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- Reviewing EditorBrice BathellierCentre National de la Recherche Scientifique, Paris, France
- Senior EditorPanayiota PoiraziFORTH Institute of Molecular Biology and Biotechnology, Heraklion, Greece
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
In this methods paper, the authors introduce a novel and innovative imaging approach for simultaneous in vivo multiphoton imaging of the mouse brain combined with DMD-based one-photon patterned photo-stimulation in different axial planes. This is a highly exciting technique that enables the axial decoupling of optical imaging of deep neural circuits from surface photo-stimulation of spatially precise (tens of micrometres) brain spots. This method builds on previous developments from the same laboratory, combining DMD-based patterned photo-stimulation with in vivo electrophysiological recordings. To my knowledge, this is the first instance in which patterned photo-stimulation has been combined and axially decoupled from two-photon (2P) imaging.
Beginning with a thorough characterisation of the optical resolution of the photo-stimulation system, the authors applied this method to the olfactory bulb (OB) network, in which sensory inputs are topographically organised at the surface of the OB and thus ideally suited to demonstrate the relevance of this approach. They first showed that this technique can be used to rapidly reveal connectivity patterns of OB output neurons and to identify sister mitral cells. In addition, they manipulated a specific glomerular inhibitory population and demonstrated that these neurons provide spatially heterogeneous long-range inhibition of OB output neurons, with differential effects on mitral and tufted cells (a result previously observed in a paper from the same lab: Banerjee et al., 2015, Neuron). Altogether, the data demonstrate that this technique is well-suited for high-throughput functional mapping of neural circuit properties. The results are compelling and illustrate both the significant advance represented by this method and its feasibility.
Despite my initial enthusiasm, there are several concerns in the present study that must be addressed in order to rule out confounding observations and to resolve remaining uncertainties regarding photo-stimulation resolution. These include the following:
(1) Spatial resolution: Although the authors provide convincing data on spatial resolution in vitro, several observations throughout the paper suggest that the effective photo-stimulation precision may be lower than initially reported. For instance, in Figure 2, the authors observe repeated responses in neighbouring glomeruli (e.g., glomeruli #3 & #5, #4 & #6). To what extent could light scattering along the X/Y/Z-axis above the targeted glomerulus recruit en passage axons, resulting in the inadvertent activation of multiple glomeruli?
A further observation concerns the presence of "inhibited" sister mitral cells (Figure 3). The authors claim this is reminiscent of the differential spike-timing reported between sister cells (Dwawale et al., 2010, Nat Neuro). However, observing both excitatory and inhibitory responses following stimulation of glutamatergic inputs is an altogether different matter, particularly given that sister mitral cells are reciprocally connected via gap junctions. This observation requires further clarification and raises serious questions about the effective resolution of the stimulation. Could the inhibited cell simply correspond to a non-sister mitral cell receiving disynaptic feed-forward inhibition? To verify sister cell identity, the authors could confirm that the predicted sister cells share a similar odour receptive field compared to randomly selected mitral cell pairs. In their previous study employing analogous DMD-based photo-stimulation (Dhawale et al., 2010, Nat. Neurosci.), sister mitral cells did not exhibit such opposite response profiles (firing rate correlation of ∼0.7 between sister cells). Could the authors verify that a comparable activity correlation is also observed among the sister cells identified using ADePT in the present study? In Figure S6, the authors show recordings and stimulation of the same neurons co-expressing GCaMP and ChR2. Applying this experimental design to the mitral/tufted cell population (using a Tbet-Cre mouse transduced in the OB with both GCaMP and Chrimson virus) would constitute a valuable control to clarify the nature of these "inhibited" sister cells.
An additional concern relates to the 21 out of 162 mitral cells that were activated by two distinct glomeruli - a finding that is incompatible with the established OB wiring diagram and that further challenges the claimed stimulation resolution.
A critical control experiment is also absent: in a Thy1-GCaMP6 mouse lacking any light-sensitive opsin, do the authors observe any unintended side effects of photo-stimulation?
Regarding sister cells (Figure 3), tufted cells are not analysed alongside mitral cells in this dataset, whereas this is elegantly performed in Figure 5 using the DAT+ model. Could the authors also demonstrate how the technique can reveal the complete family portrait of sister mitral and tufted cells?
