CtBP impedes JNK- and Upd/STAT-driven cell fate misspecifications in regenerating Drosophila imaginal discs

Reviewing Editor's comments:

All three reviewers appreciated the approaches used in this paper, and its content. However reviewer #1 felt that the paper was much too long and had many inconclusive sections that could be condensed or removed. In discussions, the other reviewers agreed with this perspective.

Reviewer #3 also felt that the paper should have delivered more mechanistic insight as to how CtBP affects transdetermination, but we understand that providing this could be challenging and time-consuming, and so we decided that it is not required at this stage. Hence we would like to invite you to submit a revised manuscript that is significantly shorter than the current version (30-50%) and more linear in presentation. Specific suggestions for how to do this can be found in the reviews, which I include below essentially in their entirety.

Thank you for the opportunity to revise the manuscript. We have rewritten the manuscript completely. The Introduction and Results and Discussion section is now 30% shorter. Importantly we feel that the logical flow is much improved. We took three months (rather than the two months you suggested) because some of the additional experiments took a bit longer (One generation in our ablation/regeneration system takes 22-25 days).

In addition, the points #4 and #6 from reviewer 1 merit special consideration – if you can provide further data addressing these points this would be much appreciated. At the very least, a clear discussion of the action of egr is needed. The reviewers also had a number of minor comments regarding controls, clarification of methods and interpretation of the results, which you should address in your revision. Overall we agreed that the paper was sufficiently developed and could be published without large amounts of additional data, provided the delivery is succinct and clear. eLife looks forward to receiving your revision.

We have included additional data on the action of eiger (as detailed in responses below to specific reviewer comments).

Reviewer #1:

In this paper, Worley, Alexander, and Hariharan revisit the phenomenon of damage-initiated trans-determination in Drosophila wing imaginal discs, using new genetic methods to identify the genes involved. This is an interesting process with potentially broad relevance, but little progress has been made on it in years. The authors present a very nice genetic saturation screen of the third chromosome (~40% of the genome) that identifies many genes potentially involved. Then they focus on one gene, CtBP at 87D, and show how this affects transdetermination of notum cells to wing pouch cells. The process involves JNK and STAT activation (as expected) at the wound site, is multi clonal, and involves the activation of a number of other genes that are tracked. The effects of these genes are are clearly demonstrated, but the paper falls short of determining any clear mechanisms at the molecular level.

This manuscript starts out nicely with one of the best introductions on the subject of transdetermination that I've read, and succinct descriptions of the damage protocol (already detailed in a previous publication) and the modifier screen, which is clever and effective (Figure 1). The effect of CtBP is clear, but it was not obvious why the authors focused on this one gene, and this should be stated. Following this nice entry, the paper details a huge number of genetic tests of mechanism in the subsequent 7 figures and 15 pages of meandering text. The specific tests that were done are all logical, and the results are interpreted in a critical fashion, but unfortunately they don't come together in a very readable, coherent form. Although the effects of egr, Ap1, Stat, etc are clear, the authors don't succeed in demonstrating how these factors work together very well, and some obvious questions are left unresolved (see below). In addition, many tests that were relatively inconclusive are presented, as well as quite a few negative results and dead ends. Many paragraphs in the Results section don't have a conclusion at all. Overall the Results section meanders from one issue to the next, with too much discussion, and no obvious direction. It is far too long. It seems to be a very raw draft of a large body of work, essentially un-refined, and it really should be re-written in a much more concise, linear format to be digestible by a general audience. Much of what is here could probably be presented much more simply, or just omitted, without affecting the paper's final conclusions. I suggest trying to pare it down to about half the current length. While I think the core content of this paper is valuable and should be published, I cannot recommend it in its current form. Specific points follow below:

We have put a lot of effort in re-writing the manuscript. It is much shorter, and we think it now has a clear logical flow. We have removed sections that add little to our final conclusions.

1) There is a long section about the Rga locus but then this locus is never mentioned again. What is it's map location? What is it's relevance to the paper's overall conclusion? This locus justifies the screen, but if it is not relevant to the paper's conclusions the section devoted to it should be removed. The paper contains several other examples of discussion of this sort of irrelevant, distracting data.

We have removed the section on the Rga locus since it is not particularly relevant to the overall conclusions of our study.

2) The authors should note why they focused on region 87D after doing the screen. Further discussion of other loci that strongly affected transdetermination could enhance this paper, if the genes involved are known. Nevertheless, it is very nice that the authors include the complete results of their very elegant screen (Figure 1I, Supplementary file 1).

The reason we focused on 87D was because this is the only region thus far, where we have been able to unambiguously identify the gene within the deletion, that when mutated, robustly enhanced the frequency of notum-to-pouch fate change. We did include all the data from our deficiency screen so others could use our data to explore candidate genes if they wish.

3) The long paragraph in subsection “Re-specifying cell fates requires the activation of the JNK/AP-1 pathway” is an example of a discussion of results that meanders and has no conclusion.

