Acidic pH and divalent cation sensing by PhoQ are dispensable for systemic salmonellae virulence

1) A major part of the paper depends on the claim that PhoQ^W104C-A128C is insensitive to acid pH and divalent cations and sensitive to CAMPs. However, the only evidence is based on a single phoN reporter (Figure 4). Given the importance of this property of the PhoQ mutant for the rest of the paper, a little more evidence should be presented to support the claim. Similar data showing that pH and divalent cations do not affect PhoQ-dependent transcription (but CAMPs do) for phoP and some other well studied gene should be shown.

To provide further evidence that PhoQ^W104C-A128 is inhibited for activation by acidic pH and divalent cation limitation, but remains responsive to CAMP, qRT-PCR was performed on the PhoQ-dependent transcripts pagD, pagO, phoN, and phoP from bacteria grown in various activating N-minimal media conditions. Similar to the phoN::TnphoA reporter, the PhoQ-dependent transcripts analyzed displayed decreased transcription in the phoQ^W104C-A128C background when exposed to acidic pH and divalent cation limitation, but CAMP-mediated transcription was similar to wild type. Although pagD, pagO, and phoN are highly upregulated in a PhoQ-dependent manner, in our hands, phoP transcription displayed only slight to moderate induction. We have included these qRT-PCR results in the subsection “A disulfide bond between α-helices 2 & 4 within the PhoQ PD inhibits activation by acidic pH and divalent cation limitation, but does not restrict activation by CAMP” and as Figure 3–figure supplement 2.

2) CAMP directly competes with divalent cation for binding sites in the PhoQ PD acidic patch, suggesting a model that the CAMP activates PhoQ by disrupting salt-bridges with the inner membrane. If the CAMP functions through a similar mechanism as the divalent cation in inducing the conformational changes of PhoQ (Figure 7), why the PhoQ^W104C-A128C mutant that lost the response to divalent cation limitation can still respond to the CAMP. The authors should clarify this in their presentation.

The observations that PhoQ^W104C-A128C responds to CAMP and not divalent cation limitation suggests that disruption of salt-bridges between the PD and the inner membrane may not be the entire mechanism by which CAMP activates PhoQ. Furthermore, our findings are not mutually exclusive from those of Bader et al. 2005. Perhaps CAMP activates PhoQ in a series of steps beginning with the displacement of divalent cations at the acidic patch, followed by interactions with the adjacent periplasmic domain or transmembrane regions or disruption of local phospholipid packing. Further investigation will be required to determine the mechanism by which CAMP activates PhoQ. We have clarified this in the Discussion by suggesting possible mechanisms by which CAMP activates PhoQ.

3) The PhoQ PD can directly interact with the CAMP via the acidic patch (Bader 2005). Is it possible to measure the binding constant and kinetics? If so, the PhoQ^W104C-A128C mutant should exhibit a different behavior, for example on an ITC binding assay, due to its restricted motion in α4/α5 structure. Related to the potential mechanism of PhoQ PD sensing of the CAMP, the authors should mention whether there is a functional PhoQ mutant deficient in responding to the CAMP that they are aware of (what about the 14 mutants shown in Figure 1A?).

We are unclear why the reviewers wanted us to compare the CAMP binding affinities of wild type and PhoQ^W104C-A128C. We have previously measured cationic peptide binding to the purified periplasmic domain and are not sure why we would reevaluate this given our observation that CAMP activates wild type and phoQ^W104C-A128C similarly, suggesting that the binding interactions are roughly equivalent. Additionally, the known CAMP and divalent cation binding sites in the acidic patch were not significantly altered in the PhoQ^W104C-A128C PD structure. Measuring CAMP binding affinity of wild type and PhoQ^W104C-A128C should ideally be performed in the context of a membrane, as soluble domains may not necessarily reflect physiological binding interactions. Such experiments seem outside the scope of this study, would be difficult to develop and perform, and would delay timely publication and dissemination of our results to interested investigators.

We have not identified a mutation that exclusively abolishes PhoQ activation by CAMP without perturbing the response to acidic pH and/or divalent cation limitation. Bader et al. 2005 defined a mutation in the acidic patch (T156K E184K) that reduces PhoQ activation by CAMP; however, recent reevaluation has revealed that this mutant also displays perturbed activation by divalent cation limitation, which was expected since it forms a metal binding site (unpublished observations). Extensive point-mutations in the PhoQ PD acidic patch can lead to reduced activation by CAMP, but activation by acidic pH and divalent cation limitation are also perturbed (unpublished observations). Further significant investigation is required to elucidate the mechanism by which CAMP activates PhoQ.

4) In the Discussion, it is stated: “Further experiments will need to be performed to examine the contribution of acidic pH and divalent cation sensing to PhoQ-mediated bacterial survival during transition from the intestinal tract to systemic environments and determine if ‘bacterial innate immunity’ or the recognition of multiple mammalian signals is redundant.” The authors should test their PhoQ mutant in competition with wild-type in oral infection of mice. Either outcome (WT outcompetes the mutant or they have the same CI) would be interesting, and this experiment is important for conveying the full significance of the authors’ work and should be straightforward to do.

A competition between wild type and phoQ^W104C-A128C via oral infection was a great suggestion and provides broader significance to our findings. As requested, peroral competition infections in BALB/c mice were performed similar to our intraperitoneal competition infections to determine whether acidic pH and/or divalent cation sensing by PhoQ is important in host sites prior to systemic spread. Although more variable due to the nature of the experiment, we observed competitive indices between wt/wt and wt/phoQ^W104C-A128 in the spleen similar to the IP competitions. ΔphoQ had a lower mean competitive index, as expected. These results suggest that acidic pH and divalent cation sensing by PhoQ are not required for S. enterica Typhimurium virulence via an oral infection route. Data concerning our PO competitions is presented in the Results section (subsection headed “Salmonella strains with the phoQ^W104C-A128C allele are competent for survival during systemic virulence in mice and within cultured macrophage”) and in Figure 5–figure supplement 1.