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- Reviewing EditorTomohiro KurosakiThe University of Osaka, Osaka, Japan
- Senior EditorSatyajit RathNational Institute of Immunology, New Delhi, India
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
Summary:
This manuscript investigates how IRF4 and BLIMP1 coordinate human plasma cell differentiation. Using a stepwise in vitro culture system starting from primary human naïve B cells, the authors define a developmental window enriched for plasma cell precursors and use stage-specific CRISPR/Cas9 perturbation to examine the roles of IRF4 and PRDM1/BLIMP1 during the transition from plasmablast-like precursors to plasma cells. Single-cell transcriptomic analyses suggest that IRF4 acts early to license plasma cell differentiation, whereas BLIMP1 contributes more prominently to consolidation of the terminal plasma cell program. The authors further combine multiome profiling, CUT&RUN, motif modeling, and EMSA assays to propose the sublet nucleotide variation within ISRE/EICE-like motifs contributes to differential or shared binding by IRF4 and BLIMP1.
Overall, this is a carefully performed and conceptually interesting study. It provides a useful experimental platform for dissecting human plasma cell differentiation and offers a mechanistic model for how two closely connected transcription factors can exert distinct and coordinated genomic functions during terminal B cell differentiation.
Strengths:
A major strength of the study is the establishment and detailed characterization of a human in vitro plasma cell differentiation system. The authors combine phenotypic, functional, and single-cell transcriptomic analyses to define the transition from activated B cells to plasmablst/plasma cell precursor-like cells and then to more mature plasma cells. This system is very useful for future perturbation studies of human plasma cell differentiation.
A second strength is the stage-specific perturbation strategy. By targeting IRF4 or PRDM1 at the precursor-enriched stage, the authors avoid some of the interpretive limitations associated with earlier perturbations that would affect B cell activation, proliferation, and plasma cell commitment simultaneously. The distinct phenotypes observed after IRF4 versus PRDM1 perturbation provide support for a model in which these two factors act in a temporally ordered manner.
A third strength is the integration of multiple genomic and biochemical approaches. The combination of single-cell RNA-seq, chromatin accessibility profiling, CUT&RUN, computational motif analysis, and EMSA assays provides a rich dataset and supports the idea that ISRE/EICE sequence variation contributes to differential IRF4 and BLIMP1 occupancy.
Weaknesses:
While the multi-omic approach and computational modeling are highly impressive, several major assumptions regarding the cellular differentiation model and genomic linkages require more rigorous validation.
First, because CRISPR editing was performed on heterogeneous bulk Day 7 cells rather than purified precursor populations, it remains ambiguous whether the observed developmental blocks are truly specific to the prePC window.
Second, given that IRF4 and BLIMP1 operate within a mutually reinforcing positive feedback loop, the phenotypic divergence between IRF4 KO and PRDM1 KO may reflect differences in protein degradation kinetics or hierarchical dominance rather than a strictly ordered "sequential function".
Lastly, the motif-lexicon model is elegant and supported by biochemical DNA-binding assays, but the link between motif variation and gene regulation in cells remains partly correlative. Direct testing of selected regulatory elements would make the causal claim stronger. Alternatively, the authors should temper the language and present the motif lexicon as a predictive model for differential occupancy rather than as a fully demonstrated mechanism of gene regulation.
Reviewer #2 (Public review):
Summary:
The manuscript by Lau et al. investigates the mechanisms underlying IRF4 and BLIMP1 transcriptional activities during antibody-secreting cell fate decision. Both master regulators of plasma cell differentiation, these two transcription factors have distinct targets and non-overlapping roles. The authors used an in vitro culture system to generate antibody-secreting cells from human naïve B cells, and scRNA-seq, Crispr Cas9 editing, and Cut&Run to dissect the molecular mechanisms defining their specificity.
Strengths:
The experiments are overall well executed, and the manuscript is well written. The in vitro culture model appears to generate genuine human antibody-secreting cells. The identification of non-conserved nucleotides within the binding motifs that induce the specific binding of IRF4 or BLIMP1 is convincing, novel, and exciting.
Weaknesses:
The authors need to correct some overstatements and flaws to improve the manuscript.
In Figure 1f, the authors aimed to determine whether in their culture system the plasma cells emerged from the plasmablasts or directly from the activated B cells. First, it is noticeable that the distinction between plasmablasts and plasma cells relies here only on the expression of CD138. It does not include a higher capacity to secrete antibody or their proliferative state. In Figure 1e, the authors could have strengthened their distinction by showing the Ki67 staining at day 21 for both subpopulations. Second, this question does not seem to be related to IRF4 or Blimp1 activity, and thus one could wonder if it is relevant to this study. Finally, and most importantly, the design of the experiment appears flawed to me. The authors sorted cells at day 7 of culture based on their expression of CD20 and put the two subpopulations back for 14 more days. This culture system is a stepwise system, and it is not specified if the CD20+ cells were put back in the day 7 condition or the day 0 condition with the CD40L stimulation. Have both conditions been tested? This experiment also assumes that all B cells have equal potential to differentiate into antibody-secreting cells. What if it is not the case and some are anergic or have committed to the memory B cell fate during the first 7 days? Then the day 7 CD20+ fraction would be enriched in these cells. Moreover, this experiment didn't show that the plasma cell derived from the plasmablasts in the strict sense of the term, as the CD138+CD20- cells could be a mix of proliferative plasmablasts and immature plasma cells.
In Figure 3a and thereafter, the authors claimed that IRF4 acted earlier than BLIMP1, but both deletions strongly affected differentiation at day 7. IRF4 might have a stronger effect, but it does not mean that it had an earlier effect. To substantiate their claim, the authors would need to demonstrate that, at an earlier time point, deletion of IRF4, but not BLIMP1, results in defective differentiation.
In Figure 3b, the authors stated that in each individual KO the expression of the other transcription factor was lower. Given that there were no cells in the gate, it is puzzling to figure out how these expressions were compared.
In Figure 3c, on the UMAP the bottom right part of the activated B cell cluster does not appear to be attributed to any condition. How can it be? Besides, it is highly surprising that at D9 we cannot see any plasmablast on these UMAP, even in the control. Based on the G1/S and G2/M scores, none of the ASC represented were proliferating. Could the authors explain this strong discrepancy with Figure 1?
Another discrepancy exists between Figure 3b and c: Figure 3b depicted no IRF4- or BLIMP1-expressing cells in either KO, so what were the stunted PC and the BLIMP-KO PC reported in Figure 3c? What are the signature genes defining pre-PC and the score depicted in Supplementary Figure 3d, as the materials and methods only state that they are intermediate between PC and B cells? Could the authors show IRF4, BLIMP1 and some of their known target expression in these populations?
The authors claim that BLIMP1 is not needed to initiate the transition from pre-PC to PC, but in Figure 1, the intracellular staining showed that at day 7 the antibody secreting cells already expressed BLIMP1. This would rather suggest that BLIMP1, unlike IRF4, does not need to be maintained once the cell reaches a certain point.