We have eliminated this and other similar paragraphs.

4) There are quite a few experiments that address the requirements of egr, Jnk, and apoptosis in promoting transdetermination, and much discussion about this. However the paper doesn't seem to have a clear conclusion about whether egr triggers transdetermination via JNK-mediated AP1 activation, or JNK-mediated apoptosis, or both. Egr is clearly sufficient, and JNK required but not sufficient, and apoptosis is not sufficient, but it's not clear what, downstream of egr, is doing it. Is apoptosis required? I think a few more experiments are required here, and a cleaner more definitive conclusion is needed about which downstream targets of egr are critical.

We have included additional data that address these issues. Our experiments show that apoptosis of the pouch, in itself does not promote the notum-to-pouch transformation. Ablation with reaper does not cause ectopic pouch formation nor does hastening death by co-expressing eiger and reaper. Our data suggest that cells with high levels of AP-1 activation, express target genes such as unpaired-family genes and dilp8 which contribute to the fate change. We also show that strictly cell autonomous activation of Eiger signaling in the pouch does not suffice. It is possible that this is because cells in the hinge are more capable of expressing high levels of Upd-family proteins than cells in the pouch and do so when they are exposed to Eiger.

5) The effects on dILP8 expression are interesting and suggestive (“dilp8 expression in a secondary location is predictive of ectopic wing pouch formation”), but dILP8 function is not tested. It would be a nice addition to the paper if the role of dILP8 were tested using mutants, RNAi, and overexpression.

Thank you for this suggestion. We have included additional data that show that reducing dilp8 function reduces the frequency of ectopic pouches and increasing dilp8 expression increases the frequency.

6) Upd ligand production, in response to egr, or Ap1, or apoptosis directly, seems to be an important aspect of the authors proposed mechanism (Figure 8Q, and Results). However they don't seem to have tested the requirement functionally, except by Upd1 overexpression and in Stat+/- mutants. There are upd2, upd3, and upd2,3 deletion lines that are viable and could be used to test the requirement of these damage-dependent ligands.

We have now included these experiments. The upd 2,3 deletion dominantly reduces the frequency of ectopic pouches and this effect is overcome by co-expression of upd1. These experiments show that upd 2 and 3 are necessary for ectopic pouch formation and that the different upd family members can function interchangeably in this situation. This strengthens our argument that signaling from the damaged wing pouch to the notum is important for triggering this fate change.

Reviewer #2:

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Specific Comments:

1) Figure 4K. Since temperature shift and genetic background affect the frequency of ectopic wings, in order to conclude that "expression of >egr in the wing pouch is the major cause of generating ectopic wings", the authors also need to test the R15B03-, R76A01-, and dpp-Gal4 drivers using the same temperature shift protocol.

We conducted these experiments with tub-GAL80^ts and the same temperature shift protocol. We did not observe ectopic wings. The data are shown in (Figure 5—figure supplement 3).

2) Scale bar is missing in some figures.

We have added scale bars to all of the main figures and to most of the figure supplements.

3) Since the clean genetic background did not produce ectopic wings in rn^ts>egr, the description at the beginning part of the manuscript is misleading. This information should be included in the Abstract.

We have changed the relevant sentence in the Abstract to be more specific:

“As a result of this screen, we found that reducing function of the transcriptional co-repressor C-terminal Binding Protein (CtBP) results in an increased frequency of inappropriate changes in cell fate.”

has been changed to

“As a result of this screen, we found that reducing function of the transcriptional co-repressor C-terminal Binding Protein (CtBP) results in inappropriate changes in cell fate, which are not observed in wild type.”

4) rn^ts control is needed for Figure 2—figure supplement 1A.

We have added the non-ablated controls in Figure 2 and Figure 2—figure supplement 1A.

5) G-trace with low- and high-flp needs to be better described in the text/(Figure 3—figure supplement 1).

We have re-written this portion of the text to be clearer.

6) Figure 8A-H, MMP1-lacZ is robustly upregulated in CtBP homozygous mutant clones, whereas, AP-1-GFP is only found in a few cells of CtBP mutant clones. What causes the dramatic difference of these two JNK signaling reporters upon CtBP loss?

We have consistently observed a “boundary effect” with the AP-1-GFP reporter, which we also observe with dilp8-GFP. We have no good explanation for this phenomenon. The MMP1-lacZ reporter appears to have a basal level of expression levels throughout the disc, and may also contain an enhancer that is more responsive to the loss of CtBP. Note that we do not detect MMP1 protein in CtBP-/- mutant clones and therefore the MMP1-lacZ reporter is active but not the endogenous gene. In addition, MMP1-lacZ reporter expression was detected with an antibody, which may detect β-GAL produced over a longer time window, while both AP-1-GFP and dilp8-GFP were observed without an antibody. This could account for some of the differences.