Peer review process
Revised: This Reviewed Preprint has been revised by the authors in response to the previous round of peer review; the eLife assessment and the public reviews have been updated where necessary by the editors and peer reviewers.
Read more about eLife’s peer review process.Editors
- Reviewing EditorGilbert FruhwirthKing's College London, London, United Kingdom
- Senior EditorTony NgKing's College London, London, United Kingdom
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
Summary:
This paper presents maRQup a Python pipeline for automating the quantitative analysis of preclinical cancer immunotherapy experiments using bioluminescent imaging in mice. maRQup processes images to quantify tumor burden over time and across anatomical regions, enabling large-scale analysis of over 1,000 mice. The study uses this tool to compare different CAR-T cell constructs and doses, identifying differences in initial tumor control and relapse rates, particularly noting that CD19.CD28 CAR-T cells show faster initial killing but higher relapse compared to CD19.4-1BB CAR-T cells. Furthermore, maRQup facilitates the spatiotemporal analysis of tumor dynamics, revealing differences in growth patterns based on anatomical location, such as the snout exhibiting more resistance to treatment than bone marrow.
Strengths:
(1) The maRQup pipeline enables the automatic processing of a large dataset of over 1,000 mice, providing investigators with a rapid and efficient method for analyzing extensive bioluminescent tumor image data.
(2) Through image processing steps like tail removal and vertical scaling, maRQup normalizes mouse dimensions to facilitate the alignment of anatomical regions across images. This process enables the reliable demarcation of nine distinct anatomical regions within each mouse image, serving as a basis for spatiotemporal analysis of tumor burden within these consistent regions by quantifying average radiance per pixel.
Weaknesses:
(1) While the pipeline aims to standardize images for regional assessment, the reliance on scaling primarily along the vertical axis after tail removal may introduce limitations to the quantitative robustness of the anatomically defined regions. This approach does not account for potential non-linear growth across dimensions in animals of different ages or sizes, which could result in relative stretching or shrinking of subjects compared to an average reference.
(2) Furthermore, despite excluding severely slanted images, the pipeline does not fully normalize for variations in animal pose during image acquisition (e.g., tucked body, leaning). This pose variability not only impacts the precise relative positioning of internal anatomical regions, potentially making their definition based on relative image coordinates more qualitative than truly quantitative for precise regional analysis, but it also means that the bioluminescent light signal from the tumor will not propagate equally to the camera as photons will travel differentially through the tissue. This differing light path through tissues due to variable positioning can introduce large variability in the measured radiance that was not accounted for in the analysis algorithm. Achieving more robust anatomical and quantitative normalization might require methods that control animal posture using a rigid structure during imaging.
Comments on revisions:
(1) Clarification of 2D Analysis. We strongly recommend that the authors explicitly define maRQup as a 2D spatiotemporal analysis technique. Since optical imaging quantification is inherently dependent on tissue type and signal depth, characterizing this as a 3D or volumetric method without tomographic correction is inaccurate. Please precede "spatiotemporal" with "2D" throughout the text to ensure precision regarding the method's capabilities.
(2) Data Validation and Scaling in Supplemental Figure g currently lacks the units necessary to support the assertion.
Non-Uniform Growth: The authors' method implies that mouse growth is linear and uniform in all directions (isotropic). However, murine growth is not akin to the inflation of a balloon; animals elongate and widen at different rates. The current scaling does not account for these physiological non-linearities.
Pose Variability: The scaling approach appears to neglect significant variability in animal positioning. Even under anesthesia, animal pose is rarely identical across subjects or time points.
Requirement for Evidence: Without quantitative data, there appears to be significant differences between the individual images and the merged image. If the authors assert that this is a "classical setting" where mouse positioning is 100% consistent and growth curves are identical in multiple dimensions, please provide specific references that validate these assumptions. Otherwise, the scaling must be corrected to account for anisotropic growth and pose differences or stated that scaling was only based on one dimension.
(3) Methodology of Spatial Regions The manuscript does not currently indicate how the nine distinct spatial regions were determined. Please expand the methods section to include the specific segmentation algorithms or anatomical criteria used to define these regions, as this is critical for reproducibility.
Reviewer #3 (Public review):
Summary:
The paper "The 1000+ mouse project: large-scale spatiotemporal parametrization and modeling of preclinical cancer immunotherapies" is focused on developing a novel methodology for automatic processing of bioluminescence imaging data. It provides quantitative and statistically robust insights on preclinical experiments that will contribute to optimizing cell-based therapies. There is an enormous demand for such methods and approaches that enable the spatiotemporal evaluation of cell monitoring in large cohorts of experimental animals.
Strengths:
The manuscript is generally well written, and the experiments are scientifically sound. The conclusions reflect the soundness of experimental data. This approach seems to be quite innovative and promising to improve the statistical accuracy of BLI data quantification.
This methodology can be used as a universal quantification tool for BLI data for in vivo assessment of adoptively transferred cells due to the versatility of the technology.
Comments on revisions:
The critiques have been taken care of appropriately.
