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- Reviewing EditorJulia CooperUniversity of Colorado Anschutz Medical Campus, Aurora, United States of America
- Senior EditorLynne-Marie PostovitQueens University, Kingston, Canada
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
Summary:
This is an interesting study that addresses whether mitochondrial DNA (mitoDNA) variants impact telomere length (TL), which may be relevant to potential maternal inheritance of TL in offspring. The study addresses this question using a cybrid model approach in which mitochondria from donor platelets from 7 individuals that vary in TL and differ in mitoDNA variants are introduced into 143B cells that lack mitochondria. MitoDNA variants that exhibited reduced complex I activity showed telomere shortening in cybrids and increased telomere dysfunction. Interestingly, these phenotypes could be reduced with NAC antioxidant and NAD+ supplementation, suggesting that ROS and oxidative DNA damage at telomeres contributed to the telomere shortening. They further showed that cybrids with lower levels of ROS correlated with longer TL in the lymphocytes of the mitochondrial donors.
Strengths:
This study provides compelling evidence that mtDNA variants influence TL through a mechanism involving mitochondrial-derived ROS, potentially causing telomeric oxidative damage. The data are robust, and the manuscript is well written. However, the study could be strengthened by addressing the following questions and minor weaknesses below.
Weaknesses:
(1) Introduction. Line 81, the relationship between TL and the risk of lymphoid and myeloid leukemia is not straightforward. POT1 variants associated with long TL increase the risk for lymphoid and myeloproliferative neoplasms (see PMID: 41564438 for example).
(2) Figure 1. Since sex also influences TL, it would be good to know the sex of the selected individuals or explain why this is not necessary.
(3) Please include a description of the 143B cells that were used for cybrid formation in the Results section when introducing the cybrids.
(4) Lines 155-156. The authors note that cybrids from donors 1 and 2 show "pronounced" telomere damage. This result indicates an increase in 53BP1-positive telomeres, which could be indicative of telomere dysfunction or damage. Quantification of the increased chromosome end fusions for cybrids 1 and 2 would strengthen the result. Do the increased fusions correlate with an increase in telomere signal-free ends? These should be apparent in the telomere FISH images of metaphase chromosomes.
(5) Lines 168-169. What is the evidence that the "in vitro metabolic shift" causes acute oxidative stress?
(6) Why did the elevated ROS in cybrid #3 (Figure 4C) not translate to shorter telomeres in the cybrid (Figure 2A)? Perhaps there is a difference between factors that determine TL in the cybrid vs the donor's lymphocytes? In Figure 4B, it appears that the statistical comparisons for mitochondrial superoxide are all relative to Cyb3. If so, why are the comparisons not with the parental 143B rho0 cell line? Please clarify.
(7) Given the heterogeneity in TL and mtDNA variants in the human population, the conclusions could be further strengthened by increasing the number of donors and cybrids analyzed. However, there are admittedly practical factors. Overall, these findings are compelling and provide a solid foundation for expanding this analysis in the future. This is more of a comment than a weakness.
Reviewer #2 (Public review):
Summary:
The authors aim to determine whether mitochondrial genotype influences telomere length. By generating cybrids harboring different mitochondrial backgrounds, the authors seek to establish a mechanistic link between mitochondrial status and telomere biology.
Strengths:
A major strength of the study is the use of cybrid technology, which provides a great approach to investigate the role of mitochondrial DNA independently of the nuclear genome. The authors also employ multiple complementary assays to assess telomere-related phenotypes associated with mitochondrial dysfunction. Together, these experiments generate an interesting dataset that will be of value to researchers interested in the intersection between mitochondrial biology, genome stability, aging, and development. These results also build on previous work supporting roles for ROS/mitochondria in driving telomere shortening.
Weaknesses:
The data support the conclusion that mitochondrial background is associated with differences in telomere length and telomere-related phenotypes. However, some of the mechanistic interpretations would benefit from additional evidence. In particular, the manuscript discusses mitochondrial influences on telomere shortening, yet telomere length in some experiments is assessed at a single time point. Consequently, the current data do not directly address the rate of telomere attrition. Differences observed between cybrid lines could potentially arise from events occurring during cybrid formation, clonal selection, or subsequent cell expansion. Longitudinal analyses across multiple passages, ideally beginning immediately after cybrid generation and controlling for population doublings, would help establish whether mitochondrial function directly affects telomere shortening dynamics. Some experimental results would also benefit from additional quantification, clarification, and some biological replicates are missing.
