, as suggested? Some evidence to rule this out would be a good addition to the paper - perhaps the distance of each partner at the time of the perturbation, for example. In addition, please analyze the synchrony of the two partners' movements.
Reviewer #2 (Public review):
Summary:
Sullivan and colleagues studied the fast, involuntary, sensorimotor feedback control in interpersonal coordination. Using a cleverly designed joint-reaching experiment that separately manipulated the accuracy demands for a pair of participants, they demonstrated that the rapid visuomotor feedback response of a human participant to a sudden visual perturbation is modulated by his/her partner's control policy and cost. The behavioral results are well-matched with the predictions of the optimal feedback control framework implemented with the dynamic game theory model. Overall, the study provides an important and novel set of results on the fast, involuntary feedback response in human motor control, in the context of interpersonal coordination.
Review:
Sullivan and colleagues investigated whether fast, involuntary sensorimotor feedback control is modulated by the partner's state (e.g., cost and control policy) during interpersonal coordination. They asked a pair of participants to make a reaching movement to control a cursor and hit a target, where the cursor's position was a combination of each participant's hand position. To examine fast visuomotor feedback response, the authors applied a sudden shift in either the cursor (experiment 1) or the target (experiment 2) position in the middle of movement. To test the involvement of partner's information in the feedback response, they independently manipulated the accuracy demand for each participant by varying the lateral length of the target (i.e., a wider/narrower target has a lower/higher demand for correction when movement is perturbed). Because participants could also see their partner's target, they could theoretically take this information (e.g., whether their partner would correct, whether their correction would help their partner, etc.) into account when responding to the sudden visual shift. Computationally, the task structure can be handled using dynamic game theory, and the partner's feedback control policy and cost function are integrated into the optimal feedback control framework. As predicted by the model, the authors demonstrated that the rapid visuomotor feedback response to a sudden visual perturbation is modulated by the partner's control policy and cost. When their partner's target was narrow, they made rapid feedback corrections even when their own target was wide (no need for correction), suggesting integration of their partner's cost function. Similarly, they made corrections to a lesser degree when both targets were narrower than when the partner's target was wider, suggesting that the feedback correction takes the partner's correction (i.e., feedback control policy) into account.
The strength of the current paper lies in the combination of clever behavioral experiments that independently manipulate each participant's accuracy demand and a sophisticated computational approach that integrates optimal feedback control and dynamic game theory. Both the experimental design and data analysis sound good. While the main claim is well-supported by the results, the only current weakness is the lack of discussion of limitations and an alternative explanation. Adding these points will further strengthen the paper.