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Not revised: This Reviewed Preprint includes the authors’ original preprint (without revision), an eLife assessment, public reviews, and a provisional response from the authors.
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- Reviewing EditorYunlu DaiUniversity of Macau, Taipa, Macao
- Senior EditorSatyajit RathNational Institute of Immunology, New Delhi, India
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
Summary:
This study constructed engineered NK-92 cell extracellular vesicles displaying CD19 single-chain variable fragment and evaluated their therapeutic efficacy in MRL/lpr mouse models of systemic lupus erythematosus, demonstrating that these vesicles could deplete B cells, alleviate lupus nephritis, and improve mouse survival. However, this strategy lacks significant innovation compared to existing research. The current results are not sufficient to provide strong support for the experimental hypotheses.
Weaknesses:
(1) This study proposes using engineered EVs displaying CD19 scFv to target B cells for SLE treatment. However, similar core therapeutic strategies have been reported in previous studies. For instance, recently, studies have reported engineered EVs for SLE therapy (J Control Release. 2025, 384:113886; Ann Rheum Dis. 2025, 84(11):1811-1821; J Nanobiotechnology. 2026, 24(1):203). Another research team from China also constructed engineered EVs displaying anti-CD19 scFv for SLE treatment, which is highly consistent with the present work in targeting strategy, delivery vehicle, and disease model (Mol Ther. 2026:S1525-0016(26)00080-8). Moreover, the human trial of allogeneic CD19-targeted CAR-NK therapy for SLE has been published (Lancet. 2026, 406(10522):2968-2979). This study has not made original improvements in therapeutic vectors, targeting modules, therapeutic mechanisms, and indications, and thus finds it difficult to meet the requirements of high-level journals for originality and novelty.
(2) Numerous core experiments are missing, including the validation of CD19 scFv fusion protein expression on EVs, systematic characterization of engineered EVs, verification of EVs functions and therapeutic mechanisms, and in vitro and in vivo safety assessments. The available data are insufficient to support complete conclusions.
(3) The stable expression of CD19 scFv on EVs should be further verified by Western blot or flow cytometry. The anchoring of CD19 scFv on the outer membrane surface of EVs must be confirmed. In addition, the loading capacity of CD19 scFv on exosomes should be quantified for the dosage selection in SLE treatment.
(4) In vitro experiments are required to confirm the specific targeting ability of CD19 scFv-EVs to B cells and clarify the precise mechanism of B cell depletion, particularly whether it is mediated by effector molecules carried by exosomes such as perforin and granzyme B.
(5) The key quality control parameters, such as the stability, purity, buoyant density, and particle/protein ratio of engineered exosomes, should be characterized and identified.
(6) For the in vivo treatment experiments, the author needs to explain how the treatment dose of CD19scFv-EVs was determined in order to clarify the dose-effect relationship.
(7) It is necessary to supplement with in vivo imaging and tissue distribution data to prove that the CD19 scFv-EVs can specifically accumulate in B-cell organs such as the spleen or lymph nodes.
(8) The author needs to clarify the mechanism by which CD19 scFv-EVs reduce B cells in vivo and verify the caspase apoptosis pathway.
(9) For the in vivo therapeutic experiments, the clinical first-line drugs and the free CD19scFv should be used to supplement the control group to highlight the advantages of the engineered EVs.
(10) Safety assessment in this manuscript is completely absent. Routine toxicity examinations, including hepatic and renal function tests, routine blood tests, and histopathological analysis of major organs in mice, must be supplemented. In addition, the systemic inflammatory cytokine profile and anti-drug antibody levels should be determined to rule out critical safety risks such as cytokine release syndrome and immunogenicity. The authors only focused on alterations in B cells; the impacts of the treatment on T cell subsets, NK cells, and monocytes/macrophages should be further investigated.
Reviewer #2 (Public review):
Summary:
Sun and colleagues report the development of an engineered extracellular vesicle platform derived from NK-92 cells that display an anti-CD19 single-chain variable fragment (scFv) on their surface via fusion with LAMP-2B (V-CD19-Exo). In an MRL/lpr mouse model of SLE, the authors demonstrate that intraperitoneal administration of V-CD19-Exo reduces splenic CD19+CD20+ B cells, attenuates proteinuria and lupus nephritis pathology, downregulates pro-inflammatory cytokines (IL-17A, IFN-γ) and autoantibodies (anti-dsDNA, ANA), and improves survival from approximately 25% to 80%. The authors propose that this "cell-free" targeted extracellular vesicle strategy offers advantages over conventional cell therapies, including lower immunogenicity, scalable production, and no requirement for lymphodepletion.
