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Not revised: This Reviewed Preprint includes the authors’ original preprint (without revision), an eLife assessment, public reviews, and a provisional response from the authors.
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- Reviewing EditorTatyana SharpeeSalk Institute for Biological Studies, La Jolla, United States of America
- Senior EditorLaura ColginUniversity of Texas at Austin, Austin, United States of America
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
Summary:
This manuscript investigates how rhythmically presented stimuli support working memory by using task-trained recurrent neural networks (RNNs) endowed with short-term synaptic plasticity. RNNs trained with rhythmic sequences have a marginal performance increase (0.4%) over models trained with jittered input and show increased phase-locking and oscillatory organisation during the sample period. While the question addressed in this paper is highly relevant, the core conclusion that regular temporal structures provide a functional scaffold for sequence working memory lacks evidence. The extensive post-hoc filtering pipeline obscures whether there is phase coding or not, and whether or not the found oscillatory phenomena are truly emergent or a mathematical artefact of the analytical selection criteria.
Strengths:
(1) The manuscript addresses a highly relevant question.
(2) The introduction is nicely written and presents relevant background work.
(3) The authors' results are robust in the sense that they analysed and trained an ensemble of models instead of single networks.
Weaknesses:
(1) Misalignment between analysis epoch and core claims. The manuscript argues that temporal regularity supports sequence working memory. However, the majority of analyses focus on the sample/encoding period rather than the delay period during which memory maintenance occurs.
(2) Ambiguity in the neural code (rate vs. phase). The decoding accuracies suggest that the memory can be well decoded from the instantaneous activity, implying a rate (not a phase) code. This raises two questions:
a) Can memory-related information be decoded directly from the oscillatory phase, particularly during the delay period?
b) What would be the mechanism with which the increase in phase organisation improves a representation that seems otherwise decoded/represented from activity levels?
(3) Absence of any RNN activity plots. The manuscript would benefit from showing, e.g., single neuron response plots, raster plots, phase histograms of units, etc. Are there actually spontaneous oscillatory dynamics as the paper writes (line 243)? Can the authors show baseline activity (which is also supposed to be oscillatory, line 219)?
(4) Potential concerns in the analysis pipeline: The data undergo an intensive, selective pipeline that might be susceptible to introducing circularity and selection bias. I highlighted some points here:
a) Many analyses are performed on (summed) data projected on demixed PCs (extracted from time-warped data). Crucially, dPCAs are not unsupervised; they already explicitly maximise the variance of interest.
b) For the phase extraction during sample encoding: after dPCA percentile clipping, z-scoring, and z-score clipping are applied (lines 762-764), low-amplitude trials are excluded (lines 779-781), and there is further selection based on a valid-point criterion and r2 thresholding (lines 804-805). Do all of these selection criteria risk introducing bias?
c) Some statistical assumptions are not explicitly evaluated. E.g., the sign-flip permutation test (lines 735-742) relies on sign-exchangeability.
d) For selectivity analysis of oscillatory organisation (Figure 4C, lines 893-896): Units are first selected by ANOVA, and then on the selected units further stats (Power and PLV) are computed. Unless the further stats are completely independent of the ANOVA, this may introduce selection bias.
e) The finding of stronger power around f0 given rhythmic inputs of that exact frequency seems somewhat circular (Figure 3A)?
f) The dPCA description seems a little odd, e.g., line 674, for the ordinal component you would normally actually average (i.e., marginalise out) everything except the ordinal axis.
(5) Conflation of RNN learning dynamics with working memory mechanisms. The authors show that rhythmic input makes learning marginally easier, but in principle, both RNNs reach full performance (so working memory can be done as well with either case). To avoid the findings depending on learning dynamics, it could be of interest to test the RNNs trained with jittered input on fixed input (or retrain RNNs with both jittered and non-jittered input). It is also unclear if the small increase in performance (0.4%) can be expected to hold across different initialisations and/or learning rate /regularisation strengths.
(6) STSP. It is unclear if the findings rely on STSP being present or not (or what the role of STSP is in the model at all currently). Note that in Liebe et al. 2025, RNNs were trained on an almost identical task without STSP, and phase-coding was demonstrated in the models.