(2) The authors have explored only a limited set of photo-stimulation parameters, primarily varying light intensity. They should present additional tests, such as varying the spot size (which appears to be arbitrarily fixed at 30-50 µm) and the z plane of stimulation. The level of activation can vary considerably: for example, in Figure 3a(iii), identical stimulations elicit responses of markedly different amplitudes (see glom#3 and #4). In Figure 2, 5 out of 15 glomeruli failed to respond - could the choice of z-plane account for this variability? The stimulation duration (50-150 ms) also appears somewhat arbitrary: can the authors demonstrate that the technique is compatible with finer temporal patterns (e.g., 10 Hz stimulation for 500 ms using 20 ms light pulses)? What are the spatiotemporal and axial scanning limits of this approach, and can two or three glomeruli be targeted simultaneously with temporally patterned stimulation?
(3) One particularly relevant application of this method would be to guide photo-stimulation based on prior functional measurements - for instance, by generating a photo-stimulation mask specifically targeting odour-responsive glomeruli. In the DAT-Cre × Thy1-GCaMP6 experiment shown in Figure 5e, which glomeruli are activated by a given odour, and how does this odor responsiveness influence the efficiency of DAT+ cell-mediated inhibition?
Reviewer #2 (Public review):
Summary:
In this manuscript, Koh and colleagues describe ADePT (Axially Decoupled Photo-stimulation and Two-photon Readout), a modular approach for combining patterned one-photon optogenetic stimulation with two-photon calcium imaging in independently controlled axial planes. The method relies on a digital micromirror device together with a motorized holographic diffuser to generate spatially confined stimulation patterns while imaging deeper neuronal populations. As proof-of-principle applications, the authors use the system to map excitatory and inhibitory functional connectivity in the mouse olfactory bulb by stimulating superficial glomerular circuits and recording responses from mitral and tufted cells in deeper layers.
This is a well-executed Tools and Resources manuscript. The technical implementation is described in considerable detail, the optical performance is systematically characterized, and the biological experiments provide convincing demonstrations of the types of circuit questions that can be addressed using the method.
Strengths:
The greatest strength of the manuscript is the comprehensive technical characterization of the optical system. The authors carefully benchmark the spatial resolution, axial confinement, registration accuracy, calibration procedure, and practical operating limits of the setup. I found the extensive optical benchmarking particularly helpful, as it gives readers a realistic sense of the operating regime and practical limitations of the approach.
Another strength is the high level of methodological transparency. The optical design, calibration procedures, stimulation strategies, and analysis pipeline are described in sufficient detail that an experienced laboratory could realistically evaluate whether the system is suitable for its own applications. This level of documentation is particularly appropriate for a Tools and Resources article.
A further strength is the clear positioning of ADePT relative to existing approaches. The authors are transparent about the trade-off between spatial resolution and implementation complexity: ADePT does not provide single-cell photostimulation, but offers flexible axial separation, a large stimulation field, and cellular-resolution two-photon readout in deeper planes without requiring a full holographic stimulation system. This defines a credible and potentially useful experimental niche.
The biological applications convincingly demonstrate the utility of ADePT. The experiments identifying sister mitral/tufted cells through selective glomerular stimulation and the mapping of heterogeneous inhibitory influences from DAT-positive interneurons illustrate the types of functional connectivity questions that become experimentally accessible with this approach. Importantly, the authors generally avoid overstating these biological findings and appropriately present them as proof-of-principle demonstrations of the technology.
Weaknesses:
The primary limitation is inherent to the method itself rather than the execution of the study. Because ADePT relies on one-photon patterned illumination, photo-stimulation remains restricted to relatively superficial structures and does not achieve single-cell spatial resolution. The authors appropriately acknowledge these constraints and clearly position the method within this operating regime. Consequently, ADePT occupies a useful niche for interrogating spatially organized functional units such as olfactory glomeruli or cortical barrels, rather than applications requiring single-cell precision or deeper tissue penetration.
Although the manuscript describes the approach as relatively simple and cost-effective, implementation still requires careful optical alignment, registration, calibration, and optimization. This does not diminish the value of the approach, but terms such as modular or accessible may better reflect the practical implementation than simple. Likewise, a brief bill of materials, approximate add-on cost, and indication of which components are essential versus substitutable would help prospective users assess the accessibility of the system.
Finally, the manuscript provides an impressive level of technical characterization, but much of the practical guidance for adopting the system is distributed across the Results and Discussion. Bringing together the principal limitations, recommended operating regime, expected calibration workflow, evidence for long-term alignment stability, and the circumstances in which ADePT is preferable to alternative approaches would further strengthen the manuscript as a community resource.