The Mars1 kinase confers photoprotection through signaling in the chloroplast unfolded protein response

Thank you for submitting your article "The Mars1 kinase confers photoprotection through signaling in the chloroplast unfolded protein response" for consideration by eLife. Your article has been reviewed by three peer reviewers, and the evaluation has been overseen by a Reviewing Editor and Christian Hardtke as the Senior Editor.

The reviewers have discussed the reviews with one another and the Reviewing Editor has drafted this decision to help you prepare a revised submission.

The reviewers were largely positive about your work and appreciated your elegant forward genetic approach in order to identify novel molecular players involved in cpUPR. However, they also identified some shortcomings that need to be addressed.

Essential revisions:

1) The title of your manuscript claims that MARS confers photoprotection, however, photosynthetic parameters were not presented. The reviewers ask you to either balance your discussion or to substantiate your claims by including photosynthetic parameters of wt and mars1 mutants under stress.

2) The reviewers also pinpointed the paper lack of experimental evidences for kinase activity and signalling transduction function of MARS1. Please either provide additional evidences or adjust the manuscript.

3) Your data suggests that MARS1 is involved in cpUPR, but it would be nice to discuss whether it could have additional, cpUPR-independent roles.

Please see below the additional comments of the reviewers, which may guide you to further strengthen your manuscript.

Reviewer #1:

This manuscript, to my knowledge, identifies and describes the first known component of the "chloroplast unfolded protein response" (cpUPR), a chloroplast to nucleus retrograde signaling pathway in the alga Chlamydomonas reinhardtii. Proteins often enter organellar compartments (i.e. ER, mitochondria and chloroplasts) in an unfolded state and must then be folded very quickly to avoid protein aggregation and cellular damage as a consequence. To prevent this type of damage from happening in chloroplasts cpUPR can be elicited. Stress such as excessive light can trigger cpUPR that will upregulate expression of nuclear-encoded chaperones, proteases and other factors aiding protein homeostasis. This manuscript describes an elegant high-throughput genetic screen (based on a riboswitch to turn off the chloroplast ClpP1 protease and activate cpUPR) in the Chlamydomonas reinhardtii algal model system to identify components of the signaling pathway that relays proteotoxic signals emanating from the chloroplast to the nucleus. The screen identifies the cytoplasmic kinase MARS1 (mutant affected in chloroplast-to-nucleus retrograde signaling). In addition, a dominant active allele of MARS1 is shown to constitutively induce cpUPR and alleviate photooxidative stress. The authors suggest that the pathway could be engineered in photosynthetic organisms to increase tolerance to chloroplast stress.

This is a very original manuscript that would cater well to a wide interest audience of eLife. The claims of the paper are well supported by a wealth of data often obtained using state of the art techniques. Furthermore, the paper is expertly written and the figures are of excellent quality.

Regarding MARS1 cellular localization: from the Results and Discussion section, Figure 3 and Figure 3—figure supplement 2A it was difficult to figure out the nature of MARS1-A (as well as -B, -C, -D). Could this be improved? Is it really necessary to mention the existence of a potential N-terminal chloroplast targeting signal if ATg(ii) would be the start codon? This was also somewhat unclear to me initially.

Stress in chloroplasts typically affects photosynthesis and this appears to be the case here as mars1 cells lacked photoprotection and exhibited accelerated photobleaching under highlight. It would therefore be really interesting to know whether and how photosynthetic parameters are affected by cpUPR and in the mars1 mutant. I'd consider such data standard in this type of study.

The discovery of MARS1 is exciting. It would be very nice to hear more about the authors' hypotheses on the mechanisms of MARS1-dependent signal transduction.

