Author response:
The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.
Reviewer 1:
We thank the reviewer for their comments and suggestions. We have made several edits to the paper to address these comments, including the addition of several new control experiments, corrections to mislabeled figures in Fig 2, and other additions to improve the clarity of several figures.
This work is missing several controls that are necessary to substantiate their claims. My most important concern is that the optogenetic screen for neurons that alter pathogenic lawn occupancy does not have an accompanying control on non-pathogenic OP50 bacteria. Hence, it remains unclear whether these neuronal inhibition experiments lead to pathogen-specific or generalized lawn-leaving alterations. For strains that show statistical differences between - and + ATR conditions, the authors should perform follow-up validation experiments on non-pathogenic OP50 lawns to ensure that the observed effect is PA14-specific. Similarly, neuronal inhibition experiments in Figures 5E and H are only performed with naïve animals on PA14 - we need to see the latency to re-entry on OP50 as well, to make general conclusions about these neurons' role in pathogen-specific avoidance.
We have added data from new control experiments to Fig. S1 (subfigures B, C) for both exit and re-entry dynamics on OP50. We find that inhibition of neurons produces different effects on both lawn entry and exit on PA14 compared to OP50. We observed that inhibition of neurons failed to change the re-entry dynamics for any of the lines which showed delayed latency to re-entry on PA14. Our results suggest that the neural control of re-entry dynamics we see are PA14 specific.
My second major concern is regarding the calcium imaging experiments of candidate neurons involved in lawn re-entry behavior. Although the data shows that AIY, AVK, and SIA/SIB neurons all show reduced activity following pathogen exposure, the authors do not relate these activity changes to changes in behavior. Given the well-established links between these cells and forward locomotion, it is essential to not only report differences in activity but also in the relationship between this activity and locomotory behavior. If animals are paused outside of the pathogen lawn, these neurons may show low activity simply because the animals are not moving forward. Other forward-modulated neurons may also show this pattern of reduced activity if the animals remain paused. Given that the authors have recorded neural activity before and after contact with pathogenic bacteria in freely moving animals, they should also provide an analysis of the relationship between proximity to the lawn and the activity of these neurons.
In response, we added an additional supplementary figure S7 to illustrate the role of each neuron in navigational control and added text to the discussion to better explain the role of each neuron type in the regulation of re-entry, in light of our previously published work on SIA in speed control.
This work is missing methodological descriptions that are necessary for the correct interpretation of the results shown here. Figure 2 suggests that the determination of statistical significance across the optogenetic inhibition screen will be found in the Methods, but this information is not to be found there. At various points in the text, authors refer to "exit rate", "rate constant", and "entry rate". These metrics seem derived from an averaged measurement across many individual animals in one lawn evacuation assay plate. However "latency to re-entry" is only defined on a per-animal basis in the lawn re-exposure assay. These differences should be clearly stated in the methods section to avoid confusion and to ensure that statistics are computed correctly.
Additional details have been added to the methods section to provide more in depth information on the statistical analysis performed. In brief, the latency to re-entry is calculated in the same way across all assays – re-entry events across replicate experiments for a given experimental condition are aggregated together and used to calculate relevant statistics.
This work also contains mislabeled graphs and incorrect correspondence with the text, which make it difficult to follow the authors 'claims. The text suggests that Pdop-2::Arch3 and Pmpz-1::Arch3 show increased exit rates, whereas Figure 2 shows that Pflp-4::Arch3 but not Pmpz-1::Arch3 has increased exit rate. The authors should also make a greater effort to correctly and clearly label which type of behavioral experiment is used to generate each figure and describe the differences in experimental design in the main text, figure legends, and methods. Figure 2E depicts trajectories of animals leaving a lawn over a 2.5-minute interval but it is unclear when this time window occurs within the 18-hour lawn leaving assay. Likewise, Figure 2H depicts a 30-minute time window which has an unclear relationship to the overall time course of lawn leaving. This figure legend is also mislabeled as "Infected/Healthy", whereas it should be labeled "-/+ ATR".
In Figures 2C and F, the x-axis labels are in a different order, making it difficult to compare between the 2 plots. Promoter names should be italicized. What does the red ring mean in Figure 2A? Figure 2 legend incorrectly states that four lines showed statistically significant changes for the Exist rate constant - only 2 lines are significant according to the figure.
We thank the reviewer for identifying this embarrassing error. Figure 2C and F were flipped, and we have corrected this, we are sorry for the error. Promoter names have been italicized, and we have added additional text in the captions that the red ring is a ring light for background illumination of the worms. In addition, we have corrected the error in the figure legends from “Infected/Healthy” to “+/- ATR”.
Lines in figure 2C and 2F are ordered by significance rather than keeping the same order in both. Majority feedback from colleagues suggested that this ordering was preferred.
