Evolution of an ancient protein function involved in organized multicellularity in animals

Major critiques:

1) The implication that all oriented cell division in animals is due to GK_PID is overstated. Nearly all of the data and cited literature is specific to Drosophila. For instance, in Figure 3B it appears that the PINS of Worm (presumably C. elegans?) doesn't even have the phosphoserine posited to be recognized by GK_PID, although worms obviously orient their spindles. Other pathways have been implicated in oriented cell division. One reviewer notes that, "cell division in early embryos follows Hertwig's rule (i.e. that cells tend to divide along their long access) and it has been argued that Myosin activity is the primary determinant of the division plane in C. elegans neuroblasts. I am unaware of evidence that those two phenomena are primarily caused by GK_PID." Another reviewer notes that, "Even in the Drosophila S2 cell induced cell polarity assay, the function of this complex is mostly studied in the context of TPR-deleted PINS. TPR-deleted PINS cannot bind Mud (NuMA). The PINS/MUD pathway IS highly conserved in multiple phyla. I would be happy if the authors could cite high quality data for a spindle positioning role for KHC73:DLG:PINS in ONE additional phylum other than Arthropoda. There are many papers on the mammalian scribbled polarity complex. Polarity is not the same thing as spindle orientation." We do not expect you to undertake new experiments to test the essentiality of GK_PID for oriented cell division across all animals, but it is absolutely essential to make substantial textual changes to reflect the fact that although current evidence indicates that GK_PID is an important mechanism for spindle orientation in some organisms, neither your data nor the literature currently support it being a universal mechanism in metazoans.

We take this point seriously, because studies of the mechanisms of spindle orientation only scratch the surface of the diversity of animal taxa and cell types within them. We have modified the text in numerous ways to be more cautious on this point and to base our claims more solidly on what is known in the literature. Recent work indicates that the GK_PID complex coordinates spindle orientation not only in Drosophila neuroblasts but also in both mammals and birds and in other cell types, including epithelia from numerous tissues; we have added discussion of these citations to the manuscript. The role of the GK_PID complex in spindle orientation in both protostomes and deuterostomes and in multiple cell types suggests an ancient and general role. However, this does not mean that the role of GK_PID is the universal mediator of spindle orientation in all animal cells: other mechanisms may be important in certain taxonomic lineages and cell types, and we have changed the text to explicitly address these points. We have also discussed the role of other molecules and pathways in spindle orientation.

More generally, we have gone through the text and have changed our wording to dispel the impression that GK_PID complex is the sole driver of spindle orientation in all animals and all cell types and to avoid the implication that the evolution of the GK_PID complex explains all instances of spindle orientation in all animals.

2) The claims about the flagellar basal body serving as the microtubule organizing center in Choanoflagellates seem overstated, particularly as this is a substantially new claim. First, this section should include data about the number of cells analyzed. Second, the following statement seems to be more of a hypothesis than a fully supported claim: "During mitosis, the flagellar basal body duplicates; the daughter bodies migrate symmetrically away from the cell's basal pole and then serve as microtubule organizing centers for assembling the spindle and orienting it perpendicular to the A-B axis, a process that may or may not involve GK_PID. Because this mode of spindle orientation relative to the cellular axis occurs in both colonial and non-colonial S. rosetta cells, it must involve internal marks imposed by the cell's polarity rather than cues from neighboring cells." Unless you are prepared to undertake substantial new experiments to fully demonstrate that the basal bodies are in fact the organizing centers, this statement and similar ones should be dramatically tempered.

We believe that the role of the basal bodies acting as microtubule organizing centers in mitosis is well established in the literature. According to the description of mitosis in Leadbeater’s canonical book in the field, "The flagellar and non-flagellar basal bodies separate, the latter moving towards the cell surface just beneath the plasma membrane. At this stage both basal bodies possess a ring of microtubules […] The two basal bodies move apart and become foci (poles) for the developing mitotic spindle.” (Leadbeater, p. 40, 2015). Leo Buss’ book The Evolution of Individuality also discusses the evidence for this mechanism in detail.

We have added these references to support this point. We have also softened the language claim to make clear that the scenario we propose for the ancient mode of spindle orientation is a hypothesis to be further tested. We also reorganized this section of the text to improve its clarity. As requested, we also included the number of choanoflagellate cells analyzed for both colonial and solitary spindle orientation (12 and 7, respectively).