The study addresses an important question in autoimmune disease therapeutics: how to achieve targeted B cell depletion while avoiding the complexities and safety risks associated with CAR-T/CAR-NK cell therapies. The concept is novel, and the initial in vivo efficacy data are encouraging. However, several significant limitations in experimental design, mechanistic depth, and evidence rigor temper the strength of the conclusions.
Strengths:
(1) Novel conceptual approach.
The adaptation of CAR targeting principles to extracellular vesicles represents a creative and potentially impactful strategy. By displaying CD19 scFv on NK-92-derived vesicles, the authors successfully confer B cell-targeting capability while retaining the cytotoxic effector functions of the parental NK cells. This "cell-free" concept addresses genuine limitations of live cell therapies, including the need for lymphodepletion, risks of cytokine release syndrome, and manufacturing complexity.
(2) Comprehensive in vivo efficacy readouts.
The study evaluates therapeutic effects across multiple clinically relevant endpoints: B cell depletion (flow cytometry), renal function (proteinuria, UPCR), renal histopathology (HE staining with semi-quantitative scoring), systemic inflammation (IgE, IL-17A, IFN-γ), autoantibody production (anti-dsDNA, ANA), and survival. This multi-dimensional characterization strengthens the phenotypic evidence for efficacy.
(3) Appropriate control groups.
The inclusion of non-targeted NK92-Exo as a control allows attribution of the observed effects to CD19-mediated targeting rather than non-specific vesicle-associated activities.
(4) Significant survival benefit.
The improvement in survival from 25% to approximately 80% in V-CD19-Exo-treated mice is substantial and represents arguably the most compelling evidence for therapeutic potential in this model.
Weaknesses:
(1) Mechanism of B-cell reduction remains unclear.
The manuscript reports a dramatic reduction in splenic CD19+CD20+ B cells (from 10.53% to 1.51%) following V-CD19-Exo treatment. However, the authors do not establish whether this results from direct cytotoxicity (e.g., perforin/granzyme-mediated killing, apoptosis induction) or from functional suppression/downregulation of CD19 expression. The authors speculate that the effect is likely mediated by cytotoxic proteins carried by NK-92-derived vesicles, but no data are provided to support this mechanism. Essential experiments would include the detection of apoptosis markers (Annexin V, activated caspase-3/7) in B cells, assessment of perforin/granzyme B content within V-CD19-Exo, or in vitro co-culture assays demonstrating direct B cell killing.
(2) Small sample sizes.
Most experimental endpoints were assessed with n=5 per group, which is marginal for detecting modest effect sizes and may amplify the influence of individual biological variation. While the survival study had n=10 per group, the main mechanistic and endpoint analyses would benefit from larger cohorts (n=8-10) to increase statistical power and robustness.
(3) No dose-response or dosing optimization studies.
All experiments used a single dose (10⁹ particles per injection) and a fixed schedule (twice weekly for three weeks). The absence of dose-response data leaves unclear whether the observed effects represent maximal efficacy or could be achieved with lower doses, and whether alternative dosing regimens could improve outcomes or reduce potential off-target effects.
(4) Lack of safety assessment.
The authors emphasize the theoretical safety advantages of extracellular vesicles over cell therapies, but no systematic safety evaluation is presented. Key missing data include: histopathological examination of non-target organs (liver, lung, heart, gastrointestinal tract), assessment of off-target immune activation (T cell responses, cytokine profiles beyond those measured), and evaluation of potential accumulation or toxicity with repeated dosing.
(5) Incomplete characterization of the engineered vesicles beyond targeting.
While the manuscript successfully demonstrates CD19scFv display and vesicle enrichment of exosomal markers, it does not characterize whether V-CD19-Exo retains the full spectrum of NK-92 effector molecules (perforin, granzymes, FasL, TRAIL, cytokines such as IFN-γ) at functional levels. Quantitative or semi-quantitative comparison of cargo between V-CD19-Exo and parental NK-92 cells or non-engineered NK92-Exo would help contextualize the observed in vivo effects.
(6) Sex as a biological variable is not systematically addressed.