This work raises the interesting possibility that different sets of neurons control lawn exit and lawn re-entry behaviors following pathogen exposure. However, the authors never directly test this claim. To rigorously show this, the authors would need to show that lawn-exit-promoting neurons (CEPs, HSNs, RIAs, RIDs, SIAs) are dispensable for lawn re-entry behavior and that lawn re-entry promoting neurons (AVK, SIA, AIY, MI) are dispensable for lawn exit behavior in pathogen-exposed animals.
We agree with the reviewer’s comments that there is insufficient evidence to show a complete decoupling of lawn exit and lawn re-entry. However, we note that our screen results show that only 1 line (dop-2) shows changes in both exit and re-entry dynamics upon neural inhibition (Fig. 2). This seems to suggest that at least some degree of neural control of re-entry is decoupled from exit.
Please label graph axes with units in Figure 1 - instead of "Exit Rate" make it #exits per worm per hour, and make it more clear that Figures 1C and E have a different kind of assay than Figures 1A, B and D. There should be more consistency between the meaning of "pre/post" and "naive/infected/healthy" - and how many hours constitutes post.
We have edited Figure 1 and made additions to the captions of figure 1 to make both points clearer. We have also standardized our language for subsequent figures (such as figure 5) to provide less ambiguity in pre/post and naïve/infected/healthy.
Figure 5 - it should be made more clear when the stimulation/inhibition occurred in these experiments and how long they were recorded/analyzed.
We have added additional details to the figure captions to make it clearer when the data was collected.
Workspaces and code have been added under a data availability section in the manuscript.
Reviewer 2:
However, the paper's main weakness lies in its lack of a detailed mechanism explaining how the delayed reentry process directly influences the actual locomotor output that results in avoidance. The term 'delayed reentry' is used as a dynamic metric for quantifying the screening, yet the causal link between this metric and the mechanistic output remains unclear. Despite this, the study is well-structured, with comprehensive control experiments, and is very well constructed.
We thank the reviewer for their comments and suggestions. We have added additional data and details to our work to cover these weaknesses, as can be seen in our responses to the suggestions below.
(1) A key issue in the manuscript is the mechanistic link between the delayed process and locomotor output. AIY is identified as a crucial neuron in this process, but the specifics of how AIY influences this delay are not clear. For instance, does AIY decrease the reversal rate, causing animals to get into long-range search when they leave the bacterial lawn? Is there any relationship between pdf-2 expression and reversal rates? Given that AIY typically promotes long-range motion when activated, the suppression of this function and its implications on motion warrants further clarification.
We have included additional data to explain how AIY might be able to regulate lawn entry behaviors and have added more to the discussion to explain how neural suppression might lead to changes in the behavior (new figure S7). Both AIY and SIA dynamics have been linked to worm navigation. In previous work (Lee 2019), we have demonstrated that SIA can control locomotory speed. Inhibition of SIA decreases locomotory speed, and as a result may serve to drive the increased latency of re-entry.
AIY’s role in navigation has been previously established (Zhaoyu 2014), but we have added an additional supplementary figure and edited our discussion to further illustrate this point. As can be seen in the new figure S7, AIY neural activity undergoes a transition after removal from a bacterial lawn, going from low activity to high activity. This activity increase is correlated with a transition from a high reversal rate local search state to a long range search state characterized by longer runs. Inhibition of AIY during this long range search state increased the reversal rate resulting in a higher rate of re-orientations. This might serve as a part of the mechanistic explanation for AIY’s role in preventing lawn re-entry, as inhibition dramatically increased the rate of re-orientation, preventing worms from making directed runs into the bacterial lawn. However, there is an additional effect of the inhibition of AIY, not seen during food search. Inhibition of AIY in the context of a pathogenic bacterial lawn leads to stalling at the edge. Therefore, re-entry AIY could have an additional role in governing the animals movement, post exposure, upon contact with a pathogenic lawn.
(2) I recommend including supplementary videos to visually demonstrate the process. These videos might help others identify aspects of the mechanism that are currently missing or unclear in the text.
(4) The authors mention that the worms "left the lawn," but the images suggest that the worms do not stray far and remain around the perimeter. Providing videos could help clarify this observation and strengthen the argument by visually connecting these points
Additional supplementary videos (1-3) taken at several stages of lawn evacuation have been added to visually demonstrate the process.
(3) Regarding the control experiments (Figure 1E-G), the manuscript describes testing animals picked from a PA14-seeded plate and retesting them on different plates. It's crucial to clarify the differences between these plates. Specifically, the region just outside the lawn should be considered, as it is not empty and worms can spread bacteria around. Testing animals on a new plate with a pristine proximity region might introduce variables that affect their behavior.
