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- Reviewing EditorKassandra Ori-McKenneyUniversity of California, Davis, United States of America
- Senior EditorSofia AraújoUniversitat de Barcelona, Barcelona, Spain
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
Summary:
This work by Beaudet and colleagues aims at exploring the effect of phosphorylation on the formation of tau envelopes and consequently on axonal transport, both in vitro on reconstituted microtubules and in human excitatory neurons derived from IPSCs.
The authors found that a relatively widely used construct in which 14 serine or threonine residues, often hyperphosphorylated in Alzheimer's disease, are mutated to alanines (phosphodeficient), increases the density of tau envelopes compared to wildtype tau, whereas a phosphomimetic (same residues mutated to glutamic acid) reduces envelope density both in vitro and in human excitatory neurons derived from IPSCs.
By analysing the trafficking of different kinesins (KIF1a and KIF5C), they observed different effects of tau phosphorylation status on the movement of these two motors.
They then analyse transport of lysosomes by employing live imaging of lysotracker in human excitatory neurons derived from IPSCs transfected with wildtype, phosphodeficient or phosphomimetic tau, observing that phosphodeficient tau seems to reduce transport of lysosomes while phosphomimetic increases transport compared to wildtype tau.
Strengths:
(1) The work aims to study a novel and underexplored topic in the tau field, tau envelopes, and investigate their relevance to Alzheimer's disease pathology.
(2) Experiments are well conducted and of high quality.
Weaknesses:
Relying only on in vitro reconstituted microtubules and human neurons derived from IPSCs leaves some doubts about the relevance of these results for Alzheimer's disease, considering the embryonic state of IPSCs-derived neurons.
Reviewer #2 (Public review):
This manuscript examines how disease-associated hyperphosphorylation disrupts tau's role as a cooperative microtubule-binding regulator of intracellular transport. Using in vitro reconstitution assays and live-cell imaging in iPSC-derived neurons, the authors employ phosphomutant tau constructs (E14 to mimic hyperphosphorylation, AP to prevent phosphorylation) at 14 disease-associated residues to isolate phosphorylation effects independent of expression system-dependent PTM heterogeneity. The results show that hyperphosphorylated tau fails to form cooperative envelope-like structures on microtubules, instead binding diffusely and dissociating rapidly. In contrast, wild-type and phospho-resistant tau form cohesive envelopes that regulate motor protein access. At the single-molecule level, hyperphosphorylation reduces KIF5C inhibition while maintaining or enhancing KIF1A inhibition through altered processivity and detachment rates. In live neurons, hyperphosphorylated tau phenocopies tau knockout conditions, weakening tau-mediated inhibition of lysosome transport and increasing processive motility. The authors quantify tau binding using Gaussian mixture model-based image analysis and measure tau kinetics via FRAP, demonstrating that hyperphosphorylation-induced loss of cooperative binding correlates with dysregulated organelle transport. These findings establish a mechanism by which phosphorylation-driven disruption of tau's gatekeeper function on microtubules compromises axonal transport prior to aggregation in tauopathies. The paper provides interesting new knowledge for the field, but there are outstanding concerns that could be further addressed by the authors to strengthen and clarify the current manuscript:
(1) Lack of Phosphatase-Treated Control and Explicit WT Phosphorylation Quantification
Wild-type tau expressed in insect and mammalian cells is known to be phosphorylated by endogenous kinases (eg, GSK3, CDK5, MARK). The manuscript acknowledges this in the Discussion but provides no phosphatase-treated lysate control or quantification of endogenous phosphorylation on WT tau via phospho-specific Western blots. This leaves ambiguity about whether observed differences between WT and E14 reflect purely the introduced mutations or confounding baseline differences in phosphostate content.
(2) Limited Normalization of Motor Effects to Measured Tau Lattice Occupancy
Although kinesin trajectories are classified inside vs. outside tau envelopes (inherently normalizing to local tau density), motor parameters are not systematically reported as functions of tau fluorescence intensity across all constructs. Co-purifying MAPs or microtubule-modifying enzymes in cell lysates is not quantified or excluded, leaving residual uncertainty about tau-specificity of observed motor inhibition. This should be at least acknowledged in the results section.
(3) Insufficient Citation of Prior Neuronal Tau Envelope Evidence
In the Introduction, the authors state, "it was an open question if tau forms envelopes in neurons," but this understates existing evidence. Tan et al. (2019) report tau neuronal staining consistent with envelope formation, while Siahaan et al. (2021) provide more direct evidence in non-neuronal cells. The framing should acknowledge and integrate these prior findings.
(4) Unclear Wording on Expression System-Dependent Phosphorylation
The sentence "The phosphostate of tau is strongly dependent on the expression system" requires rewording. It is ambiguous whether this refers to the final phosphostate achieved after expression or the inherent phosphorylating capacity of each system. Clearer language would strengthen the methodological justification.
(5) Insufficient Quantification of Motor and Lysosome Transport Effect Magnitudes in Results Section
The data on molecular motor motility and lysosome transport are densely described. The magnitude of effects (fold-changes, percentage differences) should be explicitly stated in the Results section when first presenting findings to orient readers to biological significance. For example, effect magnitudes for lysosome run lengths, velocities, and directional bias should be quantified in text, not left to figure inspection.
(6) Incomplete Discussion of Projection Domain Necessity for Envelope Formation
The Discussion states the projection domain is "a critical regulator of both tau-tau and tau-microtubule interactions," but does not engage with prior domain dissection work. Tan et al. (2019) found that the entire projection domain is not necessary for envelope formation in vitro. The authors should discuss which projection domain regions are specifically regulated by phosphorylation vs. required for cooperativity, providing a more nuanced interpretation than implied by their current framing.