The authors note in the Discussion that the same treatment showed more significant efficacy in male mice compared to females (data not shown), yet all main experiments were conducted exclusively in female mice. Given the strong sex bias in SLE epidemiology (approximately 9:1 female-to-male ratio) and potential differences in immune responses between sexes, this observation warrants systematic investigation rather than a footnote. Presenting the sex-differential data or alternatively, conducting adequately powered sex-stratified analyses would substantially strengthen the manuscript.
(7) Translational claims are premature.
The manuscript repeatedly emphasizes advantages over cell therapy (low immunogenicity, scalable production, no requirement for lymphodepletion) as if these are established properties of V-CD19-Exo. However, no experiments directly compare V-CD19-Exo to CAR-NK or CAR-T cells in terms of efficacy, immunogenicity, or safety. Similarly, claims of "scalable production" and "high batch-to-batch consistency" are not supported by any manufacturing or quality control data. These statements should be toned down or supported with empirical evidence.
Reviewer #3 (Public review):
Summary:
This manuscript describes the development of engineered NK-92-derived extracellular vesicles (EVs) displaying CD19scFv for targeted treatment of systemic lupus erythematosus (SLE). Using a CD19scFv-LAMP2B fusion strategy, the authors generated EVs intended to selectively target pathogenic B cells in the MRL/lpr lupus mouse model. The study reports reductions in CD19⁺CD20⁺ B-cell populations, improvements in proteinuria and renal histopathology, decreased inflammatory cytokines and autoantibody levels, reduced splenomegaly, and improved survival outcomes following treatment. The work aims to position engineered EVs as a cell-free alternative to CAR-T/CAR-NK therapies for autoimmune disease treatment. While the concept is interesting and potentially translational, the study currently lacks sufficient methodological rigor, EV purification standards, mechanistic validation, and comprehensive characterization to fully support many of the claims presented.
Strengths:
(1) The study addresses an important unmet clinical need in systemic lupus erythematosus and explores an innovative cell-free therapeutic strategy.
(2) The concept of combining CAR-like targeting approaches with engineered EVs is interesting and potentially translational.
(3) The manuscript includes both in vitro and in vivo experiments, including functional renal assessments, immune profiling, histopathology, and survival studies.
(4) The authors attempt to evaluate multiple disease-associated readouts, including proteinuria, cytokines, autoantibodies, splenomegaly, and survival outcomes, which strengthens the overall biological relevance of the work.
(5) The use of engineered NK92-derived vesicles as a scalable alternative to CAR-NK therapy represents a potentially attractive therapeutic platform.
(6) The in vivo therapeutic observations in the MRL/lpr lupus model are encouraging and warrant further mechanistic investigation.
Weaknesses:
(1) The EV isolation strategy is not sufficiently rigorous for defining the isolated particles as "exosomes" according to current International Society for Extracellular Vesicles/MISEV guidelines. The precipitation-based workflow without density gradient purification or SEC raises major concerns regarding EV purity and identity.
(2) No direct validation was provided demonstrating successful surface localization or functional accessibility of CD19scFv on EV membranes.
(3) The characterization of EVs is incomplete and insufficient. Additional positive/negative EV markers, purity metrics, and orthogonal characterization methods are required.
(4) The absence of density gradient ultracentrifugation is particularly concerning, given the systemic injection of EV preparations into mice, as contaminating soluble factors and non-vesicular particles may contribute to the observed therapeutic effects.
(5) The manuscript lacks adequate mechanistic studies explaining how engineered EVs mediate B-cell depletion or immune modulation.
(6) The in vitro functional assays are weakly designed, particularly the use of A549 cells for evaluating CD19-targeted vesicle function.
(7) Important methodological details are missing, including EV normalization strategies, flow cytometry gating controls, blinding procedures, and randomization approaches.
(8) Several figures, particularly TEM and western blot images, are of low quality and difficult to interpret.
(9) The study does not sufficiently exclude the possibility that observed therapeutic effects result from contaminating soluble immune mediators rather than EV-specific activity.
(10) Broader immune profiling is lacking despite the systemic immune complexity of SLE.
(11) The statistical analysis section includes tests that are not reflected in the Results section, creating concerns regarding data presentation and consistency.
(12) Overall, while the concept is interesting, the manuscript currently falls short of the experimental rigor expected for high-impact translational EV studies.