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- Reviewing EditorXiaobing ShiVan Andel Institute, Grand Rapids, United States of America
- Senior EditorLori SusselUniversity of Colorado Anschutz Medical Campus, Aurora, United States of America
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
Leukemia-driving NUP98 oncofusion proteins form chromatin-associated biomolecular condensates in the nucleus, and these structures are important for oncogenic transformation. Most NUP98 fusions do not contain domains that mediate the recognition of specific DNA elements. Instead, they entail domains that are important for chromatin regulation. For instance, the NUP98::KDM5A fusion features a fusion of the NUP98 N-terminus with the third PHD domain of the histone demethylase KDM5A. As PHD domains are critical for the recognition of methylated histones without any sequence specificity, it is not clear what controls the condensation and chromatin binding of NUP98::KDM5A, leading to the induction of oncogenic transcriptional programs.
In this work, the authors use a combination of cellular and in vitro studies to show that biomolecular condensation of NUP98::KDM5A is dependent on H3K4me3 binding. Their model proposes that concentration-dependent chromatin-associated condensation of NUP98::KDM5A depends on local densities of H3K4me3 on chromatin and the levels of the fusion oncoprotein. In line with this, the analysis of gene expression data from NUP98::KDM5A-positive AML cells shows a positive correlation between differentially expressed genes and H3K4me3 levels.
This is an interesting manuscript that aims to dissect the molecular mechanisms underlying biomolecular condensation of the NUP98::KDM5A oncoprotein. The work is solid, and the results are well explained and presented in a logical order. However, the study suffers from several weaknesses that if addressed would improve the study.
Major points:
(1) All cellular experiments are performed in settings of transient transfection of NUP98::KDM5A in non-hematopoietic cell types. These conditions are not physiologically relevant, as these cells do not depend on the fusion oncogene. Therefore, any claims about concentration-dependent effects on condensation need to be validated in AML cells that are driven by NUP98::KDM5A. While this may not be possible in primary patient-derived cells, several groups have published AML models of NUP98::KDM5A-driven AML that could be used.
(2) The results presented in Figure 4 are not entirely supportive of the mechanism. It is known that active gene expression correlates with high H3K4me3 levels; therefore, the correlations shown by the authors are expected. Yet, the authors do not discuss the fact that many H3K4me3-positive genomic regions do not show NUP98::KDM5A binding. This should be elaborated on in the discussion section.
(3) While the focus of the manuscript is on NUP98::KDM5A, this oncofusion is part of a family of >30 fusions that join the NUP98 N-terminus to a variety of factors with roles in epigenetic control and transcription. While the repertoire of NUP98 fusion partners is diverse with regard to functional domains, they all induce a conserved set of target genes that is characteristic of this leukemia subtype. How can this be achieved in the context of NUP98 fusion proteins that do not contain a PHD domain, such as NUP98::NSD1 or NUP98::HOXA9? Please discuss this.
Reviewer #2 (Public review):
In this manuscript, the authors investigate how the oncogenic fusion protein NUP98-KDM5A alters gene expression in leukemia, using a combination of cellular experiments with model and patient cell lines, as well as in vitro studies. Upon transfection of U2OS cells with mEGFP-tagged NUP98-KDM5A, the authors show that the fusion proteins form sub-micrometer puncta, whereas KDM5A alone does not. These foci are also observed at expected native expression levels (using OpenCell data). The tag has an effect here, as switching to an mCherry tag raises the apparent saturation concentration for phase separation. Finally, the authors show via super-resolution imaging that the foci correlate with H3K4me3 distribution.
In vitro, the fusion protein forms amorphous, gel-like condensates at double-digit nanomolar concentrations. Truncation analysis identifies PHD3 of KDM5A as required for maximal phase separation, consistent with the ability of the protein to bind H3K4me3 peptides. Addition of polynucleosomes increases the amount of fusion protein partitioning into the condensate in an H3K4me3-binding-dependent manner. Condensates are gel-like with slow internal dynamics in vitro; in cells, however, the dynamics depend on the position of the EGFP tag (no corresponding experiments with mCherry are shown). Reconstitution with H3K4me3- and H3K4me0-modified arrays shows colocalization with both wild-type NUP98-KDM5A and the binding mutant. Here, H3K4me3 arrays recruit ~20% more protein and yield gel-like structures in a manner dependent on the PTM and on the PHD finger.
In cells, the fusion protein colocalizes with H3K4me3-marked loci, including the HOX clusters, as confirmed by FISH. Finally, re-analysis of published expression datasets from patient cells shows that genes are predominantly upregulated and that the upregulated genes are H3K4me3-marked.
This is a well-executed mechanistic study. The data convincingly establish that NUP98-KDM5A forms sub-micrometer foci at realistic expression levels, that these foci correlate with H3K4me3-marked sites, that the PHD3-H3K4me3 interaction mediates chromatin binding while the NUP98 moiety drives phase separation in vitro, that foci in cells overlap genes heavily decorated with H3K4me3, and that H3K4me3-marked genes are those found to be upregulated in patient datasets. These are important mechanistic findings and of interest to the community.
Still, the functional/causal link is a bit more tentative, as the data is mostly correlative, since it is not directly established that there is feedback between H3K4 methylation, NUP98-KDM5A recruitment, phase separation and target gene overexpression. An experiment that could further bolster this claim would be a direct test of whether NUP98-KDM5A expression drives overexpression of bound genes, e.g. expression of the fusion protein vs PHD- and NUP98-mutant variants, followed by qPCR of target genes, such as the HOX cluster, and possibly H3K4me3 ChIP at the same loci. As all the constructs and cell lines exist, this could be feasible and would substantially strengthen the manuscript.