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Revised: This Reviewed Preprint has been revised by the authors in response to the previous round of peer review; the eLife assessment and the public reviews have been updated where necessary by the editors and peer reviewers.
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- Reviewing EditorRoberto BottiniUniversity of Trento, Trento, Italy
- Senior EditorBarbara Shinn-CunninghamCarnegie Mellon University, Pittsburgh, United States of America
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
(Editors' note: this version has been assessed by the Reviewing Editor without further input from the original reviewers. The authors have addressed the comments raised in the previous round of review.)
Summary:
This study aimed at replicating two previous findings that showed (1) a link between prediction tendencies and neural speech tracking, and (2) that eye movements track speech. The main findings were replicated which supports the robustness of these results. The authors also investigated interactions between prediction tendencies and ocular speech tracking, but the data did not reveal clear relationships. The authors propose a framework that integrates the findings of the study and proposes how eye movements and prediction tendencies shape perception.
Strengths:
This is a well-written paper that addresses interesting research questions, bringing together two subfields that are usually studied in separation: auditory speech and eye movements. The authors aimed at replicating findings from two of their previous studies, which was overall successful and speaks for the robustness of the findings. The overall approach is convincing, methods and analyses appear to be thorough, and results are compelling.
Weaknesses:
Eye movement behavior could have presented in more detail and the authors could have attempted to understand whether there is a particular component in eye movement behavior (e.g., blinks, microsaccades) that drives the observed effects.
Reviewer #2 (Public review):
Summary
Schubert et al. recorded MEG and eye tracking activity while participants were listening to stories in single-speaker or multi-speaker speech. In a separate task, MEG was recorded while the same participants were listening to four types of pure tones in either structured (75% predictable) or random (25%) sequences. The MEG data from this task was used to quantify individual 'prediction tendency': the amount by which the neural signal is modulated by whether or not a repeated tone was (un)predictable, given the context. In a replication of earlier work, this prediction tendency was found to correlate with 'neural speech tracking' during the main task. Neural speech tracking is quantified as the multivariate relationship between MEG activity and speech amplitude envelope. Prediction tendency did not correlate with 'ocular speech tracking' during the main task. Neural speech tracking was further modulated by local semantic violations in the speech material and by whether or not a distracting speaker was present. The authors suggest that part of the neural speech tracking is mediated by ocular speech tracking. Story comprehension was negatively related with ocular speech tracking.
Strengths
This is an ambitious study, and the authors' attempt to integrate the many reported findings related to prediction and attention in one framework is laudable. The data acquisition and analyses appear to be done with great attention to methodological detail. Furthermore, the experimental paradigm used is more naturalistic than was previously done in similar setups (i.e.: stories instead of sentences).
Weaknesses
While the analysis pipeline is outlined in much detail, some analysis choices appear ad-hoc and could have been more uniform and/or better motivated (other than this is what was done before).
Reviewer #3 (Public review):
I thank the authors for their extensive revision of this paper, and I found some elements greatly improved.
In particular, the authors do embrace a somewhat more speculative tone in the current version, which I think is fitting for this work, as the data seem (to me) to be not fully conclusive. The data set collected here is clearly valuable and unique (and I would encourage the authors to make it publicly available!), however, my overall impression is that the specific analyses reported here might not fully.
Despite the revised description of methods, results and figures, I still have trouble understanding many of the results and the authors conclusive interpretation of them. These are my main reservations:
(1) Regarding "individual prediction tendency" - thank you for adding clarifying methodological details and showing the data in a new Figure (#2). Honestly, however, I still can't say that I fully understand the result. For example, why is there also a significant response in the random condition as well? And how do you interpret the interesting time-course (with a peak ~200ms prior to the stimulus, and a reduction overtime from there?
Also (I may have missed this, but...) what neural data was used to train the classifier and derive the "prediction tendency" index? Was it just the broadband neural response? Is there a way to know which sensors contributed to this metric (e.g., are they predominantly auditory? Frontal?)? And is there a way to establish the statistical significance of this metric (e.g., how good the decoder actually was in predicting behavioral sensitivity?). I don't see any statistics in the results section describing the individual prediction tendency.
(2) Regarding the TRF analysis - Thanks for clarifying the approach used to obtain 2-second long "segments" of speech tracking. This is an interesting approach, however I think quite new(?) , and for me it raises a whole new set of questions, as well as additional controls and data that I would have liked to see, to be convinced that results are significant. I will elaborate:
- Do I understand correctly that you segment the real and predicted neural response into 2-second-long segments and then calculate the Pearsons' correlation between them to assess the goodness of the model? This is very unclear, since in the methods section you state only that "the same" analysis was performed as for the full data - but what exactly? Clearly, values will be very different when using such short segments. I feel that additional details are still required (and perhaps data shown) to fully understand the "semantic violation" analysis of TRFs.
- I would like to reiterate my previous comment regarding the use of permutation tests to verify the validity of TRF-based measures derived. This would be especially important when using new approaches (such as the segmentation used here). The authors argue that this is not needed since this was not done in their previously published study. However, this sounds a bit like "two wrongs make a right" argument... why not just do it, and let us know that this 2-second segmentation approach allows estimating reliable speech tracking?
- Following up on my previous comment that defining "clusters" as at least two neighboring channels (Figure 3) - the fact that this is a default in Fieldtrip is by no means sufficient justification! This seems quite liberal to me, especially given the many comparisons performed. Here too, permutations can help to determine the necessary data-driven threshold for corrections. This is of course critical for interpreting the result shown in Figures 3E&G that are critical "take home messages" of the paper - i.e., that the prediction-index from the first part of the experiment is related to speech tracking in the second part of the experiment. To my eyes, this does not look extremely convincing, but perhaps the authors can show more conclusive data to support this (e.g., scatter plots of the betas across participant?).
- A similar point can be made for the effect of semantic violations (though here the scalp-level result is somewhat more clustered). The authors point out that the semantic effect is a "replication" of their result reported in Schubert et al. 2023, but if I am not mistaken the results there were somewhat different (as was the manipulation). It would be nice to explicitly discuss the similarity/difference between these effects.
(3) Regarding the ocular-TRFs -
- Maybe this is just me, but I believe that effects that are robust should be clearly visible in the data, without the need for fancy "black-box" statistical models. In the case of the ocular TRFs, it is hard for me to see how these time-courses are not just noise (and, again, a permutation test would have helped to convince me...). The inconsistent results for horizontal and vertical eye-movements vis a vis the experimental conditions (single vs. multi-speaker conditions) don't help either, despite the authors argument that these are "independent" - but why should this be the case, especially if there is nothing really to look at in this task?
- I remain with this scepticism for the mediation-portion of the analysis as well... But perhaps replications from other groups or making the data public will help shed further light on this in the future.
Minor
- Thanks for adding information about the creation of semantic-violation stimuli. Since the violations and lexical-controls were taken from different audio recordings, it would have been nice to verify that differences between neural responses cannot be attributed to differences in articulations (e.g., by comparing their spectro-temporal properties).