(7) Writing redundancy. The methods subsections "Population signal construction for oscillatory analysis" and "Oscillatory phase organization during sample encoding" seem to define exactly the same quantity with different characters (activity projected in dPCA space), which leads to confusion (in one section, z is the PC component, in another, it's the complex signal). There are also slightly different definitions of the wavelets in either section, for which the reasoning is unclear.
Reviewer #2 (Public review):
Summary:
The authors train E-I recurrent networks with short-term synaptic plasticity on a sequential delayed match-to-sample task, comparing regular versus jittered sample timing. They report a small accuracy gain under rhythmic input, a more separable population geometry during encoding, organization of internal oscillations around the dominant input frequency, a preference for temporal order over feature encoding, and improved decodability and persistence of stimulus information in both activity and synaptic efficacy. A delay-period perturbation shows synaptic efficacy contributes more than activity to maintenance.
Strengths:
The model is well-specified. Dale's law, the STSP formulation, the training objective, and the hyperparameters are all reported clearly enough to reproduce, and code is shared. The statistical machinery is appropriate, with cluster-permutation tests for the spectral analyses and across-network sign-flip tests rather than naive pooling. The temporal-order versus stimulus-direction dissociation in Figure 4C is the most interesting result. The negative association between phase locking and direction selectivity is non-trivial and argues against a simple global-gain reading, and it connects to Liebe et al. 2025. The serial-position decoding curves and the synaptic-versus-neuronal perturbation are well-motivated tests of the maintenance claim.
Weaknesses:
The behavioral effect is very small. Match accuracy is 0.991 versus 0.987, and non-match is 0.973 versus 0.969, on networks already at the ceiling. The entire mechanistic analysis is built to explain a roughly 0.4 percentage point difference, and the paper does not establish that this difference is functionally meaningful rather than a marginal byproduct of the timing manipulation. The IOI-dependence result meant to support it is weak, with an R-squared of 0.071 at a p-value of 0.029 on n of 67.
The core spectral and phase results are close to definitional and should be framed that way. The regularity index R is computed from IOI variability, the dominant frequency f0 is computed from the same IOIs, and the oscillatory metrics in Figures 3 and 4 are then measured relative to f0 and correlated against R. This shows that more regular input produces internal phase progression closer to the input-derived reference frequency, partly restating the input statistics rather than uncovering an independent network mechanism. The phase-locking-increases-with-regularity finding is the clearest case. This does not invalidate the analyses, but the manuscript currently reads them as a mechanism when much of the signal is built into the measurement.
The only genuinely causal manipulation is the delay-period shuffle, and it is underpowered at n of 15. Its main conclusion, that synaptic efficacy matters more than activity for maintenance, largely recovers prior STSP results (Mongillo et al. 2008, Masse et al. 2019) rather than establishing something specific to rhythm. The result the authors most want, that disrupting synaptic state removes the rhythmic advantage, is predicted in the Discussion but not tested.
The authors should add a control that breaks the circularity (a held-out f0/phase reference, or shuffling R against the metric) and run the causal STSP-disruption test that is mentioned in the Discussion.
The oscillatory framing is stronger than the model supports. Phase locking to a periodic input can reflect temporal predictability or repeated preparation without self-sustained entrainment, and the authors acknowledge this once but then use entrainment-style language throughout. The signals are extracted from firing-rate units and should not be read as LFP or EEG oscillations.
The authors should show raw single-unit and population activity so readers can verify the oscillations before the filtered pipeline. The delay perturbation largely recovers Mongillo 2008 / Masse 2019 rather than anything rhythm-specific, and the relationship to Liebe et al. 2025 should be addressed in the Results.
Appraisal and impact:
The authors largely achieve their stated aim of describing how temporal regularity constrains recurrent dynamics in this model, and the temporal-order preference is a useful prediction. The reach of the conclusions exceeds the evidence in two places: the functional importance of the behavioral effect and the degree to which the phase results are independent of the input construction. With the framing corrected and one causal test added, this would be a useful contribution to the modeling literature on timing and working memory rather than a definitive account.