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Not revised: This Reviewed Preprint includes the authors’ original preprint (without revision), an eLife assessment, public reviews, and a provisional response from the authors.
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- Reviewing EditorJeffrey SmithNational Institute of Neurological Disorders and Stroke, Bethesda, United States of America
- Senior EditorJoshua GoldUniversity of Pennsylvania, Philadelphia, United States of America
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
Summary:
The authors present a simplified neural bursting model with explicitly controllable parameterization of oscillator dynamics designed for neural circuit modeling involved in rhythm generation.
Strengths:
(1) The purpose of the model and applied abstractions are well articulated and justified (2D model, independent parameter control).
(2) Explicit control of burst duration, inter-burst interval, amplitude, resetting-behavior/entrainment. This allows modelers to focus on circuit interactions and is especially useful when details of intrinsic currents and bursting mechanisms are unknown. One could even imagine a scenario where this model would help identify predictions on key underlying burst generation mechanisms.
(3) The model is well described and validated with simulations and comparisons to the base model and one alternative model.
(4) Circuit-level validation is convincing, as it reproduces not only trivial examples.
(5) The underlying mechanism in phase space is well reasoned and justified, extends previous work, e.g., by McKean, by improving usability.
Weaknesses:
(1) The paper heavily relies on numerical demonstrations but does not provide a formal analysis of stability, bifurcations, or entrainment. While appropriate for the intended purposes, a more formal footing could strengthen the model.
(2) Lots of nice demonstrations are shown, but it is less clear how model parameterization was chosen, how behavior depends on parameterization, and in what parameter ranges certain behavior can be expected. A more detailed description of parameterization/exploration of parameter space would greatly benefit anyone using this model in the future.
(3) Some claims on reproduction of prior locomotor CPG model and production of "more biologically realistic activity" by the presented model are overstated. The key feature of the locomotor CPG models cited was that they not only reproduced speed-dependent gait expression of intact mice, but also changes of gait expression after silencing/removal of specific commissural and long propriospinal interneurons (e.g., selective loss of trot after deleting of V0V; changes in gait expression and step-to-step variability after silencing of descending long-propriospinal neurons or ascending V3 LPNs). While likely (at least partially) feasible with the model formulation, the correspondence of these silencing/ablation of neuron classes has not been shown by the model. Importantly, though, it appears that authors didn't show how the model in general behaves under the influence of noise, which is key to reproducing LPN silencing.
Reviewer #2 (Public review):
Summary:
The authors propose a reduced model for intrinsically bursting neurons. The model simply consists of exponential decay of an adaptation variable in a phenomenological silent phase, an exponential growth of that variable in an active phase, and imposed thresholds for jumps between these phases, with some add-ons to allow for effects such as input-dependence.
Strengths:
The model could be used as a controller for an artificial system that needs to switch between on and off states with separate control of state durations. It has some flexibility to allow for variable levels of the activity variable during the active phase. The authors show that the model can be tuned to capture phase response properties of neurons and patterns generated by small networks of neurons.
Weaknesses:
The proposed approach lacks biological relevance, practicality, and originality.
(1) Biological relevance:
Central pattern generators and other bursting neurons use specific physical principles to generate their bursts of activity. These principles place constraints on the tuning of these bursts, including relationships between active and silent phase durations and other properties. By discarding these relationships, the proposed model risks losing key constraints that affect performance in biologically relevant scenarios. The proposed model does not allow for the emergence of interesting dynamical phenomena, which occur naturally in neurons and neuronal networks.
It is also important to note that spikes within bursts can be important and of interest. Biophysical models allow for easy extension to include spikes via fast sodium and potassium currents. The proposed model does not allow for such extensibility.
Finally, as shown in the seminal early-2000s work of Izhikevich, building on fast-slow decomposition work by Rinzel and others, there is a wide variety of possible neuronal bursting patterns. At the very least, several of these have been observed in neuronal recordings. The authors' model is specific to square-wave bursting.