3) Your work clearly demonstrates that GK_PID evolved the latent capacity to bind PINS long before it appears to have actually been paired with a PINS that it could bind. We do not think this is an artifact, as your ancestral reconstruction samples broadly across species and the result is robust to the reconstruction – so this somewhat puzzling finding does appear to be true. It may be impossible to explain exactly why this occurred, but more discussion of this conundrum is warranted. Why should the ancestral and Choanoflagellate GK_PID bind a Drosophila PINS but not the PINS in that same organism? This question is going to come up in the mind of every reader, so your best guesses at plausible explanations would be helpful.

We agree that this is puzzling. We have addressed this point briefly in the text, acknowledging the surprising nature of the result and suggesting the possibility is that the surface of GK-_PID that fortuitously binds Drosophila Pins might be used to bind another structurally similar ligand, possibly an ancient one. Because whatever we say here would be very speculative, we did not go into much detail on this point.

Minor comments: The authors write: "[…] for the evolution of a new protein function crucial to the emergence of animal multicellularity." While GK_PID is certainly very important in at least some modern animals, that does not mean that it is important for the "emergence" of animal multicellularity. This statement should be clarified, qualified, or removed.

We agree and have rewritten this paragraph.

The author's write: "[…] Spindle orientation itself is not a metazoan novelty; indeed, most eukaryotes orient the mitotic spindle, but most appear to do so relative to the cell's internal structure." It's also true that in many metazoan cell divisions the spindle is responding to "the cell's internal structure". Indeed, in many contexts that internal structure may be the distribution of GK_PID proteins. Of course, that distribution may be controlled by external signals.

This is certainly true. We have attempted to be more precise by revising our statement to read: "Spindle orientation itself is not a metazoan novelty; indeed, most eukaryotes – even unicellular ones – orient the mitotic spindle, but most appear to do so relative to the cell’s internal structure alone rather than in response to cues from adjacent cells."

The authors write: "Orientation of the mitotic spindle relative to an externally induced molecular mark was an essential novelty in the evolution of animals and the emergence of a higher level of biological organization – the multicellular individual". What is their evidence that there are no single-celled Eukaryotes that orient their spindle relative to external cues? One could certainly imagine some single-cell organisms might orient their spindle based on environmental cues. The authors should remove or better justify their statement that this is "an essential novelty".

We have removed the sentence to which the reviewer objected and have emphasized instead that cues from adjacent cells per se – rather than external cues more generally – are important for tissue organization in animals. We have also avoided calling this phenomenon a novelty.

It might be helpful to include a brief discussion of the orientation of cell division in plants, which are multicellular organisms that do not use GK_PID.

We have changed the text to acknowledge that multicellularity evolved repeatedly in different lineages and that key cellular functions typically have different underlying mechanisms. We did not go into detail about the specific mechanisms of spindle orientation in plants, in the interest of keeping the paper concise.

The actual sequence of the PINS peptide used in anisotropy assays is not given anywhere; how does it relate to those in Figure 3B? This is actually very important to clarify.

We have provided this sequence in the Methods section, and we say explicitly that it is the peptide from D. melanogaster.

The amino acid sequences of the GK domains used in biochemical experiments should be given.

These sequences have been deposited in GenBank; we added the identifiers to manuscript in the Methods section. The sequences are also found in Figure 1—figure supplement 1 and Figure 1—figure supplement 2.

Since all the GK proteins were purified by gel filtration, showing the purity and gel filtration profiles of all the GK domains purified as Figure supplements would be appropriate. Aggregated protein would be one artifactual reason for binding PINS linker peptide in anisotropy assays while having no guanylyl kinase activity.

As noted in the Methods section, all the GK proteins eluted in size exclusion chromatography at volumes consistent with the molecular weight of a monomer. Unfortunately, we did not save the chromatograms from the gel filtration runs to include them in the supplementary material.

A clearer description of the reconstruction of DLG's used in the S2 cell assay would be helpful.

We have clarified which Dlg constructs were used in the S2 cell assay in the figure legend of the revised manuscript and in the Methods. The sequences of the GKPIDs used were the same as those used in the other assays; we have clarified this point.

Is it really necessary to introduce the acronym of APR for ancestral protein reconstruction? There are already a lot of gene name acronyms.

We agree and have spelled the phrase out.

Does the choanoflagellate PINS have the putative phospho-serine 436?

No, it does not. This is included in Figure 3.