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- Reviewing EditorJeremy DayUniversity of Alabama at Birmingham, Birmingham, United States of America
- Senior EditorKate WassumUniversity of California, Los Angeles, Los Angeles, United States of America
Reviewer #1 (Public Review):
Guglielmo et al. characterized addiction-like behaviors in more than 500 outbred heterogeneous stock (HS) rats using extended access to cocaine self-administration (6 h/daily) and analyzed individual differences in escalation of intake, progressive-ratio (PR) responding, continued use despite adverse consequence (contingent foot shocks), and irritability-like behavior during withdrawal. By principal component analysis, they found that escalation of intake, progressive ratio responding, and continued use despite adverse consequences loaded onto the same factor, whereas irritability-like behaviors loaded onto a separate factor. Characterization of rats in four categories of resilient, mild, moderate, and severe addiction-like phenotypes showed that females had higher addiction-like behaviors, particularly due to a lower number of resilient individuals, than males. The authors suggest that escalation of intake, continued use despite adverse consequences, and progressive ratio responding are highly correlated measures of the same psychological construct and that a significant proportion of males, but not females may be resilient to addiction-like behaviors. The amount of work in this study is impressive, and the results are interesting. However, there are several issues that need to be addressed to improve their manuscript. In particular, the language should be toned down and the statistical analysis approach could be improved.
Strengths: Large dataset. Males and females included.
Weaknesses: Language and statistical analysis can be improved.
Reviewer #2 (Public Review):
Summary:
In this paper by de Guglielmo and colleagues, the authors were interested in analyzing addiction-like behaviors using a very large number of heterogeneous outbred rats in order to determine the relationships among these behaviors. The paper used both males and females on the order of hundreds of rats, allowing for detailed and complex statistical analyses of the behaviors. The rats underwent cocaine self-administration, first via 2-hour access and then via 6-hour access. The rats also underwent a test of punishment resistance in which footshocks were administered a portion of the time a lever was pressed. The authors also conducted a progressive ratio test to determine the break point for "giving up" pressing the lever and a bottle-brush test to determine the rats' "irritability". Ultimately, principal component analysis revealed that escalation of intake during 6-hour access, punishment resistance, and breakpoint all loaded onto the same principal component. Moreover, the authors also identified a subgroup of "resilient" rats that qualitatively differed from the "vulnerable" rats and also identified sex differences in their work.
Strengths:
The use of heterogeneous rats and the use of so many rats are major strengths of this paper. Moreover, the statistical analyses are particular strengths as they enabled the identification of the three measures as likely reflecting a single underlying construct. The behavioral methods themselves are also strong, as the authors used behavioral measures commonly used in the field that will enable comparison with the field at large. In general, the results support most of the conclusions and provide a wealth of data to the field.
Weaknesses:
Because the authors used so many rats (~600), it is not clear how strong the effects are. That is, a large n makes it easy to identify small effect sizes, but no effect sizes are presented regarding the findings.
The Discussion includes parts that argue that the extended access model is a better model of addiction than short access and suggests that this paper provides support for that. However, there were no rats given short-access for the same period of time as the rats in this paper - i.e., no comparison group. Rather, the only comparison that can be made is as the rats transition from short to long access. The data in Figure 1B appear to show that the rats continue their increase in cocaine intake when they transition from short access to long access. The authors do not provide any statistical analyses about this escalation of intake during short access. However, they claim that "measures related to short-term cocaine intake" were orthogonal to those collected during longer access periods, yet it is not clear to me what measures those are. Nonetheless, as indicated in Figure 1H, it appears that the rats consistently shift from PC1 to PC2 across self-administration, regardless of whether they are in the short or long access period. That is, the long-access measures appear to simply be a continuation of the pattern begun during short access. As a result, notwithstanding the lack of a true short-access control group, it is difficult to see how the authors can draw conclusions about short vs. long access in this paper.
Moreover, as illustrated in Figure 3A, the resilient vs. vulnerable subtypes are apparent during short access self-administration (i.e., they do not require long-access self-administration to develop or be revealed). This suggests, if anything, that short access would be sufficient for identifying such groups. Similarly, Figure 5 shows that short access would be sufficient to identify the "low" vulnerability quartile vs. the other three groups.
During the discussion, the authors briefly discuss gender differences with regard to cocaine use disorder, with the authors trying to claim that women may be more vulnerable to cocaine use disorder. However, the two papers cited do not support that, as they are papers with rodents. A recent comprehensive review on humans with regard to cocaine craving and relapse noted no reliable gender differences (Nicolas et al., 2022, Pharmacological Reviews) and, as the authors themselves noted, men suffer from cocaine use disorder at higher rates than women.
The authors noted that the rats received 0.5 mg/kg/infusion of cocaine but provided no explanation for how this dosing was maintained (or whether it was maintained) across the length of the study. Considering that rats, especially males, increase in size quite a bit during this stage, this could affect measures like intake as well as skew sex difference results. Likewise, the data are presented strictly in the number of cocaine infusions, which does not allow for consideration of body weight.
In the Introduction, the authors make a number of arguments in the second paragraph that have no citations and, therefore, are unsupported.
Reviewer #3 (Public Review):
Summary: The manuscript by de Guglielmo et al. presents data demonstrating that escalation of drug intake, increased motivation for drug under a progressive ratio, and drug-seeking despite adverse consequence can be explained by the same construct, while irritability-like behavior during withdrawal is statistically unrelated to an addiction-like phenotype.
Strengths: It is commendable that the authors used large cohorts of heterogenous male and female rats to mitigate common preclinical limitations that can hinder the translational relevance of research findings. The overall question is important and the authors provide a large amount of data to support their claim.
Weaknesses: However, there are a number of factors - such as behavioral rate - that are not considered and likely co-vary with other measures. This is critical as previous work has shown that rate of behavior in reinforcement tasks is a large determinant of sensitivity to both drug effects on that behavior and punishers. This is not considered and but additional information and tempering the interpretation of the data would further strengthen the manuscript.