Peptides that Mimic RS repeats modulate phase separation of SRSF1, revealing a reliance on combined stacking and electrostatic interactions

Decision letter after peer review:

Thank you for submitting your article "Peptides that Mimic RS repeats modulate phase separation of SRSF1, revealing a reliance on combined stacking and electrostatic interactions" for consideration by eLife. Your article has been reviewed by 2 peer reviewers, and the evaluation has been overseen by Douglas Black as the Reviewing Editor and James Manley as the Senior Editor. The following individual involved in the review of your submission has agreed to reveal their identity: Douglas J Kojetin (Reviewer #2).

The reviewers have discussed their reviews with one another, and the Reviewing Editor has drafted this to help you prepare a revised submission. This paper addresses a major limitation in the study of SRSF1, a critical and well-known alternative splicing factor. SRSF1 and other members of this family exhibit limited solubility due to their tendency to undergo liquid phase separation driven by their RS domains. The authors tested the hypothesis that short RS repeat peptides might compete with the intermolecular interactions that drive phase separation, and allow sufficient solubilization for biochemical and structural studies. The data convincingly show that short peptides with RS, ER, or DR repeats can render recombinant SRSF1 soluble. They go on to analyze the newly concentrated protein by NMR and present well-resolved and assignable NMR spectra of SRSF1 dissolved with RS8 as a co-solute. The authors use paramagnetic relaxation enhancement experiments to map interactions between RS8 and SRSF1. Their findings suggest that the peptide interactions with the RNA binding domains (RRMs) are similar to those of the RS domain and are mediated by a combination of ionic interactions between arginine and acidic side chains, and pi-stacking interactions with surface-exposed hydrophobic residues.

A second part of the study seeks to identify features of proteins that make them more likely to undergo phase separations. The authors use a bioinformatics approach to correlate the presence of RS repeats with the identity of proteins in databases of phase-separated material. They also use molecular modeling and software tools to predict additional RRM domains that might be prone to phase separation by looking for those containing acidic amino acids with neighboring surface-exposed aromatic/hydrophobic residues. These findings are much less convincing than the structural and biochemical studies. The findings for SR proteins, which localize to nuclear speckles are extrapolated to all kinds of RNA-binding proteins and cellular condensates. The observed fold enrichments are small. The sample sizes decrease rapidly with increasing repeat length, and it is not clear if the appropriate statistical tests were performed to correct for multiple hypothesis testing. Importantly, these predictions derived from the computational analyses are not tested experimentally.

Overall, the reviewers found the NMR and PRE data to be convincing. The use of short RS, ER, and DR peptides as co-solutes for insoluble SR-domain proteins is a novel and clever advance. The computational analyses are incomplete and over-interpreted. These findings would require experimental validation.

The reviewers and editor all found the solubilization and structural data presented in Figures 1 to 6A to be a valuable advance. However, the computational studies of Figure 6 B – F were found to be too preliminary and need validation to add much value to the manuscript. It is recommended that the authors remove Figure 6 B – F, or provide experimental validation for their interpretations of these findings. The paper should be revised to emphasize Figures 1 – 6A, to address the following essential points.

Essential revisions:

1. In Figure 1A, the sample sizes of proteins containing no RS, 2RS, 4RS etc. vary over a wide range. The authors should address whether the observed differences between percentages remain significant if size-matched subsets of the larger pools are sampled at random (multiple times). These will provide a more appropriate comparison set for the longer repeat-containing proteins. Please explain why the analysis was restricted to short RS repeats, and how short RS repeat proteins (2-8AA) can be considered representative of the SR protein family.

2. In Figure 1A, the authors should also assess other dipeptides and their repeats. It seems reasonably straightforward to repeat this analysis with every possible dipeptide to assess whether there is something special about SR, or if similar enrichments are seen with other dipeptide combinations, perhaps derived from other types of low-complexity domains.

3. In panel 1B, where multiple populations are compared against each other, have the p-values been corrected for multiple hypothesis testing? This criticism pertains to all of the informatics analyses throughout the manuscript. Additional details of how the statistical analyses were performed need to be explained in the methods.