We have reworded the paper to make it clearer that these new conditions on a fresh PA14 lawn represent a different type of assay from the lawn evacuation assay. Fresh PA14 plates will indeed have a pristine proximity region compared to plates where the worms have spread the bacteria.
These experiments were done to test if the evacuation effect is purely due to aversive signals left on the lawn or attractive signals left outside of the lawn. Given that worms are known to be able to leave compounds such as ascarosides to communicate with each other, we wanted to test that this lawn re-entry defect was not simply the result of deposited pheromones. Without any other method to remove such compounds, we relied on using fresh PA14 lawns instead to test this. We have updated the manuscript to clarify this point.
(5) The manuscript notes that the PA14 strain was grown without shaking. Typically, growing this strain without agitation leads to biofilm formation. Clarifying whether there is a link between biofilm formation and avoidance behavior would add depth to the understanding of the experimental conditions and their impact on the observed behaviors.
As the reviewer has noted, growth of PA14 without shaking might indeed lead to biofilm formation. This does represent a legitimate concern, as evidence from previous work has suggested that biofilm formation could be linked to pathogen avoidance as worms make use of mechanosensation to avoid pathogenic bacteria (Chang et al. 2011). However, we do not observe substantial formation of biofilm in our cultured bacteria, likely since our growth time might be insufficient for sufficient biofilm formation to occur. We also note that our evacuation dynamics appear to be of similar timescale to results reported in previous work which used different growth conditions. As such, we believe that our growth conditions thus represent similar conditions as to those historically used in the lawn evacuation literature.
Reviewer 3:
Weaknesses:
My only concern is that the authors should be more careful about describing their "compressed sensing-based approach". Authors often cite their previous Nature Methods paper, but should explain more because this method is critical for this manuscript. Also, this analysis is based on the hypothesis that only a small number of neurons are responsible for a given behavior. Authors should explain more about how to determine scarcity parameters, for example.
We have added more details to our paper outlining some of the details involved in our compressed sensing approach. We go into more detail about how we chose sparsity parameters and note that our discovered neurons for re-entry appear to be robust over choice of sparsity parameters. These additional details can be found in both the paper body and the methods section.
Line 45: This paragraph tries to mention that there should be "small sets of neurons" that can play key roles in integrating previous information to influence subsequent behavior. Is it valid as an assumption in the nervous systems?
We want to clarify that what is important is not that there are ‘small sets of neurons’, but rather that these key neurons make up a small fraction of the total number of neurons in the nervous system. More correctly: the compressed sensing approach identifies information bottlenecks in the neural circuits, and the assumption is that the number of neurons in these bottlenecks are small. This is the underlying sparsity assumption being made here that allows us to utilize a compressed sensing based approach to identify these neurons. We have reworded this section to make it clear that what is important is not that the total number of neurons is small, but that they must be a small fraction of the total number of neurons in the nervous system.
Line 125: "These approaches…" Authors repeatedly mentioned this statement to emphasize that their compressed sensing-based approach is the best choice. Are you really sure?
We agree that there are several approaches that might allow for faster screening of the nervous system. For example, many studies approach the problem by looking at neurons with synapses onto a neuron already known to be implicated in the behavior or find neurons that express a key gene known to regulate the behavior of interest. These approaches utilize prior information to greatly reduce the pool of candidate neurons needed to be screened.
In the absence of such prior information, we believe that our compressed sensing based approach allows a rapid way to perform an unbiased interrogation of the entire nervous system to identify key neurons at bottlenecks of neural circuits. Once these key neurons are identified, neurons upstream and downstream of these key neurons can be investigated in the future. This approach gives us the added advantage of being able to identify neurons that do not connect to neurons that are already implicated in the behavior, or that don’t have clear genetic signatures in the behavior of interest. Our approach further allows for screening of neurons with no clear single genetic marker without the next to utilize intersectional genetic strategies. We should not use the phrase “best choice” which might not be justified. We have reworded these statements, and we believe that compressed sensing based methods provide a complementary approach to those in the literature.
Line 42: If authors refer to mushroom bodies and human hippocampus in relation to the significance of their work, authors should go back to these references in the Discussion and explain how their work is important.
We thank the reviewer for this feedback, and we have added to our discussion to expand upon these points.
Line 151: "the accelerated pathogen avoidance" Accelerated pathogen avoidance does not necessarily indicate the existence of the neural mechanism that inhibits the association of pathogenicity with microbe-specific cues (during early stages: first two hours).
We agree with the reviewer’s statements that these results alone do not indicate the presence of an early avoidance mechanism. Other evidence for early avoidance mechanisms exists as seen in two choice assay experiments (Zhang 2005), and our results do seem to support this. However, we agree that early neural inhibition is insufficient evidence towards such a mechanism. We have thus removed this statement for accuracy.