Reviewer #2:

This manuscript follows up on previous work performed by the corresponding author Ramundo that investigated how unfolded proteins in the chloroplast can be a retrograde stress signal in the green algae Chlamydomonas. Here, the authors attempt to identify signaling components of such a pathway by performing a clever and novel genetic screen in the same algae. They have constructed a strain with vitamin-inducible unfolded protein stress in the chloroplast and added a reporter construct with the YFP gene driven by the promoter of VIPP2, which is strongly induced by this particular retrograde signal. With this strain, they screened for mutants that failed to express YFP during the chloroplast unfolded protein response. Such mutants may be defective in their ability to send retrograde signals from stressed chloroplasts. Two true mutants were retrieved by the screen and both were alleles of MARS1, which encodes an uncharacterized cytoplasmic-localized kinase . The authors show that its kinase activity is required for the signals, and whole transcriptome analyses of Chlamydomonas show that this kinase is necessary to regulate about half of the genes controlled by the unfolded chloroplast protein response. Importantly, the authors show that the MARS1 mutant cells are also sensitive to excess light and chloroplast hydrogen peroxide, demonstrating that the Mars1 protein is likely part of a physiologically relevant stress signal.

Altogether, this is very nicely performed work that should be of general interest to those in the field of abiotic stress signaling and organelles biology. I do however, think the manuscript feels a bit too compressed in parts and there are sections that could benefit from additional information, analysis, and detail (please see below).

Questions for the authors:

1) Can more information be provided about the Mars1 protein? What kind of domains does it have? Is it conserved among algae or plants? Are there any paralogues? etc. Are there any available bioinformatics data about expression at the transcript or protein level? Can any of this information provide clues to its function, localization, or evolutionary history?

2) For the complementation analysis, was flag-tagged Mars1 protein used? If so, this was not at all clear in the text. Again, more detail in the text will help to guide the reader through the manuscript.

3) The explanation of the localization studies were too brief. Please take the time to explain the experiment and how the conclusions were drawn. Also, was localization also tested under stress conditions? Perhaps MARS1 is mobile or uses alternative start sites.

Reviewer #3:

This manuscript provides novel information on a gene related to a signal transduction pathway for a so-called chloroplast unfolded protein response (cpUPR). The authors constructed an elegant reporter system for screening mutants that had defects in inducing VIPP2 promoter activity upon suppression of the ClpP1 protease in the chloroplast of Chlamydomonas. Two mutants thus obtained were characterized in detail. In the case of the first mutant (mars1-1), a previously uncharacterized Ser/Thr kinase (Cre16.g692228) that they named Mars1 in this study was disrupted. Another mutant (mars1-2) also had a deletion encompassing MARS1. All mutants including two additional mutants from the CLiP library showed a similar phenotype. Moreover, they confirmed the lack of Mars1 transcript expression in the mutants and the phenotypic rescue of the mutants by the cDNA. The mars1 phenotype was sensitive to a mutation in a possible Ser/Thr kinase domain. The mars1 mutant did not express Vipp2 and Hsp22E/F and bleached under HL or under normal light in the presence of metronidazole. The mutants affected the expression of many high light-inducible genes, which seem to belong to a distinct cluster from that previously reported as NPQ related functions. Based on these results, the authors propose that a retrograde signal from the chloroplast activates the cytoplasmic kinase Mars1 upon chloroplast proteotoxic stress, which in turn orchestrates the cpUPR transcriptional program.

The experiments here were carefully performed, the presentations are mostly clear, and the methods are meticulously described. This is a solid study of a new possibly interesting kinase. On the whole, however, I got the impression that the research is just premature. I have a suggestion if this manuscript is eventually published in eLife.

The nature of proteotoxic stress studies here should be more clarified.

As shown by the result, this cpUPR event led by Mars1 was not affected by tunicamycin, indicating it is independent of the stress due to the accumulation of premature proteins (UPR). The authors found it was promoted by either suppression of ClpP1 or HL stress in the chloroplast, suggesting cpUPR is rather dependent on the stress due to the accumulation of degraded proteins in the chloroplast. The two types of stress seem to be fundamentally distinct. In fact, if the current result is showing a mechanical relationship between UPR and cpUPR, that could be of broader interest. If the Mars1-dependent genes were involved in cpUPR, they would be induced under the conditions when ClpP1 was OFF and HL was illuminated. However, there were 43 Mars1-dependent genes among HL inducible genes including SIR, CHLM, DSS1, etc. that were not expressed under ClpP1 OFF conditions (Figure 5C). How to explain this?

The authors are encouraged to fill the fatal link between the proteotoxic stress and Mars1-dependent phosphorylation, preferably by determining the retrograde signal and/or the partner of the Mar1 kinase.