4. For the PRE NMR-based structure calculations of the RS8/SRSF1(dRS) interactions using Xplor-NIH, additional information and analyses would improve the rigor of the reported studies. How many total independent Xplor-NIH structures were calculated? Was a single Xplor-NIH calculated structure used for MD simulations? How many independent MD simulations were performed? Was a single RS8 peptide included in the MD simulations? At what frequency are the interactions shown in Figure 5 populated in each simulation – could this be shown via distance histograms (https://amberhub.chpc.utah.edu/generating-histograms-with-cpptraj/)? Were there any restraints (PRE?) used for the MD simulations; if not, are the MD results consistent with the experimental PRE NMR data? The methods section does not describe what programs were used for MD trajectory analysis.

Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):

The strategy of using short RS (and similar peptides) to solubilize SFRS1 is clever, the experimental work is well done, and the NMR / PRE data are convincing. I have no major problems with this aspect of the work. The manuscript is well-written and easy to understand, with a few exceptions described below. I am less convinced by the conclusions drawn from the bioinformatic analyses. My primary concerns are detailed below.

1. In figure 1A, the sample size between no RS, 2RS, 4RS, … varies by quite a bit. Would the difference between percentages remain significant if sample size-matched subsets of the larger pools were selected at random (multiple times) for use as a comparison set with the longer repeat-containing proteins? Why was the analysis restricted to short RS repeats? How representative are short RS repeats (2-8AA) of the SR protein family?

2. In figure 1A, would you see a similar trend if you used a different dipeptide and repeats thereof? It seems reasonably straightforward to repeat this analysis with EVERY possible dipeptide to see if there is something special about SR, or if similar enrichment is seen with other dipeptide combinations.

3. In panel 1B, where multiple populations are compared against each other, have the p-values been corrected for multiple hypothesis testing? This criticism pertains to all of the informatics analyses throughout the manuscript. I looked for additional details concerning how the statistical analyses were performed in the methods, but could not find them.

4. In figure 6, it would be useful to repeat the analysis with just solved RRM structures, and just modeled RRM structures, and compare to the pooled data shown in Figure 6. Here again, it would be useful to know whether the p-values corrected for multiple hypothesis testing.

5. It should be relatively straightforward to test the model presented in the discussion, i.e. that acidic residues with neighboring hydrophobic residues are predictive of RRM proteins that localize to nuclear speckles. A mutational analysis demonstrating a change in speckle localization in cells, or even solubility in vitro, would help to test this model's validity.

Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):

Results section, 1st paragraph: The annotation of proteins that are present in condensates in the phase separation databases likely represents the minimal numbers as there are likely proteins not yet reported that can form or go into condensates. It would be useful to include a sentence in the Results section to indicate how this may over/underestimate the analysis in Figure 1.

Results section, 2nd subsection: Is there a published paper (that could be cited) that may have also inspired this thought? – "The high Arg composition in these proteins inspired us to use high concentrations of Arg amino acid in our protocol to purify and solubilize SRSF1." There are several published papers indicating that adding Arg to buffers can enhance general solubility.

For the PRE NMR-based structure calculations of the RS8/SRSF1(dRS) interaction using Xplor-NIH, additional information and analyses could improve the scientific rigor of the reported work. How many total independent Xplor-NIH structures were calculated? Was a single Xplor-NIH calculated structure used for MD simulations? How many independent MD simulations were performed? Was a single RS8 peptide included in the MD simulations? At what frequency are the interactions shown in Figure 5 populated in each simulation-could this be shown via distance histograms (https://amberhub.chpc.utah.edu/generating-histograms-with-cpptraj/)? Were there any restraints (PRE?) used for the MD simulations; if not, are the MD results consistent with the experimental PRE NMR data? The methods section does not describe what program(s) was(were) used for MD trajectory analysis.

Although five potential solubilizing repeat peptides were tested in Figures 2 and 3, it is possible that further enhancements to solubility could be gained from a larger structure-activity relationship (SAR) analysis. Perhaps the authors could allude to this in the manuscript (discussion?).