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Not revised: This Reviewed Preprint includes the authors’ original preprint (without revision), an eLife assessment, public reviews, and a provisional response from the authors.
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- Reviewing EditorJiwon ShimSeoul National University of Science and Technology, Seoul, Republic of Korea
- Senior EditorDominique Soldati-FavreUniversity of Geneva, Geneva, Switzerland
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
Summary:
The work of Bechara Rahme and colleagues provides an explanation as to how bacterially infected flies eventually die. While widespread tissue and multiorgan damage are to be expected in the latest stages of a systemic infection, the mechanisms leading to the host's death remain unresolved. To this end, this work illustrates the role of PrtA, a metalloproteinase found within Outer Membrane Vesicles (OMVs) secreted by Serratia marcescens, in inducing neuronal apoptosis and paralysis before death. Another interesting aspect of the work is the compromise of blood blood-brain barrier (BBB) by OMVs. BBB is different between mammals and flies; however, it merits scientific attention.
Strengths:
The strength of evidence lies in a wealth of experiments involving disparate innate immune mechanisms that either contribute (Imd, PPO1/2, Nox, Duox, SOD2) or oppose (hemocytes and Hayan protease) host defense. Moreover, the role of neuronal JNK and apoptic signaling is shown to contribute to host death.
Genetics is supported by experiments using chemical treatments (Vitamin C and mito-TEMPO) as host-protecting antioxidants, and the biochemical purification and quantification of OMVs and the PrtA protease.
Weaknesses:
However, the reliance on non-isogenised flies to provide quantitative data is unsafe, and at this point, the strength of the evidenceis apparently incomplete. The mutant flies used for the genes Key, Myd88, Hayan, and Nos are doubtfully comparable to the control fly strains used in terms of the general genetic background. The latter is of utmost importance in assessing quantitative traits.
The general background difference between control and test flies is also an issue when using tissue-specific expression via GAL4/UAS, because the UAS lines used are only apparently but not truly isogenic to the w flies used as controls.
Reviewer #2 (Public review):
Summary:
In this manuscript, the authors investigate the mechanisms underlying the virulence of OMVs using a Drosophila model. They reveal a complex interplay between host defenses and OMV pathogenicity. Although the study enhances our understanding of Drosophila innate immunity, additional evidence is needed to strengthen the conclusions.
Strengths:
(1) In Figure 1, Toll pathway mutants infected with OMVs displayed three distinct phenotypic outcomes: mildly enhanced resistance to OMV infection, a response similar to that of the control, or increased susceptibility. Therefore, in addition to Imd and Kenny mutants from the Imd pathway, further mutants, such as Relish and PGRP-LC, should be examined to assess whether the Imd pathway is involved in host defense against OMVs.
(2) Plasmatocytes clear particles via phagocytosis or endocytosis. However, flies lacking all hemocytes showed increased resistance to OMV challenge, raising the question of whether hemocytes actually aid the pathogen. To explore this hypothesis, the uptake of fluorescently tagged OMVs should be examined.
(3) Hayan cleaves PPO into active PO. However, Hayan and PPO mutants exhibit opposite phenotypes upon OMV injection, raising the question of whether OMV-induced pathogenesis is linked to melanization.
(4) Puckered mRNA levels were used as a read-out for JNK pathway activity. A transient induction of the JNK pathway was observed in head and thorax tissues. It would be beneficial if the authors could directly examine JNK activation in neuronal cells using immunostaining for pJNK.
(5) In Figure 4B, the kayak was knocked down using the pan-neuronal driver elav-Gal4. To confirm the specificity and validity of this observation, the experiment should be repeated using another neural-specific driver.
Weaknesses:
It is unclear how many Serratia marcescens cells a 69 nL injection of 0.1 ng/nL OMVs corresponds to.
Reviewer #3 (Public review):
Summary:
The authors investigate deficiencies in various immune responses, and also the prtA toxin's role in OMV toxicity. Some key interpretations are that the Imd pathway contributes to preventing OMV toxicity, but not Toll, and that Hayan and Eater somehow mediate OMV or PrtA toxicity. This descriptive effort is a solid set of experiments, although some experimental results may require further validation.
Strengths:
The breadth of experiments tests multiple immune parameters, providing a systematic effort that ensures a number of potentially relevant interactions can be recovered. Certain findings, such as the PrtA toxicity to flies, appear solid, and some interesting findings regarding Hayan and eater will be of interest to the fly immunity field.
Weaknesses:
It appears almost all results rely on the use of a single mutant representing the deletion of the gene. It's not clear if the mutations are always in the same genetic background, but this can be clarified. There are a couple of results that are confusing and may be internally contradicting, and should be additionally validated and clarified.