Peer review process
Not revised: This Reviewed Preprint includes the authors’ original preprint (without revision), an eLife assessment, and public reviews.
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- Reviewing EditorLaura BradfieldThe University of Sydney, Sydney, Australia
- Senior EditorLu ChenStanford University, Stanford, United States of America
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
Summary:
The uniqueness of this paper is the study of the formation of temporal binding-dependent memories in the cntnap2 mouse, a long-standing mouse model of autism that has been used to test therapeutic modalities.
Strengths:
I liked the combination of optical recordings and interventions and the backup of primary observations with control experiments.
Weaknesses:
(1) Fiber photometry recordings are too coarse to give salient clues to the underlying mechanism.
(2) Are perturbed pyramidal cells causally responsible for the altered trace? What can be concluded about the possible role of inhibitory interneurons as potential drivers? The observations focus on abnormal regional activity as observed with fiber photometry and manipulated by optogenetics. The authors should state clearly the limits of their conclusions.
(3) I found the "trace" nomenclature confusing. "....in which mice are required to memorize the association between a tone (Conditioned Stimulus) and a mild electric foot-shock (Unconditioned Stimulus), separated by a time interval called Trace (Sellami et al., 2017)." It seems that the conceptual model invokes the creation of an [eligibility] trace, characterized by its progressive disappearance over time. It may be a convention in the field or a matter of language, but it seems perverse to use "trace" to label the time interval rather than the entity that is decaying. If this is an accepted convention going back to Howard Eichenbaum, the authors should cite the paper that first introduced the convention.
(4) I would advocate for the addition of some discussion points for the authors to consider.
a) Is the retention of activity in CA1 related to phenomena at the cellular or subcellular level in CA1 pyramidal cells? I'm thinking of dendritic, delayed, and stochastic CaMKII activation (DDSC) as defined by Yasuda's group or short-term and associative plasticity of calcium dynamics (STAPCD) as delineated by Caya-Bissonette and Beique.
b) Was the optogenetic intervention ever administered in a delayed fashion, capitalizing on the temporal advantages of optogenetics to probe dynamics?
c) Is the newfound reliance on corticostriatal pathways something more than compensation at the behavioral level? Could it be driven in part by the ASD-related genetic changes?
Reviewer #2 (Public review):
The authors investigate the contribution of dorsal CA1 hippocampal dysfunction to cognitive impairments in the Cntnap2 knockout mouse model of autism spectrum disorder. Building on previous evidence implicating the hippocampus in episodic and relational memory processes, they combine trace fear conditioning, fiber photometry, optogenetic manipulation, a relational/declarative memory radial maze task, and cFos mapping to test whether altered CA1 function contributes to deficits in temporal binding and memory flexibility.
The study has several important strengths. First, the work addresses a relatively understudied aspect of autism-related cognition, namely hippocampal-dependent memory processes, whereas much of the literature has focused on social behavior, cortical circuits, or striatal dysfunction. Second, the authors employ multiple complementary approaches that converge on a coherent mechanistic hypothesis. The behavioral data demonstrate a reduced ability of Cntnap2 knockout mice to retain associations across long temporal gaps. Fiber photometry recordings reveal reduced dorsal CA1 activity during conditions that challenge temporal binding, and optogenetic activation of dorsal CA1 neurons during the trace interval is sufficient to rescue memory performance. Together, these findings provide strong support for a causal contribution of dorsal CA1 activity to temporal binding deficits in this model.
The second major strength of the manuscript is the extension of these findings to a more complex hippocampus-dependent memory task. The radial maze experiments indicate that Cntnap2 knockout mice show impaired memory flexibility and a greater reliance on egocentric learning strategies. The accompanying cFos analyses suggest altered recruitment of hippocampal and striatal networks during learning, providing a systems-level framework that may explain the observed behavioral phenotype.
Overall, the main conclusions regarding impaired temporal binding and reduced dorsal CA1 engagement are well supported by the data. The optogenetic rescue experiments are particularly compelling because they move beyond correlation and directly test causality. The manuscript therefore makes a meaningful contribution to our understanding of how hippocampal dysfunction may contribute to cognitive abnormalities associated with autism.
Weaknesses:
Some conclusions are necessarily more inferential than others. In particular, the interpretation that the observed behavioral phenotype reflects a broader shift from hippocampal-dependent declarative memory toward striatum-dependent procedural learning is supported primarily by cFos activity patterns and behavioral strategy measures. While the data are consistent with this interpretation, they do not directly demonstrate a causal reorganization of memory systems. Similarly, although the findings identify a mechanism in the Cntnap2 model, caution is warranted when extrapolating these conclusions to autism spectrum disorder more broadly; but I believe this caution is addressed in the discussion.
Despite these limitations, the study presents a coherent and well-executed body of work that provides novel mechanistic insight into hippocampal contributions to cognitive dysfunction in a widely used autism model. The findings should be of considerable interest to researchers studying hippocampal function, memory systems, and neurodevelopmental disorders.
Reviewer #3 (Public review):
Summary:
The manuscript evaluated behavioral phenotypes in the Cntnap2 knockout mouse using two behavioral paradigms: trace fear conditioning and a radial maze task. The trace fear conditioning training is normal, but memory generalization is impaired. The inflexibility is suggested to be related to low activity in dCA1 neurons, which can be rescued by ChR2. The radial maze task data suggested a similar conclusion. Brain-wide cFos mapping indicated impairments in the Cntnap2 knockout mouse. The brain-wide cFos mapping does not show direct correlations with Cntnap2, limiting the interpretation of these data in the context of this paper.
Strengths:
The behavior data are solid.
Weaknesses:
The underlying mechanism is not fully investigated.
Major points:
(1) The authors should thoroughly check their manuscript as there are many typos in the current version that affect the readability.
(2) In trace fear conditioning, the tone test impairment can be rescued by ChR2. Have the authors tried rescue experiments with Cntnap2? Rescue experiments in the radial maze task are also essential, either with ChR2 or Cntnap2.
(3) The quality of the cFos example image in Figure 3 is too low. The authors should also provide example images for the other brain regions in the supplementary data, if possible.
(4) The causal link between the brain-wide cFos mapping and the Cntnap2 knockout is weak. How to explain the increase of cFos cell densities in some brain regions, but the decrease in others?