Overall, this study provides interesting evidence linking mitochondrial background to telomere biology. The cybrid models represent a useful resource for the field, and the work raises important questions regarding mitochondria-telomere communication.
Reviewer #3 (Public review):
Strengths:
Mahieu and colleagues address an interesting and underexplored question: whether non-pathogenic variation in the mitochondrial genome contributes to the inter-individual variability of human telomere length (TL). Using a Belgian Flow-FISH reference cohort (n=491) to identify donors at TL extremes, they generate transmitochondrial cybrids from platelets of seven donors of distinct mtDNA subhaplogroups and characterize the resulting cells with a broad and well-executed toolkit (TRF, TeSLA, ddTRAP, EPR-based mitoROS, Seahorse with permeabilized-cell ETC dissection, LC-MS metabolomics, telomeric PAR-FISH). The most compelling finding is that cybrids derived from donors with low complex I (CI) activity undergo rapid telomere shortening during the glycolysis-to-OXPHOS transition of cybrid formation, and that this is largely prevented by co-treatment with NAC and the NAD⁺ precursor nicotinamide riboside, supporting a model in which CI sustains the NAD⁺ pool required for PARP1-mediated repair of oxidative damage at telomeres. The authors further report an inverse correlation between donor lymphocyte TL and mitoROS in the corresponding cybrids, and provide preliminary evidence that the K1a-defining ATP6 A177T variant (m.G9055>A) may be enriched in long-telomere individuals.
Weaknesses:
(1) Statistical support and donor sampling for the central in vivo correlation (Figure 4C).
The inverse correlation between donor lymphocyte TL and cybrid mitoROS (R²=0.794, p=0.007) is the principal in vivo claim of the paper, but it is built on seven donors deliberately selected from the extremes of the Flow-FISH distribution. Sampling at the tails of the outcome variable can substantially inflate apparent correlation strength and significance. I would encourage the authors to (i) explicitly state this sampling structure where the correlation is introduced, (ii) report a leave-one-out sensitivity analysis to confirm the relationship is not driven by one or two donors (Cyb3 and Cyb6 appear to anchor the line), and (iii) where feasible, extend the analysis to additional donors with intermediate TL to test whether the relationship holds across the full distribution. Even a modest expansion (e.g., 4 to 5 additional donors at P25 to P75) would substantially strengthen this central claim.
(2) Reconciling the cybrid CI / TL relationship (Fig 3B) with the absence of a CI / TL relationship in donor lymphocytes (Figure 4A).
Figure 3B shows a strong correlation between CI activity and TL in cybrids (R²=0.87), while Figure 4A shows no correlation between donor CI activity (measured in the same cybrids) and donor lymphocyte TL. The authors acknowledge this, but the manuscript subsequently builds toward a CI-centric model of in vivo TL regulation, which seems to outrun the data. The most internally consistent interpretation is that the cybrid CI phenotype reports a sensitized in vitro response to the acute oxidative stress of the metabolic shift, rather than a steady-state determinant of leukocyte TL. I would suggest reframing the abstract, significance statement, and Discussion to make this distinction clearer. The in vitro CI / NAD⁺ / PARP1 axis is a strong finding on its own, while the in vivo role of CI activity (as opposed to ROS more broadly) is not yet established here. Donor #1's profile (very long lymphocyte TL, low CI activity, severe shortening in cybrids, no telomere inheritance in offspring) is informative in this regard and could be discussed more directly as a case that helps delineate where the cybrid model does and does not recapitulate in vivo biology.
(3) The K1a / ATP6 A177T inheritance claim.
The proposal that K1a (and specifically ATP6 A177T) contributes to maternal inheritance of long telomeres is intriguing but currently rests on three pedigrees (one of which, donor #1, does not support the hypothesis) and a chi-square test that does not reach significance (p=0.153, Figure 4F). The supporting evidence is also limited by the fact that platelet-mediated mitochondrial transfer delivers donor mitochondrial proteins, lipids, and residual mtRNA in addition to mtDNA, making it difficult to attribute the cybrid phenotype of donor #6 specifically to the ATP6 A177T variant. I would recommend either: (a) extending the genotyping screen to additional unrelated donors and, if feasible, confirming the effect of ATP6 A177T through an isogenic approach (e.g., mtDNA base editing in a clean background), or (b) softening the relevant statements to "suggestive trend warranting larger studies," and presenting the K1a observation as hypothesis-generating rather than supportive. The Ashkenazi-centenarian connection raised in the Discussion is an excellent direction for follow-up and could be framed accordingly.