(2) Practicality:
The model makes use of various cut-off functions and other aspects that are implemented as rules. Combining rules with differential equations makes for an awkward modeling framework that is inconvenient to implement, conceptualize, and analyze (e.g., from a bifurcation perspective). Moreover, the authors add more and more adjustments to their basic framework to capture additional features, but these add-ons simply make the model more, and unnecessarily, complicated and awkward. It's worth noting that the authors argue for their model based on the idea that more biophysical models are difficult to tune, yet they compare their model to a biophysical one that they were able to tune to achieve the various patterns that they study. They do not give any indication of how easy or hard it was to tune their own model, nor do they compare simulation times between the two models. I do note that the biophysical model seems to have 22 parameters, whereas the simplified one has 21 in Table 2, which is essentially the same number. Finally, although the authors give some extensions of the model to match observed data, their model does not seem useful for predicting performance in never-before-tested scenarios.
(3) Originality:
As the authors note, the use of low-dimensional, specifically planar, neural models dates back to early authors such as FitzHugh and Nagumo. What the authors fail to acknowledge is that Rinzel, Terman, Kopell, and others did seminal work on neuronal activity, including phenomena such as post-inhibitory rebound and fast threshold modulation, using a relaxation oscillation framework, starting several decades ago. Their work included applications to central pattern generators (e.g., see Terman and collaborators on respiratory CPGs). It is astonishing that the authors don't seem to be aware of this work and do not mention it at all. Moreover, I don't see any advantage of the proposed framework over the earlier relaxation oscillator setting, where many important mechanistic principles have already been analyzed, including extensions to networks. On a related note, even through they propose a piecewise linear model, the authors do not cite the substantial existing work on piecewise linear models (e.g., Hahnloser, Neural Networks, 1998, for an early example; 2024 SIAM Review article by Coombes et al and references therein for much more) including work specifically on bursting, nor do they cite various other previous efforts to capture bursting with simplified models including work on piecewise linear maps by Aguirre et al.
Reviewer #3 (Public review):
This computational modeling study introduces the methodology of replacing bursting neurons in a model circuit with a simplified piecewise-linear model with an "active" and a "quiet" state representing, respectively, the burst of spikes and the inter-burst interval. The shape of the active state loosely represents the intra-burst firing rate. Because (piecewise) linear systems are explicitly solvable, the transitions from quiet to active and vice versa can be calculated explicitly to match exactly what a biophysically realistic model or a biological neuron does in different conditions. The base piecewise-linear model is built to represent a 2D biophysical neuron with a cubic v-nullcline. The simplicity of the model allows for matching the kinetics of more complex models with a tractable simplified set of equations, as exemplified by approximations of burst duration and amplitude, phase-response curves, entrainment, and, finally, mimicking the activities of two CPG circuit models using this simplified representation.
Major comments
(1) The use of piecewise linear approximations to explicitly estimate properties of biophysical neurons is a well-known and common technique. This study adds nothing to the technique in terms of novelty.
(2) Although the model explicitly matches active and inactive durations of a circuit neuron, the dynamics are explicitly "clamped" by the user because the reduced model parameters explicitly depend on the input. There are cases where this is useful, for example, when we are interested in the dynamics of _other_ neurons (B, C, D, ...) within the context of activity, and we "clamp" the dynamics of neuron A. One should note that this is no better than having a look-up table. Effectively, to give a comparison, it is like using a sine wave to represent a pacemaker neuron and explicitly define its frequency at different input levels so that it responds "dynamically". However, the neuron is restricted to what the user puts in, and therefore, calling it a dynamical system is entirely wrong. I am afraid that the use of this crude tool is not described well enough in the manuscript to warn a naïve user not to fall for this trap.
(3) The phase resetting curves are used incorrectly. PRCs are useful when the perturbation is weak (soft), which would demonstrate the nature of the vector field near the limit cycle and therefore inform us of the nature of its stability or instability. A hard PRC would always reset the cycle to the fixed offset from the perturbation phase and is therefore uninformative in understanding dynamics. (It is, however, useful experimentally in identifying which neurons are part of the CPG.) The authors clearly know that the dynamics of the system away from the limit cycle do not conserve those of a biophysical neuron. So what is the point?
(4) I work on the STG, one of the systems exemplified here. Even in the small and relatively regular CPGs of the STG, the definition of the active and quiet parts of a burst is often less clear than what the authors suggest. Bursting neurons often do multiple bursts in a cycle, and therefore, substituting the burst envelope is a subjective matter. This is even more problematic in bursting neurons in the brain, where there is often no quiet period. This should be discussed.